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Jullelin — Comic School - Fallen Freedom Page 2
Published: 2013-09-15 12:10:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2830; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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And here it is. My five pages comic for Comic School. I have been working on it for 2 weeks now, but I did most of the work this weekend and finally I am finished
I really hope you will like it. Give me some critique if you feel like it, since it is after all you who are reading it
and I am attending school to learn.The comic is about if it is right to keep orcas in captivity, and answers to many peoples suggestion to let them all free.
This is my own opinions in the matter, though I have made it more cartoony.
Have a good reading.
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Comments: 8
Love your comic style.:3 And you also kept those bent fins in mind that orcas tend to have when they are kept in captivity.
Though there are a few writing mistakes if you don't mind me pointing them out.:3
In the first panel you wrote: "Plio, Tika and Luna was" that could pass as slang but if you''d want to write it correctly it should be 'were'.
And in the last panel you forgot the n in Clowns.:3
Can't wait where this is going.*runs off to continue reding.*
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Thank you very much, Sora 
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You're very welcome, my dear.
It's really a great comic, pretty sad but I like the thought behind it.:3
Love the way you draw their expressions and that reef on the third page.. asdhagl soo pretty.
Also I found another mistake in the fourth panel on page 3. Luna says: "Your both fools." but she should be saying You're.:3
Okay now I'll stop criticizing and read it again.
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Hihi, thank you so veru much, hun
Haha, thank you for that too xD I really appreciate it. You easily get blind when reading through your own text xD
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You're very welcome, my dear.
Yeah I know what you mean.xD Or if you write something on one day(or night, morel likely) and read through it again the next day or the day after that and you just sit there, thinking 'What on earth was I thinking last night?'
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