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Published: 2004-04-10 20:00:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 8404; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 3106
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Description Please take my hand
like you did when I was young.
Keep me close to you
to protect me across the busy street.

Though that traffic ridden street
now symbolizes my future.
So many different obstacles
that I must quickly overcome.

There is no easy way
for me to get through this.
There is no crosswalk
that I can safely take now.

So won't you just please
come with me and lead me?
Please direct me through
this hectic time in my life.

Please take my hand
like you did when I was young.
Keep me close to you
to protect me from the future.
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Comments: 304

lost-BuT-Neverfound [2005-06-24 16:45:03 +0000 UTC]

It was great keep up the good work ^_~

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xeternalxangelx [2005-04-16 21:45:01 +0000 UTC]

I really like the poem .. well written.

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DunadanX [2005-04-14 04:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Great picture, great poetry

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Flamsmark [2005-04-09 21:52:02 +0000 UTC]

derivatory work published. just incase you'd like to know.

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Genesis-518 [2005-03-11 09:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, I like the subject matter.
Good work.
Perhaps you could help me with some of my poetry. I could always use the critique of another talented poet.

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leopardivory In reply to Genesis-518 [2005-03-11 11:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the and comment! Glad that you enjoyed it.

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Felissauria [2005-01-31 10:07:27 +0000 UTC]

to me it sees that you've gotten so many faves because of the image, not because of the poetry. its sad when people have to do that to get their poetry noticed... even if 80% of the favers are looking at the image and glancing over your words.

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Alon2 [2004-12-07 21:37:43 +0000 UTC]

Critique discouraged?
that's no fun..

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leopardivory In reply to Alon2 [2004-12-08 00:19:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh well.

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undefinability [2004-11-21 01:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Stop your writing, stop your bullshit, and stop attempting to influence all these children with your preview images. This is POETRY, not photgraphy, and if you think you can influence anyone with that poor shit you call writing, hahaha.

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There, that's my critique.

And a note from !dispositioned -

I'm glad you made sure to tell everyone to full-view the image when this is poetry. You're a fricking joke. It's people like you that make me vomit when I think of this place. And what an amazing image it is as well. I especially like the way the left half of the face is covered like the is trying to "hide" from the world. Brilliant. And to have the skin pale and the hair and dress black, that's wonderful too.

Life is a busy street which is hard to cross. Wow, I haven't seen that metaphor before. I can't believe how many creative people we have at this community. It's amazing. Your word choice also sucks. It's like reading a simple conversation between two mindless morons. Hey look, alliteration. Of course, I'm sure you wouldn't know what that is, would you? Protect yourself you freakin' baby.

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lefaerie In reply to undefinability [2005-04-12 23:20:02 +0000 UTC]

Actually, ~undefinability , it's people like you that discourage others, or at least try to, from doing what they like. So you dont like it, thats your opinion. Just because you hate it, doesnt mean anyone agrees with you, and if they do, fine. Instead, how about constructive criticism instead, who cares if it isn't good (Which it is), why not just encourage her. At least others know how to do that. Obviously, you dont. Get a life and try not to be so cold to other people.

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leopardivory In reply to undefinability [2004-11-21 03:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Hurm, too bad I don't care.

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andreaofstad [2004-10-27 21:14:11 +0000 UTC]

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leopardivory In reply to andreaofstad [2004-10-28 11:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NaughtyAngel85 [2004-10-20 03:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Love this piece The Image is awsome!

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leopardivory In reply to NaughtyAngel85 [2004-10-20 11:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it!

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blackorchid5583 [2004-10-16 15:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Great job, wanderful poem

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leopardivory In reply to blackorchid5583 [2004-10-16 20:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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blackorchid5583 In reply to leopardivory [2004-10-16 23:54:02 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome

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loveless-bh [2004-09-22 13:29:48 +0000 UTC]

PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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leopardivory In reply to loveless-bh [2004-09-22 23:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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medesign [2004-08-10 04:38:34 +0000 UTC]

love the hair and feel in this piece, good work.

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leopardivory In reply to medesign [2004-08-10 07:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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aSOCIETYScyst [2004-07-21 18:23:16 +0000 UTC]

i only like the works that makes me feel something. this makes me feel like i've been already run over. good work.

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kira-85 [2004-07-20 20:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Beautifull deviation

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leopardivory In reply to kira-85 [2004-07-20 20:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Sakuzha [2004-06-22 05:32:01 +0000 UTC]

beautiful image!!
love the poem.....very touching....
going to check more fo your stuff

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Sakuzha In reply to Sakuzha [2004-06-30 00:29:57 +0000 UTC]

this is a bit late, but you're welcomed!!!....

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leopardivory In reply to Sakuzha [2004-06-22 10:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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AzHraEL [2004-05-25 16:47:24 +0000 UTC]

im :unworthy: :unworthy: your such a great person

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leopardivory In reply to AzHraEL [2004-05-25 20:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bleusoul [2004-04-28 11:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Amazing picture. It is infinitely better than the poem, which (in contrast with the intricate picture) is shallow and simple.

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leopardivory In reply to bleusoul [2004-04-28 12:22:01 +0000 UTC]

That's one opinion.

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PlastikWrap19 [2004-04-27 01:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful job, I love this.

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leopardivory In reply to PlastikWrap19 [2004-04-27 06:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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IamShirleysadmemory [2004-04-24 09:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Reminded me of a Rammsetein song...
Take my hand , lets get away just from one day...


Such a beautiful piece


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leopardivory In reply to IamShirleysadmemory [2004-04-24 23:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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CassiCloudkicker [2004-04-17 03:20:45 +0000 UTC]

This is a really beautiful piece of work. I commend you for a job well done

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leopardivory In reply to CassiCloudkicker [2004-04-18 05:24:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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CassiCloudkicker In reply to leopardivory [2004-04-18 07:27:11 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome

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TheEtherealFairy [2004-04-17 01:24:00 +0000 UTC]

So smooth and beautiful!!!!! Lovely pale and shiny white skin

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leopardivory In reply to TheEtherealFairy [2004-04-18 05:23:35 +0000 UTC]

I agree, it is!

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confusedpom [2004-04-16 20:33:14 +0000 UTC]

very touching. reminds me of my own search for the future and how i need people to help me even though i got to spread my wings and fly on my own.

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leopardivory In reply to confusedpom [2004-04-18 05:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mythicaldamienne [2004-04-15 18:33:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying. This is a beautiful piece of work, the writing and the accompanying masterpiece by myangelofmusic. Thank you is all I can say.

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leopardivory In reply to mythicaldamienne [2004-04-16 15:36:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Thank you so much, hun! I am pleased this moved you that much.

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Endelva [2004-04-15 17:24:25 +0000 UTC]

It is one of the best pieces I have seen so far. Both the poem and image... Congratulations to you both.

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leopardivory In reply to Endelva [2004-04-16 15:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, dear.

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grungeguitarist [2004-04-15 07:21:41 +0000 UTC]

OH...MY....God...*sigh*

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leopardivory In reply to grungeguitarist [2004-04-16 15:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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