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Thanks! I hope they're still enjoying sloshing around in the mud after all this time.
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I wonder what else she might tear off...
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I will tell you... on page seven!
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fantastic work as always. Love this story line, only way I think it could be better was if it was with Dixie and Anesthesia instead.
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This is going to be an awfully long story. Anesthesia will make her first appearance toward the end of this scene. Dixie will be prominently featured in the next chapter.
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Candy's facial expression in panel three is especially nice.
I personally would probably add an exclamation point to her 'oof' in the last panel? It seems a bit weak-sounded at the moment, IMO.
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But I already have two exclamation marks on this page! TWO! Anyway, it's a weak "oof". I like her face in that panel, too. I'm not paying much attention to my original models anymore. By page ten they'll probably look nothing like this.
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Overall, a pretty good page.
I'm interested to see what happens by page ten now.
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Page ten will be... let's see if I can remember... I think that is going to feature Muriel starting to make Candy hurt in ways she never dreamed of.
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I hope so. I haven't even decided exactly what she's going to do, but she'll definitely be looking to put Candy out of commission fast and hard.
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And an annoying lecture while it's happening, too.
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Salt in the wound, Miss Spencer style!
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Funny, I thought she was a teacher, not a chef.
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She is domina; she can do it all.
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She's a teacher, a chef, a private eye, a celebrity pharmacist, and a swimsuit model, all in one!
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Does she keep some Chinese stars under the bed with a length of pipe?
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You're damn right she does.
Spencer is so dangeresque, y'know?
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Cool glasses, cool glasses!
I still can't think of a title for this comic. I think the key will be figuring out how exactly I'm going to intertwine Muriel and Anesthesia; that relationship more than the Spencer/Candy one will give me my main theme and title.
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I'm sure you'll think of it eventually. Just gotta get further into things.
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In the meantime, I've just made a bad gray doodle I think I'll send your way.
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It's okay; I didn't do any thinking out of her face, so that's something I'll need to work out... and abandon after a couple pages in favor of whatever it evolves into as she gives bunny Muriel a hard time.
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The face is the main thing I noticed with her that was off.
Her arms seem a little weird too, but like you said, it's just a doodle.
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I'll probably end up making her meaner. She'll be knocking poor Spencer around for a bit.
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I thought not! And I plan to get that stupid tickle stick in there, though it won't be used for tickling.
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I like Dixie in all her forms, whether a friendly Southern belle, or a mean-as-a-rattlesnake bitch who beats the crap out of her enemies.
And oh ho? Just what do you have planned for the dumb thing?
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Since this story is set right at the beginning of everything, with none of the girls knowing each other (other than those they are traditionally linked with, like Spencer and Candy), I won't have the normal relationships I would fall back on. One of my favorite platonic pairings is Dixie and Spencer, though if they want to get romantic I can get behind that too; in my mind they share a level of maturity beyond most of the other girls, so they would have a mutual respect a little above pure athleticism. But my use of that dynamic is when they kinda know each other already. This scene between them is their first meeting, and as opponents, so Dixie is gonna be tough as nails and probably close to rattlesnake bitch. After all, we are concerned with Spencer's point of view here, and EVERYTHING is against her in this scene.
The tickle stick will be introduced into play by a shady audience member in Anesthesia's employ. It'll be used more as a spanking and pushing instrument, and will represent the final humiliation that is just too much for Spencer to take. She will then rebound and show what her considerable technical ability is capable of when she gets mad. In the following chapter she will erupt again, for ostensibly a noble purpose, but it will also make her somewhat dangerous, hinting at the darker passions so carefully bottled up.
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As fond as I am of the Dixie/Spencer pairing, I don't think you'll have room for it in an already crowded story, will you?
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No, this is the only scene I have Dixie currently planned for. I don't think she is likely to be an ally to Candy Cane against Mistress or Anesthesia, so there is nothing else for her to do in the comic other than be a tough opponent for bunny Muriel.
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Alas. I'll just have to enjoy her sole moment in the spotlight as much as I can, then~!
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That scene will be longer than the mud scene, I think, so she'll be struttin' her stuff for at least 10-12 pages.
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