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laughingvulcan — CyCon p6 Revision
Published: 2013-02-22 20:24:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 17248; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 167
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The characters/situations are &™ & © of Flamekin2 2012, 2013.On THIS one (Original HERE: flamekin2.deviantart.com/art/C… ), I revised/expanded the copy, fiddled with the background, revised 4076's face to add some shading detail & eyeglow to it, and fixed her helmet lines & shading...adding the green glow to her headpiece.
4076 seems to be enjoying her control over the Specimens... 0_0;;;
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Revision: 2/25/13:
"Okay...OKAY! OWTCH! Jeez, 4076 you can be such..."
"I do NOT want to hear of that, Vulcan! You made me a monster in this page, and insulted my honor! I WILL NOT accept that! I was NOT behaving in such a CRASS way to those two that day! You will revise the copy!!!"
"But..."
"NOWWW!"
"Alright, ALRIGHT! (Geez, Hecate had it right...you DO have a tentpole up your...!)"
"Less backtalk, MORE Photoshopping, or you will become INTIMATELY acquainted with our table...!"
*Grumble*
Some time later...
"Better?"
*4076 reads*
"THAT is FAR more accurate to what I said to them. I am satisfied, Specimen..."
*WHEW* :sweatdrop:
"BUT..."
*Sigh*
"I will be monitoring these from the ship...Get them RIGHT, or you will JOIN us...as my personal assistant...UNDERSTOOD!?"
*Sigh* "Yep...Got it."
"We are CLEAR?"
"As crystal."
"Very well."
*Beams up*
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Yeah, 4076 took a BIT of offense that I didn't get this copy QUITE accurate enough, so being as pushy as she IS, we made some changes to the copy...
(Not what I WISHED for for First Contact...
Next tweaked pg: laughingvulcan.deviantart.com/…
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Comments: 10
I think you should put links to the previous and next page like other people do. It will make it more easier to find everything. If you go to my page, I have two poems and they have links to each other so people can click and go to the other one. By doing this, someone can go from one poem to the next. I think you should do the same. I also hope that if you see my poems, I hope you enjoy them.
Your's truly, Chris40000000
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Not really sure on the format for the 'Next...Previous' Links, but I did put the link to the next in the series...and the last revised one links back to the first revised page...
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I don't know how to explain it properly. But maybe you can ask someone who has it if they can explain it better to you. I'm sorry if I'm not much help, but you can see if someone can help.
Sorry, Chris40000000
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Possibly 4076 and council could be partially to blame as their vision of how things should be actually cause the sudden drop in their numbers over the years. Since all their conversion crank out were workers and scouts. Thus no one to keep them from the boredom
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And if they're isolated from different ideas, it would make it WORSE...
They'd be EXISTING for their work.
...
Which WOULD make a few of them play hooky while they're at Earth...
And bring back some of our WEIRD ideas...
And MAYBE figure out how to log on to our Web from space...
And start talking with these crazy human Specimens...
....
This...COULD get entertaining!
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that it could as then maybe that how they discover Andrew and his work after looking into people around Hector
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if they are immortal there is not much need for more of them
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I was thinking about that when Flamekin FIRST posted 'Cybernetic Transformation'...I figured if the Gynoidians were going to abduct our people for conversion, they would do VERY few (on the sly) and only take our best/brightest/wisest in the different fields...The smallest of numbers.
(Or, possibly, the homeless & poor, depending on how much compassion they can feel for others...)
If the G's were in disguise down here and WORKING in businesses with the humans, they wouldn't 'promote' EVERYONE...they'd just change the one or two people that caught their eyes the most...the ones with the best/most compatible personalities, who would work WELL as one of their people.
You wouldn't NEED re-programming then, if the person KNEW what they'd be getting into and joined willingly.
(For ALL 4076 knew, her random pick of Adam & Ellie could have backfired HORRIBLY.
They COULD'VE been closet serial killers...
THAT would have gone over well with her people then! 0_o;;; )
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I am guess the immortality they have is only against of old age. Thus they can killed or die through various means
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...and the TEDIUM/BOREDOM that comes WITH immortality.
It's the same thing with vampire stories...what do they DO with themselves then? When you achieve EVERYTHING you want to do with life, what do you do THEN?
Would the reason for the G's declining numbers possibly be boredom and suicide?
Only Flamekin2 knows for SURE...
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