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Published: 2019-12-05 05:26:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 12159; Favourites: 179; Downloads: 23
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Description     Here's my version of Orbot and Scratch as they'll appear in my fan comic Sonic Odyssey. In my comic I plan to have Scratch and Grounder start off as Orbot and Cubot. The reason being is that I wanted to reimagine Scratch and Grounder to be threatening while not betraying their comedic qualities (think like the 2012 Ninja Turtles take on Bebop and Rocksteady), so I had to think of how I'd go about their personalities. Then I thought about Orbot and Cubot and how they filled a simialr role to Scratch and Grounder being two robot minions for Eggman but having more distinct personalities from each other (even if it's as simplistic as the smart one and dumb one) but didn't have much combat potential on their own. So I got the idea to merge the two duos that turned into the idea to have Scratch and Grounder start off as Orbot and Cubot. For Scratch's design, to make him a bit more threatening instead of being based on a chicken I based his design off of a cockatrice, which is basically a mythological creature that's a mix between a chicken and a dragon. Also his wings are based on the Vulture's wings from the movie Spider-Man Homecoming. The machine gun on his arm is inspired by the Clucker enemies from Sonic 2 (who Sratch was supposedly based on) who commanded these turret things). 

    Orbot SA-55/Scratch: One of Robotnik’s robot assistants, is super intelligent with a snarky sassy attitude with an air of sophistication about him, think like a sort of robot butler version of Batman’s Alfred. He constantly bickers with his brother Cubot/Grounder but they both like to torment Snively (a trait programmed into them by Robotnik) oftening annoying him. He’s uptight while holding a sense of resentment towards his organic ‘coworkers’, due to a sense of superiority and just finding organic life absoluting disgusting. He starts off as a lab assistant robot called Orbot until his body got destroyed and was changed into the battle robot Scratch. Snively would take his anger out on him and Cubot until they became battle robots, from then on Scratch and Grounder are often used by Robotnik to physically ‘punish’ Snively when the need arises in addition to their battles with the Freedom Fighters and Robotnik's other enemies.

    Robotnik based Orbot/Scratch's personality off of an old butler his family had when he was a kid that he interacted with often and his chicken like features off his time working on his family's chicken farm in his early teens.

Sonic and related characters are owned by Sega and Sonic Team.

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KivaTheDCWizard In reply to ??? [2020-02-19 10:11:34 +0000 UTC]

That could be a good explanation.

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JorDanGo In reply to KivaTheDCWizard [2020-02-19 14:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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JorDanGo In reply to ??? [2020-02-17 15:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay!

Yes Long Claw is female.

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KryptoRingPublishing [2019-12-08 20:55:38 +0000 UTC]

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JorDanGo In reply to KryptoRingPublishing [2019-12-08 20:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! how do you like the idea of Scratch starting off as Orbot?

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KryptoRingPublishing In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-08 23:37:00 +0000 UTC]

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JorDanGo In reply to KryptoRingPublishing [2019-12-08 23:42:05 +0000 UTC]

Wait do you mean as in you don't think the idea could work anywhere else? or that not an idea you'd use personally.

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KryptoRingPublishing In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-08 23:57:41 +0000 UTC]

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JorDanGo In reply to KryptoRingPublishing [2019-12-09 00:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Okay, just wasn't sure what you were trying to say. I wasn't sure if you were saying that you thought it was a bad idea but didn't want to upset me, so just said that it would only work for me.

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Erin-Gamer-90 [2019-12-06 03:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice job on the new Scratch. You know I can imagine Alistair Duncan (who did Vulture from the 2017 Spidey cartoon) voicing him.

And the banter with Sonic & Scratch.

Scratch: "What's the matter rodent boy, never seen a chicken fly?"

Sonic: "No, but I am surprised a birdbrain like you can. Don't you have a statue of Egg Breath to drop your Eggs on?"

Scratch: "Silence! I will use my expert weapons on you."

How's that?

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JorDanGo In reply to Erin-Gamer-90 [2019-12-06 03:42:16 +0000 UTC]

I guess I could picture that voice, though I was thinking something closer to Robert Englund (who voiced Vulture on Spectacular Spider-Man and played the original Freddie Krueger), the late Alan Rickman (who played Snape in the Harry Potter Movies and voiced Marvin in Hitchhikers' guide to the galaxy), and Jeffery Combs (famous for his role in the Re-Animator but also voiced the Rat King on TMNT 2012 and Ratchet in Transformers Prime).

The Banter seems pretty good (even though Scratch doesn't have any egg attacks but I doubt Sonic would care anyways). Can you do the banter between Sonic and Grounder. Also the bickering between Scratch and Grounder.

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Erin-Gamer-90 In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-06 13:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Could work.

Oh sure thing.

Sonic: "Well another one of Robotnik's dumb robots."

Grounder: "Sonic the Hedgehog, huh? Finally! I've been dying to crush you and your loser friends! Let's go and try to break my metal shell!"

Sonic: "Man, you're one of those guys who's strong but dumb!"
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Scratch: "Blasted hedgehog!"

Grounder: "I know, the doctor is going to shut us down for letting the Freedom Fighters get away."

Scratch: "You mean shut you down you metallic meathead. Robotnik and I both agree that you're a big disappointment!"

Grounder: "Oh yeah?!" (punched Scratch in the face) "I'll show you who's a big failure!"

Scratch: "Try me green menace! Heck, I'll rip your head off myself!"
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Sonic: "So, you three and Eggman huh? You have a name yet, the Ugly Squad? The Anti-Sonic Losers?"

Coconuts: "How about we blow up and kill the Freedom Fighters Foursome, starting with YOU!!!"

Grounder: "Yeah, and I'll enjoy breaking your skull Sonic!"

Scratch: "Grounder, Coconuts, please! You're embarrassing yourselves."

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JorDanGo In reply to Erin-Gamer-90 [2019-12-06 20:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good, I'd like to a little to the first exchange.

Grounder: "Sonic the Hedgehog, huh? Finally! I've been dying to crush you and your loser friends! Let's go and try to break my metal shell!"

Sonic: "Well another one of Ro-butt-nik's dumbbots."

Grounder: "Hey you calling dumbbot!?"

Sonic: "The oversized green tank with drills for hands."

Grounder: "Really? Where? I thought I was the only one?"

Sonic: "Man, you're one of those guys who's strong but dumb!"

Also I see you managed to have Scratch and Grounder bicker like a couple of siblings, which suits them. Could you do them bickering like an old married couple? Also who do you picture voicing Grounder and Coconuts?

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Erin-Gamer-90 In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-07 03:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice. XD

Yep and they would. XD

Hmmm, for Grounder, maybe a tough guy voice like Claney Brown or Brad Garrett and Coconuts, I think Steven Blum or Tom Kenny and up the crazy for his voice.

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JorDanGo In reply to Erin-Gamer-90 [2019-12-07 03:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Could you do a scene of Scratch, Grounder and Coconuts being scary (I intend to include moments like that every now and then). Like a scene where Robotnik has them punish Snively for one of his failures or his attempts at overthrowing him?

Those seem to be fitting. What voices do you think would fit all the other characters I recently posted? From the Freedom Fighters and Robotnik Empire pics.

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Erin-Gamer-90 In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-07 12:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Sure thing.

Robotnik: "Snively, you really disappoint me. I expect you to capture those Freedom Fighters and you can't even defeat that rodent!"

Snively: (scared) "B-B-But sir.... H-H-He was....."

Robotnik: "Quiet! I would have you locked up for your failure, but I'll let my boys teach you a lesson you'll never forget." (snaps fingers) "My Elite Badnks!"

Scratch/Grounder/Coconuts: "Yes, Dr. Robotnik!"

Robotnik: "Teach Snively on what happens to failures who get out of line, but don't kill him, we don't want my family down a member." (grins)

Grounder: "Gladly! Oh-ho, our own punching bag!" (pound his robotic hands)

Snively: "S-S-Stay away!"

Scratch: "You think you had it easy? Sonic made us look like fools! Time for you to feel our pain!"

Coconuts: "YEAH! Pain!" (laughs insanely)

(They grab Snively and drag them away as Snively begs for Robotnik's mercy.)

Hmmm, for the rest:

*Ryan Drummond or Josh Keaton as Sonic
*Colleen O'Shaughnessey as Tails
*Lisa Ortiz or Kate Haggins as Amy Rose
*Kath Soucie as Sally Acorn & NICOLE
*Jim Cummings as Dr. Robotnik
*Scott McCord as Antione (Jacques from the Ridoncolus Race)
*Khary Payton as Rotor (Cyborg from Teen Titans)
*Ashleigh Ball or Debi Derryberry as Bunnie (Applejack from MLP or Pasadena from CTR: NF)
*Tom Kenny or Maurice LaMarche as Snively (Doc Ock from Ultimate Spider-Man or N. Brio from Crash: Mom and N Sane Trilogy)
*Kirk Thornson and Wally as Orbot & Cubot

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JorDanGo In reply to Erin-Gamer-90 [2019-12-07 15:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Alright nice, what about... Mecha interacting with Tails, who she views as her nemesis. Also Her throwing a tantrum after Tails foils her plan as Scratch and Grounder try desperately to calm her down.

I'd agree to those voice actors though I disagree to some points, personally I imagine my version of Rotor being voiced by Bill Fagerbakke (Broadway from Gargoyles). Also while I see that while Scott McCord is Canadian (I believe that they speak french over there in addition to English) but I watched some clips of this Jacques character and I don't think that voice really fits what I have in mind for Antoine, otherwise I would opt for a native french speaker or just bring back Rob Paulson. I also don't think it's necessary to cast actors for Orbot and Cubot since I figured that they'd just have the same voices as Scratch and Grounder, due to the backstory I have in mind where Scratch and Grounder start out as Orbot and Cubot until their bodies get destroyed, and their AI chips get put into new bodies as Scratch and Grounder.

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Erin-Gamer-90 In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-07 15:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Maybe later tonight. Work soon.

Okay then and fair enough. Had to find fitting voices for some characters.

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JorDanGo In reply to Erin-Gamer-90 [2019-12-07 15:52:40 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough.

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CyotheLion [2019-12-05 06:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Bet he uses explosive eggs

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JorDanGo In reply to CyotheLion [2019-12-05 15:31:12 +0000 UTC]

No bombs are more Coconuts thing.

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CyotheLion In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-05 15:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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Masterge77 In reply to ??? [2019-12-05 05:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Interesting take on Scratch and Grounder here, a lot of people like to reimagine them as being menacing rather than goofy robots.

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JorDanGo In reply to Masterge77 [2019-12-05 05:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Masterge77 In reply to JorDanGo [2019-12-05 06:29:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm kind of more of a fan of the goofy Scratch and Grounder, especially since it balances out the more menacing Robotnik (except in AoStH). But that's just me.

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JorDanGo In reply to Masterge77 [2019-12-05 16:16:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah goofiness is pretty integral to their characters. I think the ideal portrayal of them is something that makes them intimidating in the sense that they put up a decent fight against Sonic (they were built to do that weren't they?) but still keep them goofy in terms of their personalities. There's the kind of cliche example of Batman's Joker. But there's also the characters who inspired my desire for a reimagining of Scratch and Grounder... Bebop and Rocksteady, they were basically the Scratch and Grounder of the Ninja Turtles where they were the Shredder's incompetent comic relief minions like how Scratch and Grounder were to Robotnik in AoStH. But then they were reimagined for the 2012 series to be more competent fighters with Bebop being a master thief armed with all sorts of gadgets and Rocksteady being a genius planner and harder to take down (since well he's a rhino man, I mean have you ever tried taking one down), but they still have really goofy personalities with Bebop being an over the top Michael Jackson wannabe and Rocksteady is basically a comically serious stereotypical Russian strongman who screws up the English language, and still work for the Shredder who's a rather serious character on the show. Not sure if you've read the comic Bone but there are there's this race of monsters called Rat Creatures who are one of the major antagonists of the series. Well there's these two Rat Creatures who often cross paths with the heroes always trying to eat them, but they're also kind of stupid and often bicker like an old married couple over things like how to eat the heroes with one of them insisting on making them into a quiche. 

Basically that's what I wanted to do with my take on Scratch and Grounder make them more competent when it comes to fighting Sonic and the Freedom Fighters but still having goofy personalities. Not sure if my description indicated the goofy traits of Scratch enough, but what I'm going for is basically a snarky stuck up stick in the mud type in vein of someone like Squidward. Contrast to Grounder who's more of a laid back dimwit, also I made it a point that they two would still often bicker like a couple of siblings.

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