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I wrote a cute lil cheesy-as-all-hell oneshot to go with this but I decided to be evil and leave it up to your imaginations
=3 I hate rain! I can never do it right >.> -sighs-
WHEEEEE~ I feel random!! -needs sleep-
Love you guys
Art: It's all Muse-chan today!!
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Chi-chi-95 [2010-05-19 03:27:31 +0000 UTC]
"It was a rainy day after school. Kaito and Aoko were walking side-by-side through the wet. It seemed to Kaito as if she had something on her mind.
'Aoko?' he asked, and her head jerked up.
'Yea?'
'Is there something you want to ask me?' with a grin he pulled out a rose. Aoko laughed and Kaito felt warm despite the cold, drenching rain.
'Not really...'
They continued to walk.
'Actually, Kaito...' the pair stopped. Their eyes met and both looked away. 'Kaito...hypothetically speaking...if I ever said I liked you...I mean, liked liked you....how would you react?'
Kaito could see the blush spreading on her cheeks. He felt it spread over his cheeks too.
'Would you say you liked me too?' she was avoiding his eyes. 'Would you...'
He didn't need to hear the next word. Suddenly he felt his mood change and with a swift movement, his hand was on her cheek.
'I would say....don't ever question it,' and he kissed her. He didn't realize he had untill it was over.
They both blushed and contiued on their way."
Ummmmm.....that took me like five seconds and I'm sure both are outta character and the dialouge doesn't fit right. I didn't even use " for speaking, which tottally annoys me! Pluse I bet the dialouge doesn't flow right.
And Aoko would never say/do that.
Ugh.
Lolz that was fun tho :3 ur pic is super cute btw!
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Chi-chi-95 [2010-05-19 03:15:39 +0000 UTC]
I MAY just have to write a coupla paraghraphs for this so I can read what you wrote XD just wait a bit and I'll post it here in a commet :3
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FishHeadThe3rdAndCo In reply to aidmoon [2008-06-19 16:47:40 +0000 UTC]
Hontou?! Yatta!!
Thankies~
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xXami-chanXx [2008-06-13 10:53:59 +0000 UTC]
Pretty!!!~
For a story...
"I'm ugly, so you'll never love me anyway!"
Aoko runs under the rain. Kaito catches up.
"It's not true, you're beautiful."
"Don't lie!"
Kaito looks at her with THE EYES (you know, those that make you drool over him, when he's all serious )
"Don't ever question it".
And then a kiss (obviously)
And they lived happily ever after (though the mop was quite deadly from time to time )
Still one story to go and then you'll have to post it
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FishHeadThe3rdAndCo In reply to xXami-chanXx [2008-06-19 16:49:30 +0000 UTC]
Kawaii-desu
Lol, Hannah-chan says she'll write the last one... she's just procrastinating
lol. -shoot, I may actaully have to post my lil cheesy thingy XD- *ish ashamed at how terrible she is at cheesy writing*
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xXami-chanXx In reply to FishHeadThe3rdAndCo [2008-06-19 21:05:32 +0000 UTC]
*ish waiting for a terrible chessy writing because she luvs it* XDD I love your cheesy writing, personally (though cracks are most probably the thing you're best at ^^)
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FishHeadThe3rdAndCo In reply to xXami-chanXx [2008-06-23 04:38:44 +0000 UTC]
Aww
! You're definately right about the crackiness though...
lol.
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Hannah-kun [2008-06-13 10:26:09 +0000 UTC]
XD
I'll write mine when I come back from school. Brain's too fried right now to write anything =B
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FishHeadThe3rdAndCo In reply to Hannah-kun [2008-06-19 16:50:25 +0000 UTC]
lol, I look forward to it
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xXSupertailsXx [2008-06-13 09:06:08 +0000 UTC]
"But....but how could you ever love me after what I did?"
"Hey, don't be like that. I'll always love you."
"But-"
"Don't ever question it."
Then they'd kiss. And most likely next would be a smex scene. =3
Awesome, anyway! I'm a writer, so I couldn't resist the temptation to write a cheesy love thingy. XD
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FishHeadThe3rdAndCo In reply to xXSupertailsXx [2008-06-19 17:00:19 +0000 UTC]
o.o lol Cute an' cheesy
just what I asked for
lol, thankies~
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