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Published: 2005-12-27 12:15:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 13418; Favourites: 132; Downloads: 1961
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Double helping of the doujin today! Just to show how much I love ya all. ^_^
One thing I love about transition pages (between one 'scene' and the next) is how getting Daxter to ramble is a great way to get things moving. Writing things for him to say is loads of fun. :3
I'm also considering doing the next page in colour. not just because the final main character intro is PRETTY, but also because I'm sure people are curious as to how Jak's clothes on this page look in colour...treat me nice and maybe I'll do just that!
Tones: Pro and Copic Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
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Comments: 26
aww this is super cute he is about to meet that girl
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yakow tipping... 
Dax: 
Me: Whee!
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Yakow tipping! *cackles* That's gonna keep me amused a while. XD
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Gleeee~! I just adore how Jak is totally ignoring Dax. 
Hmmmm, Keira is upcoming? Will be fun to see Jak's clothes in colour. And Daxter is perfectly in character!
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Wonderful! I luv ur doujin's! They stay soooo close to the storyline, I actually believe thats what has happened.
I can't wait untill the next page, Keira is one of my favorite characters! I'm looking forward for mini-her.
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*snaps fingers* Keira's going to be in next page and thats why you're putting it in colour!
And is it just me or has Jak perfected not listening to Daxter when he starts ranting? (is that why he has a dazed expression? or is that because they're going to see Keira?)
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No, they haven't met Keira yet....he's just not listening to Dax. XP
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wtf is that first panel? that tiny 1
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Enter... Keira 
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perhaps going and talking to Keira perhaps? is going to take presidence over the tipping 
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you write for dax so well. he never feels the need to shut up, and doesn't realise it when he's talking shit. i love jak's glazed expression here, aww
and i treat you good *cookie* now give me coloured page, although i looove greyscale so.
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'=^ ^=' I'm feeling the love!
Whoot! Colour o.O...
Can't wait as usual!
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WHEEE!! Jak is all dressed up in his goggles! 
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You do a very nice walk profile for these guys -- that is SO thier gait at that age. And such adorable little outfits; how do you come up with these things?
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OMG I know who's by the fountain, but I don't wanna spoil everyone 
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I'm not really bothered if you colour these or not, they're great as they are, and I'm not sure it's possible to improve ANYTHING once it reaches this kind of standard
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Is that Keira in the background about to make an appearance? O__O
Jak looked a bit spaced out but I guess he's just enjoying himself...
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BWAH! Keira! Yay! ^_^ (And on THIS page, it's Dax looking so incredibly adorable you just want to steal him. ^_^ D'aww~!)
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LE GASP! Jakku's looking at---
It be---! Yes! 
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Ooooo, Jak found something more intressting to look at
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jaks clothes are nice *they remind me on da clothes or am I wrong
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