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Ivanna needed a moment to understand the situation. “You are a genie?”Gregorios nodded.
“And you can grant me anything I wish for?”
“There are some limitations. I can’t kill or resurrect a person.” Sami explained.
“Can you cure any disease?” Ivanna asked quickly.
Sami nodded.
“Then I wish that you will cure my ill father.” Ivanna stated her wish.
“Your wish is granted!” Gregorios blinked.
Instantly, Ivanna felt like her whole body was on fire. A terrible pain concentrated in her chest. Ivanna had to sit down. Then she felt a terrible nausea. Ivanna vomited blood. “What
did you do to me?” she asked with a pain-distorted face.
“I granted your wish. Your father is alive and healthy. But the cancer had to go somewhere, so I placed it in your body.” Gregorios explained with an evil smile.
“You monster! I wish that you cure me as well but you won’t make anybody else ill instead!” Ivanna commanded.
“I’m sorry mistress, but you only got one wish. Have a nice day.” Gregorios turned into smoke and returned to his bottle.
Amelia, Babette and Martha headed back from town. They had spent a wonderful afternoon in the city. At the tram stop, where they met earlier that day, Amelia and Babette said goodbye to Martha. On the whole way back, the dog sniffled regularly on the marks by other dogs. Now the dog was back to the place it had examined earlier this day. This time it didn’t turn its head away but raised its leg and placed its own mark.
About 10 Minutes later, Babette and Amelia arrived at the hotel. Babette bid Amelia farewell, then the maid returned to her room. On the way, Amelia encountered the cat again that she was very afraid of. Suddenly, the dog moved between Amelia and the cat and growled at the cat. The cat hissed back and arched its back. A loud bark from the dog finally chased the cat away. The dog turned back to Amelia, his tail wagging. Amelia patted its head. “Good boy!” she said.
When Amelia passed the door of Svetlana’s room, she heard voices behind it. Amelia knew it was bad behavior but her curiosity was stronger. She stopped to eavesdrop.
TO BE CONTINUED…
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Comments: 19
danparkerstudios [2011-10-12 01:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Another good story. And whoa. I don't want the same kind of cancer Ivanna has now. Eeesh. And by the way, wasn't Gregorios that selfish creep from some of the earlier stories?
By the way, where have I seen the concept of "Wishing he or she gets cured from injury, but it gets transfered to the person who made the wish"?
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hippo2 In reply to danparkerstudios [2011-10-12 08:16:09 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember where this comes from exactly. It's a very vicious way to twist the wish and close to forbidden for a genie (Rule: can't kill a person).
@Gregorios: Yes, it fits Gregory's personality. In "Broken Bonds", he wished for the Cook to be transformed into a lobster. This was very evil since the lobster got certainly boiled and eaten by now. No wonder the Djinn Gregorios is evil to the core. Mhhh.... I have to find a way who to punish him in the end.
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danparkerstudios In reply to hippo2 [2011-10-20 23:40:12 +0000 UTC]
All right. And poor Cook. Okay, okay, wanna know where the "Wishing he or she gets cured from injury, but it gets transfered to the person who made the wish"? came from? It came from Ojamajo Doremi/Magical Doremi.
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hippo2 In reply to danparkerstudios [2011-10-21 09:38:31 +0000 UTC]
I didn't know that. But I'm sure, this idea as been used in other stories too.
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Captainface [2011-10-08 02:02:16 +0000 UTC]
I bet Svetlana will be pretty upset at gregorios.
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Captainface In reply to hippo2 [2011-10-08 06:48:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow..If I ever run into her...I..I don't know what to say. She's basically taking jerk to a level hardily seen.
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hippo2 In reply to Captainface [2011-10-08 06:52:06 +0000 UTC]
Whom are you talking about? Svetlana?
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hippo2 In reply to Captainface [2011-10-08 07:01:43 +0000 UTC]
I had thought about a different last chapter. Ivanna uses her second wish to rewrite Svetlana's history in such a way, that Svetlana isn't her sister anymore,but an orphan. Unfortunately, I didn't hat the time to do the picture.
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hippo2 In reply to kaaslave [2011-10-01 06:52:59 +0000 UTC]
He was a prick as a human and becomming a genie hasn't helped on this at all. At least I had the chance to show him granting a wish for another Mistess than Svetlana.
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kaaslave In reply to hippo2 [2011-10-01 15:48:07 +0000 UTC]
If Ivanna had known what would happen, she'd probably wish that Gregorios had gotten the cancer instead.
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hippo2 In reply to kaaslave [2011-10-01 16:20:16 +0000 UTC]
Propably. But I don't know if genies can get this disease.
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mnmega In reply to hippo2 [2011-10-03 04:01:12 +0000 UTC]
probably just wouldn't affect him (problem solved!)
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hippo2 In reply to P-z-p-Z [2011-10-01 00:21:40 +0000 UTC]
Let's hope she will find a cure soon.
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