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GothaWolf — CoV ch5 p117 - OLD version
Published: 2011-11-18 22:59:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2408; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 16
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IF YOU POINT ME ANY MISTAKES IN LANGUAGE, I WILL BE REALLY GRATEFUL!
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Again late, and again because of Skyrim...
Oh Valen, Valen, you are such a jerk for Neila
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PL
3. N: Um... Valen, byłam raz w starym domu i tam było wszystko pokryte pajęczyną i kurzem, a tutaj nie ma żadnego kurzu czy pajęczyny na tych drzwiach.
4. V: Niemożliwe, nikt nie wiedział o tej rzeczy.
5. A: Neila ma racje, tak tak? Jeśli jest stara rzecz, powinno być przynajmniej trochę kurzu. Nie ma kurzu tutaj, tak tak?
6. V: Jest głupia, szukałem tego zbyt długo żeby słuchać się wieśniaczki.
7. V: Wchodzimy...
8. V: Nawet jeśli to prawda, nie pozwolę aby ktokolwiek mnie teraz zatrzymał.
Story by hellwarior and GothaWolf
Illustrations by GothaWolf
TES universe belong to Bethesda
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Comments: 42
my dust is under the carpet usually >.>
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The dust, but if you explode the carpet, there'll be no more dust underneath it.
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Very nice. The grammer and spelling could be improved though.
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i know, right? sadly it sux hard
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hmm you want me to correct it?
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Yes, please correct us if you find any mistake
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I have just noted you my revised version. Please come to me if you want help.
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dunno, i would like, but i kinda get sad then >.> its nothing personal. It just gets to me xD you can send it to Gotha, and tell her i told you to tell her to not tell me XD
no, really, its easy to discourage me about something >.> im sad bout it
i know, you don't care 
thank you anyway ^^
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Oh noes I don't wanna make you sad!! 
Well its really up to you if you want people to read it.
And hey don't feel discourage soo easily. Your comics are good!
Or you can send me the script when your in the process of making it and I can correct it? How does that sound?
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lolol i need to stop writing when its late, i tend to overreact
sure, feel free to clear my vocabulary and my spelling errors!
it will really help the comic and me personally
about your offer...well, i would like to BUT! usually we finish pages at the same day (and very often we are to late x.x) as we release it so it would prolly prolong our release day hmh...
but still, if you would be so kind as to send me private msg with spelling errors, we would of course correct them (its not a big deal, Gotha did edit pages many times because of grammar errors)
Thanks again and don't worry 'bout my cookie ass >.>
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Thats ok if it doesn't work for you.
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noez!
help us, really
now i feel like im some kind of asshole
just send Gotha fixed dialouges if you want to help out
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It was ever traps in dwemer ruins, where you don't expect.
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Why do I feel like I remember that ruin from Morrowwind?
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well, perhaps its you we will meet behind those doors!? O.o
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just becasue dwemer ppl liked stuff clean? meh x.x
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But arnt all the Dwemer gone except for that one guy?
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OR ARE THEY?!
DUN DUN DUN...?
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chech? its some kind of heh with double c !?
WHAT MADNESS IS THIS?!?!
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I WILL EAT YOUR TOMATOES!
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But I'm The NEcromancer!
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Damn you Hell Cookie you win again!
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Tonight I'm gonna have myself a real loot time
I feel alive and the scrolls I'll turn it inside out - yeah
And going around, in the dark Pits
So don't stop me now
PEASANT GIRL AND FURRBALL!
XD
Don't... stop... me now!
Cause I'm having a loot time, a real loot time.
XD
Neila and Ashibi: O.o
Valen: Oh, cooooommoooon! Everybody knows this song!
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Wait... what? 
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wait, that was supposed to be a song? im with Neila and Ashibi in this one
O.o
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