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Page 4 of 5 of a short story set in the Infinity universe with text.Media:
Pencil. Pen. Photoshop.
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I wonder if this set-up would feel more natural if the Teuton showed more obvious signs of being the older of the two - such as having grey hair in his temples and beard. I know he has lines and scars, but that feels more like a PanO vs Nomads thing than signs of age.
Still loving this, though! Your art is clearly improving panel by panel and the story and direction are both excellent.
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Thanks for your comments!
Like most artists I'm a work in progress so hopefully with time and a ton of practice I'll only see improvement.
Thanks for your critique I always enjoy reading what people have to say when they see my work.
Age-wise, Gerhardt is in his late thirties and Rona is late twenties to early thirties.
So my intention was for the sacrifice to be more faction based (Pan-O, Nomads) in an attempt to highlight the nobility of Gerhardt's character in five pages.
I felt it was more of a sacrifice because he still has years ahead of him but was willing to give it up for someone who, for all intents and purposes, is an enemy (And a disrespectful one at that ).
Thanks again for your feedback!
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