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Published: 2016-02-05 14:58:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 9584; Favourites: 75; Downloads: 50
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As always, a big thanks for scootabyte.deviantart.com/ for the corrections and the rephrasing.Small grafic coorections about Scootatloo in the last panel, fixed.Β
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I may stand corrected.
But perhaps she already poked it with a stick, and the stick was unharmed. Then this would be the logical next step.
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I kinda have to agree with Snoopy Stallion. Scootaloo's butt is enormous, given the size of the rest of her body.Β (Sorry Scoots) Perhaps that could be fixed? Of course, I don't mean to nitpick. I know a lot of work goes into these comics. The other (really minor thing) is that "Copyright" is misspelled in the disclaimer regarding R. Kelly.Β I hope Scootaloo is okay. That grey glowing orb thing she's looking at the last pannel makes me nervous. You had better not let anything bad happen to Scoots or I shall smite you! You won't make me smite you, would you?Β Β
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Yes, I will fix Scoot but I need to find time, but it's planned.
And even if something bad hapen, it's for the need of the story, please don't hate me.
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Don't worry, I wouldn't hate you. Bad things happen to good characters all the time in the Game of Thrones universe but I still watch the show/read the books.
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bouncy ball! (i can picture the cloud thingy acting like a toy)Β
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Moonstone?
Could you be more explicit, I know the gem, but I'm prety sure that you're talking about something else.Β ( and I want to know)Β
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kallenin means this:Β studentofthenight.tumblr.com/
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Intersting, I will find time for reading this tumblr.
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You're welcome! It really goes to some amazing places with its story. I'm trying to keep current with it as much as possible.
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Thank you so much.
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What's Scoots doing with that pink cloud thingy?
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You will see in the next part.
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you may want look up the anatomy differences of horses in motion, walking, trotting, cantering, and galloping. i assume you meant to show the girls galloping to their friend as fast as they possibly could. but you actually drew them cantering, which is half as fast as galloping.
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If you're referring to the second panel, that looks more like a trot. Β 7@=e
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I just seen Γ vidΓ©o With a horse galoping, that look hard to draw.
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there is a pretty good one to compare to at the top of this wiki page:Β en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horse_gaβ¦ people who like to show galloping like to use frame #5, #7, #10, or #11.Β
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This is the page that i've seen.
But i'm not used to draw this movement, and some of my sketch are already done ( for exemple i'm now working on part 63 ), but I will pay attention for the over part.
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Oh this is interesting I wonder what is going on near Scoots.
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ThΓ© answer is planed for next part.
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I love the further character development between Sweetie and Bloom.Β Those faces.Β X3
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I agree, probably one of the best pages yet! Dialogue is perfect too.
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Thank you and thank to Scootabyte for help me so much for giving the best english version.
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Yes, I like to draw new expressions, my favorite is panel 5.
I wanted a bloomy bored by Sweetie clumsyness.Β
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scoots butt looks enormous ^^
I wonder what happens next
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Hey, Scoots is sensitive of that, remember.
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Maybe I will fix that, I didn't mean to draw Scoot that big.
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I think it's an optical illusion, based on where her tail is resting.
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Or maybe one too many Hayburgers
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No I really think the back leg are too Big than the rest of Scoot body.
Just a little change.
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