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Published: 2012-10-24 21:40:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description a whisper from the past,
moist on the lips, heavy
love left, lost, languid
and moist on her lips, his future

another autumn lies, on pale and grey
colder skies, colors alive
love left lost, languid
and moist on the limbs, his winter

questions begged, presence of present
mournful smiles, eyes only to cry
for a love left lost and languid
for a love left lost and languid

a whisper...
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Comments: 7

nighttimebeautiful [2012-12-24 18:45:56 +0000 UTC]

oh how i love alliteration.
especially used in a beautiful poem like this.
this is filled with some of my favoruite words
which makes it all the better
(past, heavy, lips, pale, grey, limbs)

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Kaz-D [2012-10-24 21:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Kaz-D [2012-10-24 21:43:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

it has been a while...

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Kaz-D In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2012-10-24 21:52:53 +0000 UTC]

It has indeed. You popped into my inbox at just the right moment.

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Kaz-D [2012-10-24 21:56:32 +0000 UTC]

excellent

you are well?

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Kaz-D In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2012-10-24 22:24:22 +0000 UTC]

I am well
Are you?

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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to Kaz-D [2012-10-25 00:17:09 +0000 UTC]

relatively

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