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Description YES!! After so much work I finally finished it!!!! This is my TP OC

*EDIT* I've fixed her left hand (her thumb wan on the wrong side OAO) Thanks to ~clarifying-this for telling me about it

This is Julie Hawkins, Jim's twin sister.

Personality: Strong-minded, persistant, hard working, brave, kind, passionate, moody, stubborn, can't control herself in some situations, optimistic.

Talents: cooking, mechanics, sailing, writing, good orientation.

Story: Even when they look a lot a like, they are not the same in everything. As her brother, she grew up hearing the stories about adventure and hidden treasures, soon, she wanted to have an adventure herself. As a little girl she was extremly shy and only was comfortable with Jim, who was the only one she actually trusted, and always seemed distand, distracted. She just was unable to have both feet on the ground.

When her father left, she tried to confort Jim as well as she could but wasn't able to do much for him. She tried to hide how sad she was about his father and never showed almost any emotions at all, trying to look as happy as she could, but spent most of the time inside her room, writing things in her diary. Shotly after this, she began helping her mother at the Benbow Inn to become a little bit more usefull to her mother and began getting excelent grades at school. After her 13th birthday, she started to follow her brother and escaped from home several times, sometimes even from school. She was taught by her brother to sky-surf as soon as he built her a board. This becameher favorite thing to do.

When Jim discovers the map, Julie hesitates on joining him on the voyage even when her brother insisted, just when the Legacy was about to sail, Julie jumped inside before it was too late, hoping not to regret it. Capitain Amelia got interested by Julie being one of the few woman going on such a hard journey and started teaching her most of the things she had learned over the years. By being the young and a girl, she was constantly pressured and bullied by the crew, but was saved when she spent time at the Capitan's office. She learned how to shoot a gun, some self-defence and strategy at the moment of attack.
Even when she did not spent as much time with him as Jim, she also learned from Silver and considered him as a protector.
When they finally arrived to Treasure Planet, just before Julie could jump into the boeat and escape, she was held by one from Silver's crew and kept in vigilance by them. She spent many hours without drinking or eating anything, so she lost almost any energy she could have used for escaping. When Jim came back to the Legacy, he found his sister and rescued her just after getting rid of Scroop. Julie met B.E.N. for the first time. They got back to the hideout just to find the pirates inside it. Again, Julie was captured.
After Jim's negotiations and the discovery of the portal, Julia was able to convince the pirates to let her come inside as well. When the self-destruction of the planet began, she refused to leave Jim no matter how much he ordered her to. At the end, she was dragged out by B.E.N.
During the planet escape, Julie was the one that convinced Capitain Amelia to turn back the ship, then, all she could was watching over his brother.

With Jim away at the space-academy, she started to be the nanny of the three children of Amelia and Delbert, also lerning more and more from Amelia.
One year after the Treasure Planet discovery, she bought a ship with some gold she had taken from Flint's treasure and became it's capitain, working for the academy, taking missions of whatever they told her too.


Before anything happens, I didn't draw the space-background! Believe me, I tried, but was an absolute failure, so I edited and manipulated a screenshot from the movie. Everything else was done by my own hand.
You have no idea how much I worked on this... it was exhausting! Specially the background, and on the top of it, I've been having TONS of homework and my exams are about to start....


Well, now everything there's left is hoping that all that hard work wasn't unseless.

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Comments: 48

JasmineFrost [2014-12-20 18:07:46 +0000 UTC]

OMG I-I-

I have lost all words for this perfection.       

Great job!!!

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DisneyTolkienFanGirl [2014-09-29 00:27:55 +0000 UTC]

This is very good, not too Mary-Sueish, and that's hard to find! Great job!

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juliahiddles In reply to DisneyTolkienFanGirl [2014-10-02 00:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Looking back at how I made the character, I still find her a little bit to close to a Mary Sue (a concept I didn't understand fully when I created her), and I've been wanting to make an updated version with more realistic personality, but knowing you like her really makes me glad!!!!

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Istriel [2013-07-19 15:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Very good !! She look's realy like him and I love the work put into the disney style ^^

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juliahiddles In reply to Istriel [2013-07-21 04:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your words

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Issoman [2012-07-26 14:07:42 +0000 UTC]

So cool!!!really good job!!!

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juliahiddles In reply to Issoman [2012-08-01 21:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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artfromtheheart92 [2012-06-22 22:10:48 +0000 UTC]

I love the story line! This would make a great fanfic. Great job on her!

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juliahiddles In reply to artfromtheheart92 [2012-06-24 06:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm really flattered

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artfromtheheart92 In reply to juliahiddles [2012-06-24 19:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome!

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VoyagetoDiscover2013 [2011-05-09 22:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Ong she looks just like Jim !!!

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juliahiddles In reply to VoyagetoDiscover2013 [2011-05-10 00:29:24 +0000 UTC]

yay, I'm glad they really look alike

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VoyagetoDiscover2013 In reply to juliahiddles [2011-05-10 00:58:04 +0000 UTC]

they do really lol do you plan on writing a fiction on this?

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juliahiddles In reply to VoyagetoDiscover2013 [2011-05-10 12:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I really really REALLY want to, but I´m not a good writer
I'm going to try never the less

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VoyagetoDiscover2013 In reply to juliahiddles [2011-05-10 21:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Lol all ya can do is try lol . Fanfiction is pretty fun to write.

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juliahiddles In reply to VoyagetoDiscover2013 [2011-05-11 01:30:05 +0000 UTC]

It is
Well, I'll do my best then.

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VoyagetoDiscover2013 In reply to juliahiddles [2011-05-11 01:59:20 +0000 UTC]

Good luck

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Spacergirl003 [2011-05-01 04:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice character, even for a romantic girl-for-Jim type like me. You know, I have an OC who looked like her once when I first started drawing her.

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juliahiddles In reply to Spacergirl003 [2011-05-01 05:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Sonala [2011-04-10 19:16:32 +0000 UTC]

so cute!! i love her

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juliahiddles In reply to Sonala [2011-04-10 19:53:36 +0000 UTC]

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new-book-smell [2011-02-19 18:02:54 +0000 UTC]

wow.. she looks like she's right from the movie! good job!

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juliahiddles In reply to new-book-smell [2011-02-19 18:09:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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new-book-smell In reply to juliahiddles [2011-03-09 03:29:22 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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bajabbers [2011-02-13 12:10:33 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! Drawn really nicely. She kinda does look like Jim . . .

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juliahiddles In reply to bajabbers [2011-02-13 15:18:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad

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darkslash40 [2011-02-12 20:51:19 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT

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juliahiddles In reply to darkslash40 [2011-02-12 20:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Thaaank you

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SweetVenom94 [2011-02-07 00:02:36 +0000 UTC]

she looks great !

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juliahiddles In reply to SweetVenom94 [2011-02-07 02:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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SweetVenom94 In reply to juliahiddles [2011-02-07 11:21:44 +0000 UTC]

np

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WeCouldBeHeros [2011-02-06 01:41:26 +0000 UTC]

this is great

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juliahiddles In reply to WeCouldBeHeros [2011-02-06 04:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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clarifying-this [2011-02-05 20:54:56 +0000 UTC]

she looks adorable! really! so jimmy-like yet feminine.
except that the one thumb is on the wrong side... her arm is broken!

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juliahiddles In reply to clarifying-this [2011-02-06 04:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Done, fixed.
Again, thanks for telling me

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clarifying-this In reply to juliahiddles [2011-02-06 12:27:27 +0000 UTC]

no prob! I'm glad it was helpful
i already feared it was a little too offensive
anyway, she looks wonderful! (she did even with a broken arm )

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juliahiddles In reply to clarifying-this [2011-02-06 16:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thank you

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juliahiddles In reply to clarifying-this [2011-02-06 04:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Holy-! You are right! How could I missed it! Thank you for telling me, I'll fix it right away!!!

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MangaCrazy101 [2011-02-05 07:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow
I love this, Jim a twin? XD
Haha-well I never ^^

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juliahiddles In reply to MangaCrazy101 [2011-02-05 16:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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11th-Memory [2011-02-05 06:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Dude, wow. Awesome.

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juliahiddles In reply to 11th-Memory [2011-02-05 07:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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11th-Memory In reply to juliahiddles [2011-02-05 23:09:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Whisperwings [2011-02-05 06:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Yay you got her done!! And hurray for her not being a romance for Jim! I was so scared that all the OC's we'd get would be girls for Jim, I'm pretty happy with the variety we got

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juliahiddles In reply to Whisperwings [2011-02-05 07:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I understand the girl-for-Jim thing.... AH!
Anyway, I'm just happy I was able to finish it in time

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LingLiJing In reply to juliahiddles [2011-02-05 08:56:04 +0000 UTC]

ooof, yes, too many Jim/OC stuff makes me wanna

Are her eyes green? O_O oh well, she does look like Jim at least. Though I personally have a distaste for Alternate Timeline stories in general, I think she seems like a relatable character (thinking among the lines of Aang and Naruto.) But I'm thinking about the when-their-father-left thing. Shouldn't she seem like the type that hides her grief for that event as well? IDK if it would help to add depth or something, but it makes her character stronger in my opinion anyway.

I do like the lineart of Julie. The hair seems kinda flat but that can be fixed easily, lol. Good luck in the contest!

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juliahiddles In reply to LingLiJing [2011-02-05 16:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for all your suggestions! They are really helpful
I would love to edit the lineart, but the drawing program I have makes it hard as hell, but I'll try my best
Again, thanks for everything.
Oh, I almost forgot, her eyes are green indeed XD

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LingLiJing In reply to juliahiddles [2011-02-06 08:38:08 +0000 UTC]

oh no, the lineart is perfectly fine! It's the tone of the hair I'm talking about. Green eyes... it really makes one think of the recessive genes present in Sarah and Leland lol

One more word of advice, it's best not to feel attached to one's OC if you're going to tell a story about them, there's that term called Author Pleasure which basically means that the story is written purely for the amusement of the author and not the readers (just take one plain look at a few Mary-Sue fics and you'll ) and one way to completely avoid that is to not feel any attachment, but it depends if you want to illustrate/tell a story about her anyway, lol.

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