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Flamekin2 — Cybernetic Conversion part 19
Published: 2011-09-03 01:59:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 36136; Favourites: 176; Downloads: 342
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And this is what I loved.
Reminds me how the original MLP fic 'Conversion Bureau' wasn't an anti-humanity mess, but a attempt at SUBVERTING grim dark, but recursives turned the ponies into monsters, delusional templars, or being under mind control.
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I kinda wish the original mod creator had THINNED down the 'manacles'...They're just TOO heavy-looking.
Those pieces & the 'stainless steel skirts' hurt the general design, IMHO.
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Those aren't manacles, they're parts of their bodies.
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Not sure I agree.
In Flamekin's story (above), the 'manacles' only materialize after the Main TF Computer goes to work creating the 'standard outfit' for Ellie (and then Adam/Alexis)...(Pg/Pt 11 & 17)
When their bodies are fully converted (Pg. 10 & 16), the copy seems to imply that they are fully complete, aside from the required upload of the new OS. The helmet materializes on their heads during the TF/TG at this point, most likely because their new memory setup NEEDS immediate/constant protection for whatever reason. It's probably not TECHNICALLY part of the Gynoidian body, but it's the first, most important add-on.
(But...that's a Vulcan's two quatloos...We'd need Flamekin to give us definitives, since he's the Creator of this Uni... 
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I still love this sequence! There's so much that can be done with it! If only you had a more diverse collection of models!
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Just look at them! Next I imagine the beautiful robot girl apocalypse!
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I feel this sequence could use a page 18.5 That's just my opinion.
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The only real sad part is the implication that these machines don't care about each other.
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Don't worry, they do. Robots have feelings too!
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The SAD part I guess is then that these two don't remember they were a couple and likely aren't going to see each other again.
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Mhm. That's why I said it's darker than usual.
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Okay granted. But it's more implied than anything else, since I don't get the feeling across well enough that they're suddenly strangers.
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Who knows, maybe they spend time together on those rare occassions when Scout 508610 returns to the ship.
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It reminds me of a powerful girl Z fan manga I read (and lost the location of) where Blossom wakes up a normal girl who never met Bubbles and Buttercup, and they pass each other with nothing more than a polite hello you'd expect from classmates.
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