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himynameiznate — Wish I Was There

Published: 2000-12-21 07:06:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 631; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 170
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Description Ok, I did a 'paper for the poem I wrote. Everyone dug the poem, so I did a paper, I like it, so maybe you guys will too
Comments and grades pleeeeeeze
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Comments: 3

realitysquared [2000-12-21 13:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm,
I'm no poetry critic but I do think the background abstract is very nice.
The poem on the left sets it off pretty well. There is a place toward the bottom where the background color and the text color almost blend together, making it a bit hard to read, but overall it's a good job.

Look beyond...

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guesshimself [2000-12-21 07:53:27 +0000 UTC]

wow...that's a poem that speaks...great job...i like the background too...reminds me of the band incubus' cd cover...cool

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vaeltaja [2000-12-21 07:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem. I regret that I missed it before

~ Where the are Dreams, there are always Dreamers ~

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