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lan-kun — SDL battle 1: Io vs Seiji 3
Published: 2008-02-23 05:27:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 7700; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 47
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Aaaah aaaah aaaaah noiceeee.
I envy the way of your story flow, nice fighting scene, angle stuff... D: Makes me think that i should improoooveeee moooar!!!
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wow incredible, i love the tree analogy throughout the story 
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Great unity tying bring back the tree to serve as foreshadowing.
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fabulous. go lan-kun go! yr addition to the SDL/G-G is so very cool.
kudos!
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i think this story was awesome on so many levels
very proficient. it had a good mix of humor, story telling skills, and the art was cool as hell too
Keep Rocking man
this is very cool
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This was very cool and very well writen. You did very well shading your black and white..I could tell forground from back and visa versa...as far as your OC...
I love her.... I believe the "Bone man" needs to arrange a meeting with miss IO...
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Thank god someone is actually fighting those monsters and not trying to join them. -.-
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I laughed aloud every single time Rex was up against that wall. Love the storytelling atmosphere, sir, it has a great feel to it!
Andwho is this MYSTERIOUS youngin who'll defeat the greatest japanese yakuza organization ever, huh?
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what the shnap... now Doods the narrator? what happened to whats-his-name that narrated in the endzone battles?
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I can already tell this is going to be epic. Good luck!
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Awesome! I really like the flow of this! ^^
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ackk yes you're right. I shall correct it
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Hahahaha... Nice one. That... is alot of weight on Seiji's shoulder XD
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awesome!! cool story-telling!!!!!!! >_O i really love the "tree" concept...!!! ~^^~
awesome!!!! really REALLY awesome!!! i am soooo jealous!!
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AWESOME! great story telling as we have come to expect of you! i enjoyed it ALOT and can not wait for more!!
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I loved the continuous tree analogy woven throughout the story. And the action was varied enough to keep me interested the whole time. Great job man.
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And this page is an awesome ending, leaves you wanting more, but satisfied with what you've gotten so far.
And I love the anger... XD
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Fate seems to have smiled on Io. I look forward to exactly how Ren and Io will be tied together in the future.
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I like Io she seems like a well thought out character
good job can't wait for more
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