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Zoot! The OVERLY due 10th page is here! Yaaayyyy! I didn't mean to put so many tones on this...but it was kinda dull without 'em.

I'm going to try and get the last two pages for this chapter done over the weekend, so at least this chapter can finish soon and you can all enjoy.

...and yes, everyone's a bully to Dax and thus they suck. XP

Tones: Pro Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
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Comments: 54

XikinMatri [2012-05-06 21:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Why they so mean to Daxter? X3

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icefox94 [2012-03-27 07:08:05 +0000 UTC]

i do not see how people can keep calling daxter ugly! he is so adorable!!!

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SpargusCityAngel [2012-03-09 05:14:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's so sad *chuckles*.

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Spyro9 [2012-01-24 15:51:12 +0000 UTC]

HE'S NOT THAT UGLY! He just has freckles and buck teeth.

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NarniaSkyRocker [2011-08-25 01:01:23 +0000 UTC]

lol, i love this story, the way you draw is soo cute!

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windalchemist001 [2010-12-26 10:18:57 +0000 UTC]

aw poor dax (i don't know why but daxter is my fav person in the game)

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lolly-pop-luver [2010-08-23 12:06:03 +0000 UTC]

what is with them all calling dax ugly JEEZUZ!

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lolly-pop-luver In reply to lolly-pop-luver [2010-08-23 12:06:57 +0000 UTC]

I guess it's like me constantly calling samos "flowerboy" or "daisybutt"

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seussical-love [2009-12-27 16:31:14 +0000 UTC]

I am totally diggin' the interaction between Samos and Dax. It's so adorable.

P.S. "Ugly child," lulz.

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daydreamsinc [2009-11-11 23:09:07 +0000 UTC]

Okay, last line... ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!

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NightOwlisaFox [2007-01-16 20:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Awe, they keep calling him the ugly child, i feel so bad for him. Even if he is a little noisy. >_<

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Meaki [2006-06-09 07:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Meh, Daxter has a real great confidence to stand up to people say that all the time. But I wouldn't be surprised if he suddenly broke down one day and had a good cry in Jak's arms..

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COOKEcakes [2006-04-16 04:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww, this particular one is so cut. I think Jak's feeling like he belongs and has a family. oh.
Great job.

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maileng60 [2006-04-04 19:44:28 +0000 UTC]

lol cute

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RLFedun [2006-01-24 14:14:12 +0000 UTC]

"You can play with the ugly child tomorrow, if you like." XD That made me laugh so hard. But...Dax is so cute!! *continues reading comic* Excellent job so far!

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Moewen [2005-11-20 14:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Woow, his uncle is so cool!

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XxFallenYoshixX [2005-09-21 01:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Samos is justa bisnitch I guess. T_T Picking on Daxter is SO not cool!

Ohhh!! The chibi picture of Jak with the monkey smile is so DARLING!! I could just freak'n CUDDLE HIM TO THE TINEST OF PIECES!!! The hands in the last pannel are lovely by the way. And I also really like how you just decided to give the last one an all black BG. Once again!! It is a FILLER!! :3 Can't wait untill the next one girl.

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ayekastar [2005-09-20 00:45:58 +0000 UTC]

GAHAHAHAHA
OHGODs. I just love how they pick on Daxter so much. Just that line 'you can play with that ugly child later' XD I love it. And the 'I'm gonna slap you' Gods. <3 I just lovelove the little chibi Dax and Samos in the corner, and the shading of the hands really has such a neat effect!
<3

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weaserpuff [2005-09-18 17:35:36 +0000 UTC]

S'ok, Dax - You've still got fans. TRUST meeee, kid! XD;

I really REALLY dig the toning in the last panel. <3 It looks so crisp! N' little Jak's hand ees suu pudgy n' k00t! x3 I swoon over how well you've drawn Uncle here, though. Must be the 'stash, or the cane he's totin'. ;3

God. And chibi!Samos STILL gives me a giggle fit! XD Job well done, Kai!

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filthy-animal [2005-09-18 14:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness, the little kitty-face on the bottom-right chibi Jak is precious. x3

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VulpineVampiress [2005-09-18 07:11:19 +0000 UTC]

They do suck for bullying poor Daxxy!! *whaps em*

But wow! Jak's uncle does look younger here! I'm loving his regal English-look. ^^

Daxter: REGAL? He called me UGLY!

Don't take it that way, hun--Tess and all of us lovs chu! <3

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MetalChocobo [2005-09-17 15:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Poor Dax.

"You can play with the ugly chld tomorrow, if you like." <--

Great page! Keep 'em comin'!

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thrisseh [2005-09-17 03:54:21 +0000 UTC]

-snorts- I love that. "You can play with the ugly child tomorrow if you like". That sounds like something my brother would say. X3

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purpletiger [2005-09-17 03:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Awwww...poor Daxter! ^_^ He's not ugly at all! *hugs Dax plushie*

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purpletiger [2005-09-17 03:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Awwww...poor Daxter! ^_^ He's not ugly at all! *hugs Dax plushie*

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purpletiger [2005-09-17 03:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Awwww...poor Daxter! ^_^ He's not ugly at all! *hugs Dax plushie*

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Ninja-Dude22 [2005-09-17 01:23:31 +0000 UTC]

"You can play with the ugly boy tommorow." Aahahahahahaah hahahaahahahaah! That's the best! :clapping:
Another great view/read from teh Keysha-Chan. Were you watching ET when you did this? *points to last panel* Well, tell the truth.... heh! And don't stress yourself to get the other one's done, take your time.

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SesakaTH [2005-09-16 23:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Ya, bullies suxorz

OMG This gets better and better within every page! Love that cute chibi Jak posture in the 2nd panel

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Kyousha-chan [2005-09-16 22:14:45 +0000 UTC]

lol, poor Dax...

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dabean [2005-09-16 21:53:39 +0000 UTC]

HAW! Ugly child I like how "buckteef" automatically = ugly. So sad xD

The first panel's very smart, making Samos and Dax a sillhouette :3

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Timonaholic [2005-09-16 20:57:59 +0000 UTC]

*lol* Poor Dax doesn't see to popular. I am loving this comic Kylie. I think it's very well written and drawn. Sorry I havn't commented on every page, I'd just end up repeating myself, and I suspet that'd get annoying.

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KeyshaKitty In reply to Timonaholic [2005-09-16 22:56:15 +0000 UTC]

It's okay, Gem! You don't have to comment on my work if you don't want to. No need to force yourself!

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YunieYuna [2005-09-16 20:09:58 +0000 UTC]

LMAO!! XDD Niiiice last line there! XDD

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Obsessed-with-Jak [2005-09-16 19:49:49 +0000 UTC]

HUAHUAHUAHAUHUAHUAHUHA!!!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! ugly child!!! thatΒ΄s rocked!

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Keoko [2005-09-16 19:49:32 +0000 UTC]

teh long awaited page! Very nice! i have a question though, does keira appear in the story?

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KeyshaKitty In reply to Keoko [2005-09-16 22:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Wait and see.

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Keoko In reply to KeyshaKitty [2005-09-17 01:48:59 +0000 UTC]

ohh! i'm excited!

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RainbowDreams [2005-09-16 19:40:33 +0000 UTC]

lmao! That's so cool!

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oni-queen [2005-09-16 19:35:32 +0000 UTC]

aw....The Uncle is so cute I kinda wondered what happened to him now...

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neoyi [2005-09-16 18:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Cute. The way Jak's hand touches with his *ahem* uncle is extradionary touching. Awww, poor Daxter, nothing ever cuts him a break.
~Neo

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chibizelos [2005-09-16 18:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Yay another page ^^ And aw...poor Daxter XD

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GirLikeyTacos [2005-09-16 16:49:12 +0000 UTC]

He's not ugly, he's just misunderstood.

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Kyrie-Sanctus [2005-09-16 14:55:24 +0000 UTC]

"You can play with the ugly child tomorrow if you like."

XDD Poor Dax. He must be like, so handsome that they can't even comprehend how unbearably hot he is. ;3 Either that or they're jealous. Extremely, extremely, jealous.

The last panels are really cute and.. heartwarming and stuff. ;D

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Jaded-Emeralde [2005-09-16 12:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Poor Dax...He's not ugly.

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WaveMaiden [2005-09-16 11:55:54 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Adorable!

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antares520 [2005-09-16 11:36:37 +0000 UTC]

that's such a cute expression in the middle, there! This makes me want to know more about the characters... I think most of the things I've learnt about Jak and Daxter I've learnt from your fanart XD

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KeatontheBlackJackal [2005-09-16 11:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow. The interaction between Jak and Uncle is just precious... especially how he warms up to the man. XD I've always liked Uncle for some reason, and after reading this I like him even more.

By the way, the detail on his cane OWNS. X3 Why is it everyone thinks Dax is ugly, though? He's cute, I swear.

~Keaton the Black Jackal

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Stebia [2005-09-16 11:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Daxter isn't ugly!

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fedishi [2005-09-16 11:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Woot! It's explorer/uncle man!

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AlanaHikariChan [2005-09-16 11:10:29 +0000 UTC]

*Poiks the uncle* Oi! Daxxie is ADORABLE! XD Especially when trawn by the overly-talented Keysha, ne?

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