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A distant rumble of thunder echoed across the navy-grey sky.Suddenly the sounds of beating wings tore through the house and the cealing shook as a rush of strong wind blew over the rooftop!
Then silence.
I looked out of the window... black. The whole city was powerless except for dull emergancy lighting for the street lamps.
Only a giant surge of raw power could have caused such devastation to Saffron cities power grid.
Grabbing my dressing gown I leapt from my bed and sprinted down the stairs. Flinging open the front door I felt a rush of warm air hit my face, I was just in time to see 7 helicopters roar past.
My wife came and stood next to me and asked what was going on.
I had no idea, but it must be something big.
Our neighbours had started to come out with torches with the same interest as I had.
I then had an idea. I ran to the side porch and grabbed our old steel ladder and propt it against the house. Our Evee '
As I reached the roof my wife cried for me to be careful as the heavens opened up and heavy droplets of warm rain hit my face.
I could hear my wife faintly calling something up to me under the high pitched barking of our dog. Then she stopped barking and froze staring at the sky... then a deafening screech filled the air like a thousand nails on a thousand chalkboards.
Squinting into the darkness... i saw it. A looming yellow shape flapping through the night.
I froze. Everyone on the ground was calling up to me asking what i could see over the horizon but i couldnt speak.
Suddenly bolts of lightning filled the sky... but instead of them coming from the intimiating cloud cover that was building... they came from a bird. A giant.
Amber/yellow and black wings, peircing green eyes and slashing white claws.
Its wings slowly beating with bright sparks rippling from every feather. Its wings stiff like carboard with every finely pointed feather standing to attention like a frightned Sandslash.
Never had i seen such a creature. Such...raw power.
The helicopters circled the beast and shone powerful lights on to its thunderous body. At first it seemed as if they were hearding it in a certain direction. Then they opened fire, almost instantaniously a shot of bright blue bolt shot from the creature and lighting the sky as one of the helicopters exploded into a million peices.
My wife on the lawn could only heard the commotion up until this point but when the explotion eminated from over the rooftops she screamed for me to come down. This time I listened.
Last i thing i heard before they disapeared into the darkness was that bone curdling screech far off in the distance... I'll never forget it.
The army quickly filled the streets with landrovers and Aggron, urging people to stay in their homes as we awaited the power to return.
As we sat in the living room by candlelight my wife asked me what I had saw. I couldnt say much. In the end I looked at her and said quietly...
A pokemon I have never seen before, and, im sure, never will again... but it reminded me of a creature from stories I was told as a child, about an awsome bird that controlled Thunder and lightning in its purest form. Its name... was Zapdos.
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Eye witness report carried out by the saffron city council supported by the Kanto Air force.
Subject new what he saw but not enough to cause problems. Interview was carried out by Dr.David.R.Remus.
Not much is known about the bird, only that it resembled that of the ancient Thunderbird, Zapdos. Information was lost due to the large EM feild the bird emmitted. Voltage of the electric pokemon in question is still under analysis.
The incident is currently being refered to as 'the Great Saffron Blackout'.
The bird was lost in a great storm we believe caused by the large amount of electricity the creature gave off, the winds and electrical storms were seen as too dangerous to fly in.
Hope you like it
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Comments: 185
cfakatsuki [2012-06-19 04:15:47 +0000 UTC]
Idk if blackout wouod be the right term since it seems the skies saw plenty of light
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SAKE806 [2011-01-14 15:36:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! Amazing story bro! Do u have ones on the other legendary Pokemon?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to SAKE806 [2011-01-14 18:37:21 +0000 UTC]
Some of them I do yer, check out day of reckoning and moltres
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Shadowluvswolves [2011-01-12 05:12:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! you should make a book with these little stories in them!! I would be the first one to buy your book!
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shadowluvswolves [2011-01-12 09:09:56 +0000 UTC]
I was actually planning to do that, just getting permission from nintendo is a problem
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to magicwolfimp [2010-11-15 09:36:38 +0000 UTC]
Just the army looking for it and not realize that it might possibly get pissed off lol
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123agumon [2010-11-15 00:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Please make a website for this! I love your art! Your the best artist in the WORLD! I love pokemon! Please make a site for this! If you dont ill die!
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to 123agumon [2010-11-15 09:36:05 +0000 UTC]
lol what sort of site are you thinking of? and thanks
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123agumon In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2010-11-15 23:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Like a picture website where you post pictures of your pokemon stuff.
Only Pokemon Evo though. Your other stuff should stay here of have a different site. Make a Pokemon Evo site! And also add the cool descriptions you type for your pictures!
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to 123agumon [2010-11-16 00:02:17 +0000 UTC]
Hmn maybe? I was hoping to make a book
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123agumon In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2010-11-16 00:54:46 +0000 UTC]
Okay! Cool! I would so buy that book! lol. Can you please make a picture for me? Can it be, Lugia?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to 123agumon [2010-11-16 01:40:17 +0000 UTC]
I only do paid commissions, no requests sorry
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to 123agumon [2010-11-16 11:50:17 +0000 UTC]
Depends on how big and detailed a picture it is? gimmi an idea of what you were after
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123agumon In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2010-11-16 16:02:55 +0000 UTC]
a picture of lugia. him in the whirl islands.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to 123agumon [2010-11-16 16:14:45 +0000 UTC]
ok so like a full illustrated picture in detail yer? That would be around £30 - £40, I do sketches for about £10, and a full colour character with no bg is around £20
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Whozawhatcha [2010-10-22 22:30:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! I luv it!
But each time Zapdos flaps its wings the electicity cracks and stuff, so wouldn't the lights be blasting on and off? And wouldn't the helicopters be malfunctioning? Or was it just gliding along? Either way, gratulatio! This is awsome and Zapdos looks like a beast
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Whozawhatcha [2010-10-22 22:43:56 +0000 UTC]
Its only if it makes a big gust, and the helicopters stuff would only jam if it gave off an EM blast
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Whozawhatcha In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2010-10-22 22:53:49 +0000 UTC]
Aha! Makes lots o' sense now. Thanx for clarifying
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AnimeWowNerd [2010-10-09 07:01:50 +0000 UTC]
oooo, it looks pissed. Hope it doesn't do a Thunder attack, it'll be devestating.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to AnimeWowNerd [2010-10-09 13:01:49 +0000 UTC]
lol Yer, glad you like it
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MattSchiebner [2010-09-30 13:33:54 +0000 UTC]
i just read this, the moltres, and the regi stories... you should write a live action pokemon book! maybe even use these designs and writing for a movie... it's that good.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to MattSchiebner [2010-09-30 15:34:09 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou very much, would be fun
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HarryJ96 [2010-04-11 12:54:17 +0000 UTC]
omg, that was a beautiful picture, and the story really spoke to me, i even got chills, dunno if it was from the door being open or from your piece, but anyway, it was SUPERB
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to HarryJ96 [2010-04-11 14:31:21 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks one of my fav stories funnily
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balrogness [2009-12-06 06:38:41 +0000 UTC]
i never thought i would get chills from a pokemon fan writing...but i did...
you, my good sir, are an extremely good writer and i greatly hope to see more
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to balrogness [2009-12-06 10:28:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, im glad you liked it
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SargeMcCluck [2009-11-21 22:11:17 +0000 UTC]
You get across the raw power of the legendary Pokemon better than anyone I've known. Your work is brilliant and you're one of the few to have an equally good story behind it. Please keep it up!
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wolfheartsprite [2009-11-10 06:31:51 +0000 UTC]
Your mind is brilliant! I like the idea that Pokemon didn't always think of us as masters or friends, and that some are actually quite lethal!
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to wolfheartsprite [2009-11-10 16:34:04 +0000 UTC]
exactly Glad you like it
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nayialovecat [2009-10-19 21:39:32 +0000 UTC]
Oh, your Zapdos is big! In my novel "Pokemon Parody" I made my Zapdos (name Zapper) big like 2 or 3-storeyed house... and people said he is too big = =' I don't understand... He's LEGENDARY! He MUST be big :3
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to nayialovecat [2009-10-20 08:18:59 +0000 UTC]
I think they would be big thats the whole point in the being legends
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TeenieKMP [2009-08-12 20:51:30 +0000 UTC]
WOW. That's all I have to say. This one is one of my favourites of your pokemon evo collection. I LOVE it so amazing I can't stand it! *JELOUS*. I've only finished one and it SUCK compared to yours. You are an AMAZING artist!
Teenie
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to TeenieKMP [2009-08-12 21:19:54 +0000 UTC]
Cheers Teenie, im really glad you like it, makes me feel good to know my works had an effect on people
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Haru01 [2009-08-12 08:26:02 +0000 UTC]
hey you should write a book your narrative skills are awesome. big props bro
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Haru01 [2009-08-12 17:12:22 +0000 UTC]
I am lol, hopefully i can get the rights to sell it tho
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