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Published: 2003-10-02 06:31:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 13
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Somewhere, i learned to hold youtold you, kindly that i loved you
Somewhere, we met by chance
Asked you, asked you to dance
Somewhere, i took you to a wonderful place
told you, its ok, just relax, slow the pace..
Somewhere, we left everyone behind
told you, that no one could find
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Somewhere, i hugged you
and i loved you
Somewhere, i took you
and i loved you
Somewhere, we danced
and took a chance
Somewhere, i hope to find
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Comments: 10
awesome!!! the imagry and flow is good. its really cool. like ahh i dunno what to say. i just really like it okay!!!
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I agree, alot of people can relate to something like this. The rhythm is really nice, how its all put together is really nice, too. Good Job, buddy. Ye got yourself a fave.
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That is so beautiful. What movie inspired it? Wow, the concept of the piece is so clear, so universal, yet everyone, in their own, personal, and unique lives can relate. This is so awesome.
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I love the rhythm in this poem....and I love the use of spacing...makes it look really neat...I like this...and it does deviat from your normal stuff...;]
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woow so pretty
just wonderful i love it good work!
Rox~
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thankies...heh..its not like all the rest of my stuff...
got the idea for it, from a movie
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