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howcouldyoudothat — In Poems Like These
Published: 2013-08-25 23:14:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 567; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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I thought girls like her only existed in poems like these,

Eyes darker than a storm at sea,

Love bites from the razor,

 

Broken soul,

Scarred by her past, her mind is haunted by her future,

The kind of thoughts that tear deep into her skin,

 

She carries her secrets with her, notebook in hand,

Spilling the words she holds too dear, counting the days since her last meal,

Destroying herself, it wears her out,

 

Late nights showing beneath those stormy eyes,

Kept up by unwelcome demons,

Slicing open her limbs, feasting on her insecurities,

 

Soft music far too loud,

Keeps her fears at bay,

Suffocated by her self loathing,


Her slow suicide.



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Comments: 7

chemicalkid101 [2013-08-26 08:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love this so much 

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howcouldyoudothat In reply to chemicalkid101 [2013-08-26 21:45:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you cx

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SamLeDerpMuffin [2013-08-26 04:08:10 +0000 UTC]

This is really amazing. I never know how to help anyone either. Very good job! I wrote a poem similar to this called The Hatred also in depression strikes. 

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howcouldyoudothat In reply to SamLeDerpMuffin [2013-08-26 04:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you   

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SamLeDerpMuffin In reply to howcouldyoudothat [2013-08-26 04:18:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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wdnest [2013-08-25 23:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Stunning work here - this poem is great - congrats on your obvious talent.

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howcouldyoudothat In reply to wdnest [2013-08-26 01:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Umm thank you...   

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