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kevissimo — Pluie au-dessus du Solferino i

Published: 2005-01-20 12:30:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1632; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 290
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Description I left her in Montmarte
Fortune tellers and mother Mary on the walls
'Two children for you' the madame said
in four years time
and pressed a stone into my hand for protection
though none of it I asked for

Burdened with ghosts of unwritten days
I walked to disposess myself of things half seen

children without names
from a wife who refuses to exist
and the sky crumbled to weeping
over the Champs Elysee

From my bag a tiny amateur camera...

It bore the name of a dead friend
that came to me as a gift in the desert

I didn't realize it then
but tomorrow
two years to the day
would mark the anniversary

So as I crossed the Passerelle Solferino
and the lightning tore the clouds
over the Place de la Concorde
to it was added a tiny little flash
for remembering

and for a moment
the day was filled with angels...

Paris - October 20th 2004
For David
Sorry I didn't remember.... till now
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Comments: 26

xxgatxx [2007-04-26 05:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful...

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U5ERNAME [2005-02-02 07:14:44 +0000 UTC]

very moving piece

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supafemme [2005-01-28 04:28:05 +0000 UTC]

wonderfully misty .....almost ghostly shot ........... ........

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castitas [2005-01-26 18:59:34 +0000 UTC]

love this...great feeling

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FixMeNow [2005-01-22 12:33:23 +0000 UTC]


xxx

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Mindcrawl [2005-01-21 13:47:23 +0000 UTC]

... and as she left for a place far beyond my existence ... thanx for that piece ... covers my mood ...

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kevissimo In reply to Mindcrawl [2005-01-21 21:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Then it's purpose has been fulfilled....thank you.

My friend's name was David and I didn't realize till I posted the photo and checked the dates that the day after I shot the photo was the 2nd anniversary of his death....and it was his camera I shot with....
Life is inexplicable and bittersweet....

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Yazzphoto [2005-01-21 11:53:43 +0000 UTC]

beautiful emotive words....

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booradl [2005-01-21 04:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Oooh I love this. It looks like something from a nightmare, and the raindrops looks like shimmering stars in the scene. The scene is so misty right in the middle especially that I just want to climb into the photo and explore. Very nice.

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kevissimo In reply to booradl [2005-01-21 08:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much....it was a magical time during that storm....

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darby [2005-01-21 04:03:40 +0000 UTC]

interesting photo, and an intriguing story as well.

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kevissimo In reply to darby [2005-01-21 05:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you....and all true as well....

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bloodred-sea [2005-01-20 17:16:42 +0000 UTC]

i like it, it's a good idea

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kevissimo In reply to bloodred-sea [2005-01-20 20:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you....there wasn't actually much thought behind it at the time. It was that kind of faux night and the rain was so hard that I didn't dare break out my big camera, so I used my little plastic one....

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almie [2005-01-20 17:02:15 +0000 UTC]


great photo! the snow looks wonderful!
dreamy. . .

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kevissimo In reply to almie [2005-01-20 20:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.... it's actually rain.
And the story is true...

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soul-lozenge [2005-01-20 16:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Bravo! I love your poetry. It always adds so much to your photography.

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kevissimo In reply to soul-lozenge [2005-01-20 21:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much....it truly didn't dawn on me till last night when I was writing, that I shot it with my dead friend's camera on the anniversary of his death. Life is funny that way....

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soul-lozenge In reply to kevissimo [2005-01-21 18:46:57 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome.

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kea-etc [2005-01-20 13:36:29 +0000 UTC]

That's a rather unusual inner picture of Paris. And your text is haunting.

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kevissimo In reply to kea-etc [2005-01-21 08:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.....yeah, of all the pictures I shot in Paris why I decided to do this one first I don't know...
The text, as always just arives when I post. I truly didn't realize the dates lining up until last night....

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wroth [2005-01-20 12:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Taken with the sketched context given in the description, the little image evokes a deluge of emotion. It takes heartfelt art to do that, thanks for sharing.

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kevissimo In reply to wroth [2005-01-21 08:21:21 +0000 UTC]

And thank you for writing that....very much appreciated....

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Mopti [2005-01-20 12:35:31 +0000 UTC]

I like this one a lot !

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Gonzale [2005-01-20 12:33:35 +0000 UTC]

you caught it. so well.

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deaddeaddeaddead [2005-01-20 12:32:08 +0000 UTC]

great photo

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