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Thankies
First time I drew a real human in like...ever.
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Yea, I tend to avoid people. The problem is I always make the legs look chubby without meaning to, so people tend not to like it.
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Not a bad fresh start for drawing humans ^^
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I'm working on Metalica now.
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Well, this looks pretty good, maybe the hands need a little more work, but so far everything seems fine to me.
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Hands in general suck. I can't draw them at all X_X
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Then focus on them mainly if you ever decide to make another again.
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The thing is hands are generally hard for any artist to draw because of the curves and knuckles and angles.
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I understand that, but you want to improve, right?
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I do.
But you try drawing a set of hands.
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Now that I can't do well either sadly.
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it looks really nicceee ^u^
I like the way you drew this alot
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I don't know. I need to improve more X_X
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Well you could improve it, but thats with everything
but honestly
its pretty good
^^
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I need to improve X_X
It's just so simple and cartoony.
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Oh thats kinda the point why i like itΒ
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You have improved a ton! The body and face look great Kiti!
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I have? I still feel like it's awful X_X
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You really have, the body shape has improved a ton, could I put a small amount of critique in?
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Go ahead I can take critiques well enough.
And I haven't drawn a human in a long time and I only know the basics in posing and proportions.
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To me the only things that look a bit off is the left foot and the arms, which is understandable
because to be honest, drawing feet and arms are hard for me and when I have to draw them, I want to not draw them haha.
With the foot, it's facing a bit too far, and the arms are a tiny bit thick for the body.
Like umm..
Here is a simple redline.
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You did really good on the face body and legs though, and I understand drawing humans can be a pain.
Humanoid things suck to draw and I'm glad I mostly draw ponies.
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Oh wow.
Thanks so much for that!
Those are actually my problem zones X_X The red line really helps.
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Aaa I'm glad I could help! But you really are improving!
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I'm working on it XD
My problem spots are feet hands and arms normally. I try though XD
I'm half done with another human sketch though. This time Metalica.
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Oo I can't wait to see! I feel ya on hands too, hands suck.
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They really do X_X
And I cant decide whether or not to keep her top hat.
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I say draw her without it.
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Kay.
I kept her eyepatch though.
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Good, eyepatches are mandatory!
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Mmmyes..
Also because I trust your opinion I want to know how you feel about Metalica's race change. And if I should change Rider.
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I really do like that you changed her to a unicorn, I think it suits her well. For Rider, if you do change her, I think she would be a good pegasus.
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Rider is based around magic background though. I did contemplate her being a pegasus though but it didn't seem to fit her. (mainly because Rider has a fear of heights, and water)
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Oh yeah, that would make sense.
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Also alot of feedback I got said to keep her as is
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