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Published: 2006-09-01 11:35:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 14149; Favourites: 181; Downloads: 38
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Annnnddddd...we are now free of Keira for almost the rest of this chapter, now. I know, I know...it seems HIGHLY mean of me, but I promise it will end with some sort of happy ending (a surprise kind, actually XD Oh-hoho...)
I've studied the original of this page on paper, and can't for the love of me think HOW it appears slightly crooked...but every scan wound up like this, so I obviously ruled-up a pannel strange somewhere...ah well, what's done is done.
Poor Jak...can't speak AND his face went funky again due to my a-cursed inking slip-up.
Tones: Pro and Copic Sketch Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
Previous Chapters and Pages: Look at the bottom of my main page journal entry for a link to all the past chapters and pages of the fan comic!
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Comments: 63
its the litter girl crying to get what she wants trick..... gets em every time it does...
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Well i don't like keira at all,so i'm glade she is crying!!!
as Daxter says AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
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lol she's using the technique i always use when im broke at lunch 2 ask ppl 4 $ or when i want sumthin XD
but srsly, awww...!
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oh god, i LOVE Jak's face on the second panel. ITS SO CUTE!
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D'awwws ; ; poor Keira-chans. God those wateryeyes are just so adorable and sad ; ; I love how you did the top two panels with Jak&Keira side by side. The pinks look really nice with the greys here :3
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I've read all of this doujin so far so I think I should let you know, THIS ROCKS! I love this story. Keep it up!
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was it the top tht you thought was uneven?
'coz the panels don't exactly line up...
Sorry if that's how they're meant to be....
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Daxter's a bad influence on Jak. Nice job with the coloring and expressions.
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awwwwww. keira reallyu know how to manipulate.. lol
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Awww! Poor kiera! There will be something good in the future for her? Love to see the next page! AWesoem work ^^
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Different flowers. It's a type of fantasy-style backgrounds that's common in manga-style art.
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oOo... that makes sense...i think ^^'''
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everything i do ends up looking crooked, so i actually... don't see the crooked in
this. there must be something wrong with my eyes. xP
i love the big black border and the smudgy transition to the white area towards the
bottom! *o* right spiffy i say. don't even get me started on poor keira's puppy dog
eyes! :C poor girl... it tugs at mah heart knowing how it feels to be abandoned by a
bunch of yicky guys. phoo! how can you walk away from those eyes, jak?! guh! bad
daxter. DX you're brainwashing the boy already.
i can't take my eyes off of keira girl in the last panel. she's so adorable! ;^;
that pinky purple fuschia madness goin' on is a really nice touch; kinda fits with the
mood... the whole puppy love kind of thing. or something. oy. xP i don't know! but i
love it!
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Aww, poor Keira! But I'm excited for this ending now that you've mentioned it...
I wonder why Jak left her behind though?
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HALY CARP!! ...o_o I should totally pull that one on a friend of mine........ itz fine if I'm at the house, but if he wantz to go somewhere exciting .. ."nUuu ... itz just us and male things" ..*pfft - I'm sure taking a walk is strickly a male thing >___<
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The top two panels aren't aligned and you probably tried to keep the same distance between the top two and the next one below - I think that's what threw it off... 
Anyways, poor Keira - always getting left behind like that... ;__;
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Love the color you used for the flowers in the back ground.
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Jak's all filled with guilt! Ahahaha. I don't know if I should feel more sorry for Kiera being left out of guilty Jak.
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Nyah. Poor Keira! Her face and body posture is very expressive, and I like how you've shaded the ends of their hair.
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I feel sorry for Keira but yet I'm glad it's just Jak and Daxter again. I always hate when the perfect friendship is ruined by a guy or chick so annoying.
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ah of course. using the female charm. but it hardly, if ever, works. lol good job! i don't see it crooked.
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So sad.... you did great with the expressions.
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she continues to be haunted by flowers! these ones set the mood up for her better actually. loving the scene, does make me feel kinda sorry for keira, but odviously no females allowed on the trip. i mean you see how it affects Daxter even if only for a second, what if it was for the whole trip.
i really like the strench pannel with all of them in it. it clearly demonstrates the side that jak chose to be on and who he wanted to be with....not that i'm reading too much into it or anything.
great job and as usual you have inspired me to continue inking and colouring the new chapter on TnT. thanks darling!
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Yes! yes! More TnT! Hahahaha, I rule! *strikes idiot pose*
Thanks so much for your lovely continuing support, hon! 
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*sqeak* awa. i like the last speech bubble, its rather cute all squiggly like that. im trying not to say "cute" here becuase i tihnk you have heard that enough for this page, im liking the color-on-grey thing to, it looks real, pretty!and
knowing you and how you like happy-chibiYAY!!i, you cant make somthing this sad without really making it happy, so i cant wait to see what the happy surprise willbe!
good job, this doujin is turnig out great!!
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Awww... The cry-thing is the best way to get some atention. Pooor Keira.
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I can only recite what other peoples have said: poor, poor, POOR Keira. Really feeling sad for her. 
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........*sob* TTOTT waaaaaaaa~~~~~~ Keiraaaaaaaaa~~~
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