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jeremy3 — Everfree part 98en

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Published: 2017-11-17 17:21:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 5649; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 34
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Description English is not my first language,  if you find mistake or error, please notice me.
I'll make the change as soon as I can, but not before next monday. 


Thanks for the help to:
nerdbeaster.deviantart.com/
keeper-of-time-rd.deviantart.c…
ossybeatbreaker.deviantart.com…


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Comments: 16

fotland42 [2018-02-13 04:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Guess she's going to die then. What a shame.

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lizzykitta [2018-01-09 08:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I can't see it

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Maverickwolfzx [2017-11-27 04:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Lost your cutie mark?

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tigreanpony [2017-11-18 16:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is getting good, looking forward to the next page.

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PhoenixFlambe [2017-11-18 15:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Is that her soul ascending??!!

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jeremy3 In reply to PhoenixFlambe [2017-11-18 16:09:27 +0000 UTC]

No, it is just little of magical energy that it stayed has Derpy.

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IcarusHector [2017-11-18 07:50:35 +0000 UTC]

INTENSITY INTENSIFIES.

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ROCuevas [2017-11-18 00:42:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh God... so intense now...

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NovemberLilly [2017-11-18 00:05:34 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAAA!!!what happens next?!?!?!?!?

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Keeper-of-time-RD [2017-11-17 20:45:02 +0000 UTC]

Panel 2: 'doesn't wake up' should be "won't wake up!"

As always, I enjoy the comic and keep up the good work.

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jeremy3 In reply to Keeper-of-time-RD [2017-11-18 12:40:53 +0000 UTC]

I'll try, Thanks for the help😊

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OssyBeatBreaker [2017-11-17 20:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Last panel did ya mean "SomePony" cause its says somebody.

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jeremy3 In reply to OssyBeatBreaker [2017-11-18 12:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it's done.😊

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OssyBeatBreaker In reply to jeremy3 [2017-11-18 14:27:30 +0000 UTC]

#LIT

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nerdbeaster [2017-11-17 18:23:22 +0000 UTC]

i think it would sound better as: the spell certainly has consumed all its energy

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jeremy3 In reply to nerdbeaster [2017-11-17 19:42:03 +0000 UTC]

It's corrected, thank you. 

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