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Published: 2015-11-09 15:27:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 10316; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 55
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As always, a big thanks for Scootabyte for the corrections and the rephrasing.

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fotland42 [2015-11-19 06:35:08 +0000 UTC]

Twilight has a plan for everything.

Except the things she wasn't prepared for.

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Animatorsnake [2015-11-18 20:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Is rainbow being sarcastic on the last panel or being serious because I can't tell

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jeremy3 In reply to Animatorsnake [2015-11-18 22:38:59 +0000 UTC]

It's sort of kind sarcasm for a good friend.Β 

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DarthWill3 [2015-11-14 02:45:47 +0000 UTC]

This is big trouble.

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FralLeman [2015-11-10 03:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Derpy doesn't look like she's feeling to well...especially in the last panel.

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jeremy3 In reply to FralLeman [2015-11-10 10:23:45 +0000 UTC]

She's tired, her working day begin at 4 am and finish at 11 am, and just after that she have to run after 3 fillies.Β 

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Twylite-Sparkle [2015-11-09 23:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Love the pegacontrails in the sky.
Hope Rainbow heard her words about Scootaloo being in trouble...

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jeremy3 In reply to Twylite-Sparkle [2015-11-10 00:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow heard, but Rainbow think she don't have to worry, part 23 will explain better.Β 

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Twylite-Sparkle In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-10 04:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's good.

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MustLoveFrogs [2015-11-09 22:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Straight-faced Derpy in the last panel is my favorite, hehe.

And is Rainbow really that unconcerned about Scoot in danger??

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jeremy3 In reply to MustLoveFrogs [2015-11-09 23:39:17 +0000 UTC]

She's not unconcerned. Β she's just remenber the Twilight's reunion. Will see in part 23.Β 

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MustLoveFrogs In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-09 23:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Quickly, quickly!Β  :0

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tigreanpony [2015-11-09 18:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is getting good.

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jeremy3 In reply to tigreanpony [2015-11-09 23:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.Β 

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Kiddan [2015-11-09 17:30:05 +0000 UTC]

RD you should be more worried about scootaloo

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jeremy3 In reply to Kiddan [2015-11-09 23:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh rainbow believe she don't have to worry, because of the Twilight's reunion.Β 

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MidnightFire1222 [2015-11-09 16:36:57 +0000 UTC]

I love how RD can easily match Derpy's max speed. I also love Derpy's face at the end. I don't think she's stupid at all. I think she has a lot on her plate to deal with (being a single mom and all it seems) and some things just slip her mind.

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jeremy3 In reply to MidnightFire1222 [2015-11-09 16:54:35 +0000 UTC]

And You're right, at this moment, Derpy just want to save the fillies and have to nothing else in mind.Β 

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MidnightFire1222 In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-09 18:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Yay! She's a great pony!

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Martyn-Arts [2015-11-09 16:16:22 +0000 UTC]

teehee, even at max speed RD is just whizzing around her. Quite lovely detail.

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jeremy3 In reply to Martyn-Arts [2015-11-09 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]

I really love this sort of dΓ©tail.Β 

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Martyn-Arts In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-09 19:39:56 +0000 UTC]

I love it too. Well done! Such simple additions make a comic page much more engaging.

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Element0fKindness In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-09 17:31:04 +0000 UTC]

As do I. The change in perspective in two different frames makes it even more impressive.

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jeremy3 In reply to Element0fKindness [2015-11-09 17:36:35 +0000 UTC]

I learn that sort of thing when I drawn manga, a lot of year ago.Β 

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Element0fKindness In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-09 19:19:25 +0000 UTC]

That makes sense. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but even the subtle detail of Dashies trail not being perfectly straight after the loops really makes for realism I can appreciate.

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jeremy3 In reply to Element0fKindness [2015-11-09 23:32:37 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't, I have trembling hands.Β 
When I have drawn this trail, I wanted to erase it, but finaly change my mind.Β 

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Element0fKindness In reply to jeremy3 [2015-11-10 00:26:12 +0000 UTC]

LOL!Β  Glad you stuck with it!

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leathertachi [2015-11-09 15:53:59 +0000 UTC]

is derpy that stupid?

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ROCuevas [2015-11-09 15:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh my.

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