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Published: 2008-07-06 18:42:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 648; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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I need it. I should draw and paint a lot more than I do. Knowing myself, I know it won't happen. Reference used, of course, but it doesn't look a lot like him. Oh well
I wish I was braver and more skilled with color
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Det var digg! siden det var klussete og gjørmete og nam! og jeg synes det lignet på daniel lied også ropteskrev jostein daniel og du ropteskrev lied så jeg kan ikke ha tatt helt feil! i likted it!
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Digg! Det var meningen at det skulle være Daniel Lied, men jeg ga ham skjegg siden han ikke hadde det på bildet. Også var bildet megalite, så det var vanskelig å se detaljer og lyset var litt dårlig, så det ble en del improvisasjon.
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Jeg kan se hele kommentaren og så bare trykke reply også er kommentaren borte! jeg digger at jeg ikke trenger subscription, jeg behøvde bare være tålmodig, mens du BETALTE for dette også fikk jeg det gratis. jeg føler meg SMØGG. som engelskmennene pleier å føle seg. men hvordan er subscription, når den helt vanlige devver er supahkewl?
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FAD3R.
Jeg vet ikke hva slags privilegier vi kule får nå, men jeg hå
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Interesting. Perhaps it doesn't look like the subject, but it's still a fairly accomplished piece.
Out of the whole thing, I'd say the mouth is probably the weakest element - annoyingly my browser doesn't seem to want me to view the full-size piece, so I can't be too specific, but it's something to do with the top lip, it seems a little two-dimensional.
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Indeed, the mouth needs work. I think I need to define it a lot more, and the lower lip has to come more off the chin or something. Thanks for the critique
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No problem, I always try to give some real feedback when I leave a comment, especially when I see 'Advanced Critique'
Also, forgot to mention before, I really like the colours and lighting, the contour of the face is shown really well, especially around and above th eyes.
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Thanks a lot! I'll keep these things in mind when painting in the future
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practise makes perfect, o'course! As for critique: Have you tried flipping the image horizontally and/or vertically and comparing to the original? Flipping it can reveal a lot of mistakes.
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Yeah, I know, but I got really tired of it and didn't wanna work anymore on it
There are some parts, like the mouth and the eyes, that need a lot of work. Maybe later tonight
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