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Published: 2008-02-23 05:07:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 8206; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 42
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hahahaha! I loved it!
And the way you began the whole thing, with the tree thing. aw man, you got me a direct hit there xD
your such a storyteller! te-hee *punches you* ^^
Your so cool!!!
And the way you ended it made me out of breath. damn you! My sister tought I died.
"I think shes dead" she said.
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the blade barely got stuck in the wall, it didn't go anywhere
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Its awesome! The first frame was magnificent with the rain effect. I was reading the text and looking over the entire picture and the way the rain was placed made it seem like it was actually falling! A master's work! I can't wait to see what future battles brings!
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sugoi desu!
's cool! wow, you really have a great sense of poetry, using all those words and putting humor into it once in a while..
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nice beginning. your sticking to the 'tree' theory very well. XD
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hey...nifty intro. And it makes sense...
lolz gimme yo money foo!
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this has made me think of an incredibly funny parody.
bwahahahaha
okay.. its only really funny for me.
a good story is like a potato...
XD
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wow great narration and yet keeping the characters flowing so smoothly!
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That last panel is amazing. I love how serious this starts out, then just dives into humor. XD
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cool!! i wanna learn how to make one of these...~^^~ black nd white really has a nice effect!!! i LOVE it!!!
btw, i agree with chima~!!! hehehe....~^^~
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last panel is EPIC WIN. Nobody ever shows what happens on the other sides of the walls that get torn up in fights!
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you gotta watch out for crazy ladies carrying around weapons these days XD
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XD, the end of the page got me laughing hard! And he keeps staying where he is, lol
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Oh, my goodness, if just for that intro I would fave it. Stories are a kinda... I don't know how to explain, they're almost a lore, a science to be known. And you know it. If I need, ever, to be inspired for a story, I will read this.
You've started off you're SDL days strongly, that's all I can say.
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Heh, great as always, the narration gives it a nice feel and looks to fit right
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You can only survive on luck for so long before it runs out and you piss of the wrong people. I feel Io has reached that point.
Can't wait to see whether fate deems her worthy or regaining her good fortune.
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