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IndiDreamer — City of Trees- Ch. 5 Pg. 1
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Lots of experimentation going on here. Biggest changes would be how I did the background, and then also the speech bubbles and font that I used. Please tell me what you think, and give suggestions on how I can improve!
Also, the dentist really screwed up on Tani's teeth there. I hope she gets her money back.
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I love the backgrounds!
The only thing, though, is that deer don't have upper teeth. They have a bony pad like cows.<33
eee I look forward to reading this chapter!
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Thanks. 
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If I'm not mistaken, I believe all ruminants lack front upper teeth! x3 Haha, deer anatomy is weird anyway.
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I really like the sharpness of the speech bubbled here!
And the backgrounds look amazing. Definitely lots of improvement here, great page :3
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