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juanrock β Element of Generosity part 3
Published: 2012-08-14 15:05:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 72764; Favourites: 1129; Downloads: 971
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part 1 - [link]part 2 - [link]
part 3 - this one
part three and final of element of generosity, now that the three parts are done i hope it does better than it has so far, anyway, i hope everyone enjoys it!
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had to reupload because of a problem
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alternative ending - [link]
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Aw, that was too friggin adorable!
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NIGHTMARE IS STILL IN THE MOON!!!! WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?
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now that is true generosity
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Glad this is the official ending ^^
Felt so sad with the alter D:
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hahaha sorry about that, it was just a little joke for some friends, this is the official ending, the other thing is just a gag
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This reminds me of the fanfic, 'Simply Rarity.'
That made me actually like her, because I'm not afraid to admit that I really hated her before reading it.
Good job
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Rainbow Dash: Wow I feel like an ass now
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Has a Simply Rarity vibe to it, given the initial assumption of Rarity's supposed self, and the revelation of her authentically caring and giving nature. The first page suggested the endgame to show how she's actually the opposite of her element, but the authentic remorse over Rainbow's irritation about the loan repayment filled me in on her "business" being most-likely charitable. My only complaint is that the end-game, if you will, is quite cliche. Plenty of people have taken the "fund an orphanage and read to parentless children (foals)" route before. It would've been nice for you to have chosen something a bit more unexpected, and I guess therefore more touching, such as helping to fund regular cancer treatments for a local she knows can't afford it, but this still communicates the message well.
Good job all in all.
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yeah, i agree, the orphan card isa huge clichΓ© but on thing about me is that i like them from time to time xD couldnt resist.
anyway, for furute stories i will take that in consideration, thanks for the input!
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Awwww!
Yes! Wonderful ending!
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This makes me see Rarity in a completely new light.
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I knew there was something else going on. This may be one of the cutest things I have ever seen.
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This really brings to light a lot of real-life situations. We must not assume why people suddenly push for repayment, or why they ask you to spare some money. Their motives are likely purer than you expect. Just ask.
Great comic! Very emotional ending.
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Possible episode idea number 400,000. 12/10
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somebody should write a story about this...hint hint.
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It's touched on in End Of Ponies?
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well I meant something just focused on the idea of Rarity's misunderstood generosity
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Well, this is just lovely
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The orphanage card..... really?.... ok you win this round this time Rarity >.>
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Continued confirmation that Rarity is indeed best pony!
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This is indeed adorable for her. And something I can imagine her doing.
The only thing I can't imagine is Ponyville having an orphanage, it just strikes not as that kind of town (to small). But yeah, wonderful ending. I expected it to be something like buying Sweetie her birthday present, but this is even better.
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D'awwww... :} I was a little worried where you were going with this, but I was more than happily surprised. My favorite pony being a positively LOVELY mare, as usual.
...freakin' Rainbow Dash...
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Oh, and your style is *awesome*.
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This is beautiful, it really makes me like Rarity more.
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You've got a watch because of this.
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awwwwwwwww. Rarity does actually have a heart behind that diva attitude
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HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
Any who, I'm glad it was like this. I thought it was going to be one of those titled Element of Generosity and then showing her being greedy (like your alternative ending 
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Loved it! Good art style too.
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Wow, this reminds me so much of that fic "Simply Rarity"
Nicely put
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Goddess of everything right there.
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She has her heart in the right place.
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Good on you, Rarity. You truly are the Element of Generosity, however you may appear to Rich and Dash.
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You made me cry. I hope youΒ΄re proud of yourself
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She really IS generous!!
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wow! the ending really made this comic series stand out, as well as the unique art style. great work, i hope to see more like this!
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If only she was actually like this, maybe she would be best pony. XD
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Just one long word: AAwwwww..
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I think that is so sweet. I wish the real Rarity did this.
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