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jeremy3 β Everfree part 3 EN
Published: 2015-04-21 09:25:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 15735; Favourites: 115; Downloads: 72
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Whith the great help of scootabyte.deviantart.com/ for correcting and rephrasing.Sorry if i don't answer to all the comments, but be sure I have and will read all of them.
And thank for all of you for the past and futur faves.
The storyΒ begin slowly, hope you will appreciat it.
first part: fav.me/d8p0x1n
Last part: fav.me/d8pozod
Next part:Β fav.me/d8s4qfm
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What a great idea, I love that their talents might be something ordinary, but those are still talents worth searching for!
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All the awesome things? Astronauts?Β Arctic crab fisherponies?Β Monster hunters? Body snatchers? Evil Overlords? Β I am skeptical...
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next page
jeremy3.deviantart.com/art/Eveβ¦
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That's not the right page you got there...
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- "I got it! How about you talk about the time you were sick and called her mommy?"
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LOVing this style of comic.Β Can't wait to see where it goes.
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Nice so they are going to attempt to be Mailmares, nothing can go wrong with this.
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Yes, thank you, i will correct that.
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You're welcome! (β βΏβ βΏ)
I proof read English comics for others here on DA =3
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I already have a proof reader, and i really like to work With him but thank for the proposal.
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it's the eyes, isn't it ?Β
it was sweetie bell on the previous pageΒ
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Yea the eyes in a lot of slides make them look like drug attics suffering withdrawls Β
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I still say there special talent is hugging. simple but the best.
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scoots have pinkie powers?? poofing stuff out of nowhere XD dat glasses XDΒ
sooooo will they get their cutie marks in this story? sweety belle as a janitor, scoots as a baker and applebloom as a dolphin trainer XDΒ
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