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Published: 2011-03-13 05:50:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 873; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 14
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Description My 4 year old daughter Ameliana (Mia) and my second drawing back from a 4 year "break" from art (aside from the sidewalk chalk, etc). I will upload a much better version when my scanner is working. The quality is very poor.

This is a work in progress, though I will put it down for now & start something new. I need to work on hair & clothing. This will be my new project. Any suggestions are welcome.
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Comments: 11

AliciaMarieCreations [2011-05-18 16:13:05 +0000 UTC]

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Love this. It has a great perspective and is unique too as most portraits I see on dA are of celebrities and movie characters. Great job with the lighting and I like how the paints are shaped like hearts. The lighting in the background also seems to frame her face as well. I do think that the eye on the left hangs a bit low (if you were to put a line underneath both or fold her face in half). It also might need to be turned upwards on the outer corner as well. I'm not good with drawing people, but that sort of popped out at me when I saw this drawing. Overall, great job of drawing something so simple as a girl painting in an interesting way!

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ladyshawn In reply to AliciaMarieCreations [2011-05-19 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for your comment. I love critiques because others have a different perspective. I'm to close to it & just can't see things like that until pointed out to me. Your right & I think it will be a pretty easy fix. Thank you so much

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AliciaMarieCreations In reply to ladyshawn [2011-05-20 20:01:07 +0000 UTC]

I agree, I love critiques as well for the same reason. You're welcome, and glad you're one to take critiques well!

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ladyshawn In reply to AliciaMarieCreations [2011-05-23 03:06:12 +0000 UTC]

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PrinceyGirl [2011-05-18 17:18:23 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING!!!

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ladyshawn In reply to PrinceyGirl [2011-05-19 03:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!!!!

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PrinceyGirl In reply to ladyshawn [2011-05-20 15:41:01 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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carlinx [2011-03-13 16:23:28 +0000 UTC]

looking nice, I 'm pretty happy that you are back...

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ladyshawn In reply to carlinx [2011-03-14 02:10:12 +0000 UTC]

me to and thanks.

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LaCocaine [2011-03-13 12:17:41 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing, the lips and eyes are fantastic
she is very pretty

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ladyshawn In reply to LaCocaine [2011-03-13 14:37:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much. Glad you noticed the lips. I re-worked them many time

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