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Published: 2015-07-17 15:03:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 12404; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 61
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A big  thanks to scootabyte.deviantart.com/  for correcting and rephrasing.

first part: fav.me/d8p0x1n
Last part:fav.me/d8yu7l5
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Comments: 29

fotland42 [2015-07-28 15:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I take it back. This was the perfect set-up for a prank, and I'm glad you had the wisdom to pull it.

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WhiteLightPlushPones [2015-07-24 22:53:20 +0000 UTC]

My money is on Sweetie Belle  being knocked unconscious after exhausting herself with a teleportation spell

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AJR001 [2015-07-24 12:41:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm so confused...

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jeremy3 In reply to AJR001 [2015-07-24 15:44:48 +0000 UTC]

The next part is planned for monday, this one could answer to your question. 

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DoughnutJoe [2015-07-24 09:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Clearly Sweetie has figured out that the barrier only stops conscious creatures and intentionally fell through it while unconscious, as in the famous Sci Fi short story "Arena."

Eh, it's as good a guess as any. 

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jeremy3 In reply to DoughnutJoe [2015-07-24 15:46:55 +0000 UTC]

And this guess make me  laugh, thanks cause I needed that, but the answer is planned for monday with the next part. 

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EqDBot [2015-07-24 03:20:02 +0000 UTC]

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therougerogue [2015-07-23 04:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Why do I have a feeling that that's not Sweetie Belle.

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tyruvelp [2015-07-23 01:38:40 +0000 UTC]

from description
"Next part: i don't really know, with the summer it's a little bit dificult to stay a home and try to drow."

dificult should be difficult 
drow = draw (unless you are talking about dark elves...) 

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jeremy3 In reply to tyruvelp [2015-07-23 09:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the corrections. 

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tyruvelp In reply to jeremy3 [2015-07-23 23:33:37 +0000 UTC]

np

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silvadel [2015-07-23 00:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Sleeping Belle.

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DarthWill3 [2015-07-19 03:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Somepony fetch Pipsqueak! Sweetie Belle needs his help!

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Twylite-Sparkle [2015-07-19 02:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh, horseapple...

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tigreanpony [2015-07-18 15:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh this can't be good.

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jeremy3 In reply to tigreanpony [2015-07-18 16:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Believe it or not, but it's not the worst part planed. 

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ROCuevas [2015-07-18 06:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh my.

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Billblok [2015-07-18 00:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Fell asleep to talk to Luna?

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GordonPasha [2015-07-17 23:46:53 +0000 UTC]

That's another Crusader knocked unconscious. At least Apple Bloom & Scootaloo seem okay now.

That purple wall looks pretty tough. I don't know if they'll be able to break through. Poor Sweetie Belle. I hope they get to her in time.

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jeremy3 In reply to GordonPasha [2015-07-18 16:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Like I say, the answer in the next part. 

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MustLoveFrogs [2015-07-17 15:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh Sweetie, we can't take you anywhere!

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jeremy3 In reply to MustLoveFrogs [2015-07-17 16:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Even if we take care to find à safe place, she can fell in a trap. 

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MustLoveFrogs In reply to jeremy3 [2015-07-17 19:13:34 +0000 UTC]

We go to the grocery store, she ends up locked in the freezer case.

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jeremy3 In reply to MustLoveFrogs [2015-07-17 20:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Never visit a chainsaw store With her. the concequences could be terribles.  

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MustLoveFrogs In reply to jeremy3 [2015-07-17 20:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Pity...that's where she wanted to have her birthday party.

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SnoopyStallion [2015-07-17 15:13:56 +0000 UTC]

what happened to sweetie belle?? 

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Element0fKindness In reply to SnoopyStallion [2015-07-18 00:26:14 +0000 UTC]

She just got tired waiting for the other two dingbats who knocked themselves unconscious to wake up, so she is catching a quick nap.  Though, gotta say, her choice of bed wouldn't be mine.

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jeremy3 In reply to SnoopyStallion [2015-07-17 15:17:53 +0000 UTC]

The answer in the next part. 

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SnoopyStallion In reply to jeremy3 [2015-07-17 15:38:05 +0000 UTC]

yay ^^

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