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Published: 2007-04-19 18:18:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1490; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 21
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As usual, let me know what your favorite panel is, what your least favorite panel is, and what your favorite dialogue is.next page ->
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Written by Steven Swanson and Nicholas Hardin, all characters © Nicholas Hardin, Steven Swanson, and Charles "Fox" Champion, Art © Steven Swanson
2004-2007
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Ahh. that explains a little why Jade was so upset in the last panel. Saphire is really laying down the law here. It's pretty cool to see her tough side.
favorite panel is tough. I like both number three and number four because of the different expressions and the depth of the panels. Lease favorite is tough but maybe number one because Jade's head looks a bit too big for her head in that one. All the dialogue is good. I'm always amazed at how many panels you can squeeze into a page.
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Nice use of real photos in the background there.
Favourite panel has to be the top... Just 'cuz I like the view for some reason.
...And you know, after I finished reading this, I just couldn't get rid of the mental image of my character staring down Jade and saying '...Russians shoot deserters. Come or desert.'
(Zuckka and I agree that by freak coincidence my character would fit into JV universe almost seamlessly as ex-KGB). Not like it's relevant, as that level of intensity just doesn't seem this comic's style; just the image that got stuck in my head. :3
This looks like it wil lbe a fun issue.
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Woah... The tension level just rose more then a few notches!
I LIKE it!
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Poor Jade, I'm assuming its a grim past that's upsetting her.
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Not necessarily grim... troubled is more like it
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very emotional dialogue, seems a little rushed towards the end. I suppose it's a real challenge fitting that much development onto a page, but it would seem dragged on if there were more pages. It's interesting to see this side of the vixens, I mean this is their job after all, not just a sport or a pastime. Keep up the character development it's a great addition to the action!
Favorite panel: third to last, very expressive posture.
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I always have the problem of underestimating how much room dialogue will take up in a page, and in this particular issue there's a lot of dialogue to chew through, so I suppose yes, it'll come off as a bit rushed and crowded. I can try to work on that, but I have to admit it's a tough nut to crack.
Jade's isms do come to light in this issue, and they play a pretty important role in it
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I don't really mind the dialogue, in fact I rather like it, I meant to address the pace. The plot and the illustration make it out to be an intense moment for her, I would expect her to brood for longer before she responded, but since you can only fit so many panels on a page I understand that the passage of time has to be flexible. None the less the juxtaposition of consecutive panels can make a character seem capricious. Perhaps in my excitement to read the new page I moved too quickly, but some how I just got a rushed feeling. I hope that makes enough sense to be helpful.
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least favorite panel would be the bottom left one.... those knees look awfully small?
fav panel would be the small "huh, what kind of choice is that?" panel - lovely expression
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I'm glad you liked that panel. I was a bit nervous since expressions aren't my strong point (actually, I have a hard time finding what my 'strong points' are), so I'm glad it paid off for some folks.
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IMPO your (furry art) strong points is your general anatomy... of course- that is my personal opinion... but if its that then i least favor the way you do anthro heads (too pointy?) - but you do EVERYTHING else with superb quality.
of course if I could draw as well as you i'd give far less of a damn regarding what other ppl thought... cuzz then I'd already be so good I'd no longer bother improving my art style
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A heart-wrenching decision! Sounds very much what I would call a "Tokugawa complex". Anyway, I love Jade's display of shock near the page's bottom. This mission is going to be more complicated that just its objectives! ^_^
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Heh, same as hemisphere, what exactly is a Tokugawa Complex?
It seems folks like the way Jade's expression came out in the penultimate panel... quite relieving, actually.
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It is self-termed, so don't try to find it in a dictionary 
Since she is an emigre finding home in the States with the Vixens, it seems at this standpoint that going back will produce dire consequences for Jade. ^_^
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We'll just have to see in future issues.
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What is a "Tokugawa complex"?
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Now what would you describe someone like that to give an ultimatum?
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