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jeremy3 — Everfree part 105en
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Published: 2018-02-09 15:35:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 6898; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 27
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English is not my first language, if you find mistake or error, please notice me.I'll make the change as soon as I can.
So much change in my life could explain why I'm now so late in compare to the past.
But it's not really interresting, the only things is that I will be much longer to do new parts but this comic will finish, even if I have to die for it.
Thank you to all of you for loving my work.
Thanks for the help to:
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Comments: 23
I love the comic- dislike the rude ghost pony, but look forward to seeing the rest.
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I know you don't always get along with Twilight, Trixie, but there's no reason to be so rude with a mare who was just watching her death approach.
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Yes, she knew it at the moment she sow this enormous sphere of energy in part 104.
All of the knew it, they just wished for a miracle.
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Oh so the ghost is connected to Derpy, this is definitely going to be very interesting. Can't wait to find out more, looking forward to it.
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A cunt who saved them, but still a cunt.
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Looks like Phoenix got the technical stuff already, so all I can add at this point is that, ‘It’s better!’ should be ‘That’s better!’ As 'that’s better' is how people usually respond to someone honoring a request.
As always the best of luck to you.
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And as always thanks for the help.
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I wonder who could that be?
Also,
Panel 6: "could" and "you" should be switched.
Panel 7: ""and" should be replaced with "that".
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I know how you feel!
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thank you.
For the Panel 7, are you sure, the ghost say it's better because she wanted Twilight to thanks her, ans she say " I don't have to answer" to Twilight question "who".
I will make some change, this is not really understandable.
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Now the dialogue seems a little better now. I am quite surprised the ghost sounded a little spunky though.
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All will be explain soon, still 15 parts before the end of this comic.
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