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Published: 2009-12-30 18:55:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2751; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 24
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This is the OLD version of our comic, we recommend you to read the NEW one .FIRST | PREV | NEXT
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Updates on Wednesdays.
IF YOU POINT ME ANY MISTAKES IN LANGUAGE, I WILL BE REALLY GRATEFUL!
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I have a little delay with updates... Okay! it's not just a little delay... I should update page 46 today... I wish to catch on this, but I don't belive I'll do it... But any way... wish me luck
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PL
1. Bandyta wódz: Uciekajmy!!!
4. V: Uciekajcie lub spotkacie własny koniec.
6. Bandyta wódz: Wybacz nam!
7. V: Idziemy.
8. N: Ty... ty...
9. V: Zabiłem go.
10. V: Teraz rusz się.
11. V: Wkrótce dotrzemy do Balmory.
12. V: Mam tam sprawy do zrobienia.
Story by hellwarior and GothaWolf
Illustrations by GothaWolf
TES universe belong to Bethesda
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Comments: 33
Maskerade56 [2010-02-15 12:05:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh mai, great work on the expressions here! I adore the way how you draw hands, too. :0
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KagamiOfTheRoses [2010-01-04 23:04:43 +0000 UTC]
I've been lurking, but I just want to say I've been following this and you're doing a very good job with it! Your art is improving with each page. Keep it up
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GothaWolf In reply to KagamiOfTheRoses [2010-01-31 11:15:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your words
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FluffySilver [2009-12-31 05:30:57 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! Only issue with language is the last one - "There is some business I need to do."
Your English is getting way better.
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GothaWolf In reply to FluffySilver [2010-01-31 11:06:39 +0000 UTC]
Well... ~hellwarior write dialogues
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CatherineNorbant [2009-12-30 22:02:17 +0000 UTC]
I especially like the whole second row - Valen's face, hand and running bandits. Good page!
You should correct the last line like *RforRebel4 told you.
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GothaWolf In reply to CatherineNorbant [2010-01-31 11:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! ^-^
I'm going to correct this right now.
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Assandra [2009-12-30 21:19:52 +0000 UTC]
No to z okazji nowego roku, życzę tobie i sobie nowych stron
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GothaWolf In reply to Assandra [2010-01-31 10:58:41 +0000 UTC]
A dziękuje bardzo Postaram się w ferie coś nadrobić.
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ArcaneChild [2009-12-30 20:23:19 +0000 UTC]
Awesome page!
Haha, I'm glad that attractive guy got away XD
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Rastrelly [2009-12-30 19:30:59 +0000 UTC]
How?! O_o He did not grilled second one with something lightning-like? Or Valen do has mostly contact spells?
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GothaWolf In reply to Rastrelly [2010-01-31 10:57:39 +0000 UTC]
He don't want to. And he may have reason
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RforRebel4 [2009-12-30 19:01:29 +0000 UTC]
In the very last panel on the bottom right, it should be 'There is some business I need to do there.' Just thought I would point it out...
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