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Invoking — Diamond In The Rough.
Published: 2014-02-26 23:58:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 962; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Long hair and deep brown eyes so sad but full of hope
Walks over to his side and hands him a love note
Then he points and laughs at her for the feelings she confessed
She feels emptiness as a heartbeat in her chest
At home she’ll water down her pain with broken pride
Trying to fix the girl who fell apart inside
Long hair and deep brown eyes so sad and full of tears
She’s not that different, but can’t fit in with her peers
They all have their looks and brand name clothes
Just because she doesn’t, she’s the girl nobody knows
And this goes out to her; I just hope that it’s enough
To let her know I see the diamond hidden in the rough
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Comments: 10
Superb, I felt the girl and how they treated her.
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This is very beautiful. I dunno if you meant their looks in the 3rd stanza third line, but I thought I should mention it.
Keep on writing
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Yes of course I did, why, what did I put?
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When I first saw it was they're, but now it's their.
I dunno, I just thought to point it out.
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Lol x3 I know, I was just messing with you. Thanks for pointing it out, I hate it when I type so fast I don't notice the little things I mess up.
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It's okay, it happens with me too
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this is so beautiful :') and I know many pleople can relate :/ which is sad..... but a trully beautiful poem
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this is sad, its happened to me before
truly beautiful
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Simply beautiful. Short, but captured just the right amount of emotion that it needed. Excellent, my friend
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