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Published: 2017-08-11 14:36:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 5037; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 25
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English is not my first language,Β if you find mistake or error, please notice me.The change will be made only on monday!
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Hmm... shouldn't her hindhooves be stuck to it too?
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That doesn't work like glue but more like magnetic, cloudy just need a physical contact for steeling magic, so pinkie can move but can't stop touching him until Cloudy need her.π
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Uh oh, if I know anything about Halo plasma grenades this won't end well...
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Yes, is a living creature.
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I absolutely adore this page. I really love the expressions in panel 3 the most. You can see how pissed Twilight is and at the same time you can see how horrified Pinkie is by Twilight, I really love it. I just love how scared Pinkie got of Twilight. Of course all the other pages are great as well, I love seeing Pinkie Pie panic.
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Not only by Twilight, she's trapped by an unknown thing , even unknown by Twilight who know praticly everything about magic.π
I love seeing her panic too.π
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This is getting quite interesting. Looking forward to the next page.
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I'm hoping finish it for next week end.
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I still have little things to show about this comic.
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I can tell, and it's certainly understandable.
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oh silly pinkie you can't shake it off you gotta violently smash it on the ground. no seriously pinkie smash that thing to pieces before it comes back and causes more trouble.
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She can't breaking an egg if she don't had floor for cooking a delicious cake.
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This colored lines need more time , but it's quite effectif.
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Don't touch.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=56JCbRβ¦
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I'm not sure if pinkie is being childish, the egg is somehow messing with her or both.
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Both, probably.
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Both and over explanation will coming soon.Β
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The old crazyglue trick. Works every time! Β :-D
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Every time we need it, or not... unfortunaly for pinkie.Β
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Okay quick corrections I can see would be:
Panel 1: a βcomeβ that should be βcomingβ
Panel 3: βBut I tryβ¦β should be βBut Iβm tryingβ¦β or βBut I tried...β
Panel 4: βLeave me now!β should be βLet go of me!β
As always, I enjoy the comic, keep up the good work!
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And thanks for the help.
As you say, i'll try to keep up my work, hope the next part will please you.
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The mother of an angry dodo.Β
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