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DEDICATED TO JANEEN/JSCORPIO & ALL COL. WILLIAM TAVI-POO LOVERS...even though he's dead in this pic. <.<"Spaulding was already standing there. He pulled back a bloodied sheet to reveal Tavington’s lifeless body.
Her hands flew to her mouth as she gasped. Then she let out a horrible scream and fell to her knees next to the cot.
'Oh, God No! William! Oh No!' she cried. Karen felt her world crash down around her and was aware of nothing else but William’s body. She buried her head on his chest and wept uncontrollably.
After a moment, she pulled back from him and looked at his face as she cried. ...
His eyes, which always stared intently and penetrated men’s souls, were now frozen over into an emotionless stare. His lips were parted slightly. His skin was smudged with gunpowder, dust, and dirt. Within the dirt on his face, tears had made clean little trails from the corners of both eyes down the side of his face into his hair, and down the front of his cheeks. This made her heartache so, for knowing that he had died alone on the battlefield was torment enough, but to see that he had wept as he died with no one to comfort him was too much.
Karen began to feel sick and weak all over. Her heart broke knowing that she had just missed him this morning. She felt a heavy guilt at not being with him to comfort him over Bordon’s death, and not being with him as he had died. He told her once that he wanted to die in her arms.
She pulled the sheet back farther to reveal his blood stained abdomen. ... She stroked his cheek, his skin feeling cool. ...
Karen reached down and drew his lifeless shape into her arms. She pulled his limp, heavy body up with much effort and held him against her. She kissed his cheek, and then the side of his head in his hair. She put her lips to his ear and she sobbed.
'Oh William, please don’t do this,' she whispered. 'You can’t go yet. You can’t!'
O’Hara motioned to Spaulding to step back and give her some privacy.
'William, I forgive you,” she murmured to the dead officer, “I want you back. I want us to be a family. Oh God, you can’t die, William! I'm pregnant.'"
OMG, utter sadness. A scene from one of my most favorite "Patriot" fanfics, The Boundary by JScorpio.
I had a random desire to draw this last night, so I've been working at it since then. I'm not very good at drawing faces accurately, so I heavily used these references: [link] [link] [link] ...
I am quite happy with this, and I hope you guys are, too!
...except I fooking hate backgrounds. >8(...ME NEED TUTORIALS, PLZ.
EDIT: Fixed her ear. :3
Art(c)KelleyR.M.aka~LePipsqueak
KarenStirhaley&Concept/Story(c)JScorpio
Tavington/The Patriot(c)RobertRodat
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Comments: 56
Moi-Keiniku-Sang [2012-07-13 19:23:22 +0000 UTC]
NO YOU CAN´T!!! You are an amazing bad ass, but you can¨t, ok? Great work, honey!!!
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aprilraindelain [2011-08-30 13:51:26 +0000 UTC]
*Sobs!*
How can anyone kill my dear Tavington?!D:
*Loads shotguns*
Anyway, Love the picture<3 But tavington...deadD:3
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WarpathGrizzly [2011-08-07 16:39:16 +0000 UTC]
The fanfic was amazing, but this really tops it off. The picture is lovely, but the more I examine it, the better it gets. I love the fullness of her cheeks, and the expression on her face isn't merely that of sadness; it's one of pain and torment. You've done an amazing job, and I congratulate you!
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Janeend [2009-07-26 06:01:04 +0000 UTC]
Sunday July 26, 2009
Oh My God! A fellow author just alerted me to this beautiful, excellent picture.
I am the author of the Patriot/Tavington/Bordon fiction, "The Boundary" and I am floored, flabbergasted, can't even find the words! This is a picture from one of my story scenes! WOW! She has hit the nail on the head!
I am sitting hear crying, and have been sobbing for the last two hours looking at this picture. I wish I would have known of this 2 years ago when picture was first done! A friend just alerted me to it.
I can see the trails the tears made in the dirt/gunpowder smudged face as he cried when he died. This is unbelievable! And, his eyes are open, though he is dead, just how I wrote the story.
Now I need to beg her to do a rendering of Bordon and one of my heroines!
Okay I am speechless and tearful! All I can say is thanks for bringing the sad scene to life!
Janeen AKA JScorpio
Indianapolis, Indiana, USA
author of Patriot fics "The Boundary" "Bordon's Girl" and "The Patriot's Daughter"
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horsedreamer1004 [2009-04-28 22:46:53 +0000 UTC]
WONDERFUL job! I don't even know how to critique it, it's so good, although it's so sad Tavington died. What would be funny is if someone drew Benjamin Martin's death (after Tavington killed him). That would be interesting...
Tavington
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Duco-Azukari [2009-01-06 10:58:30 +0000 UTC]
Very well done! I loved the soft colouring of the piccie and even though Tavvy's dead in this one I still really liked it.
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theLadyBarbossa [2008-02-16 07:17:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... My goodness.
I do believe I recall this story but not this far.
And I remember the author. Been a few years. Very nicely done, m'dear. M' compliments.
~Lady B
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Juniperfern [2007-10-21 20:13:26 +0000 UTC]
No not the blue eyed captain!!!! I LOVE YOU TAVII! *kisses lifeless mouth*
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flamindove [2007-09-07 05:36:20 +0000 UTC]
OMG, I love this pic soooo much; so much emotion! It's so sad, but so beautiful at the same time. I was wondering, do you have a link to the whole fanfic that it is based off of? I'd really like to read the whole thing!
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dementedsquirrels [2007-07-24 05:51:58 +0000 UTC]
definitely my favorite of yours. BEEEAUUUUTIFUL
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atmos00000 [2007-07-23 05:42:58 +0000 UTC]
Holy-Moley!
This pic is STUNNING!!!!
Just one close up and my jaw dropped. You definitely captured the emotion (it got me felling it!...it's so realisitc. The shading! and OMG - the tears!!!
Excellent - excellent job Lepips!!
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manfishinc [2007-07-20 20:57:21 +0000 UTC]
i love the way you did your highlights and shoadow, and your coloring is really awesome. excellent work
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LePipsqueak In reply to manfishinc [2007-07-20 21:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much, Jillebean! :3
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manfishinc In reply to LePipsqueak [2007-07-20 22:08:16 +0000 UTC]
you are most welcome anytime
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MouseAvenger [2007-07-20 14:46:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, how sad. It reminds me of a scene for one of my "Clockwork Orange" fanfics that I'm working on.
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LePipsqueak In reply to MouseAvenger [2007-07-20 21:57:40 +0000 UTC]
Aaaw ...You should try doing something like this for your fanfic!...Speaking of which, are you going to post it on dA?
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MouseAvenger In reply to LePipsqueak [2007-07-21 00:30:55 +0000 UTC]
Yes, indeedy. And as a matter of fact, I did draw a picture for that fanfic scene. It just hasn't been colored in yet.
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RLFedun [2007-07-19 23:32:10 +0000 UTC]
omg no Jason! He's too beautiful to die! Anyway the girl's expression came out UNBELIEVABLY good. Like, crazy martian-potatoes good. Whenever I draw people crying, they just look retarded, but this actually LOOKS like how a real person would cry, and that is awesome.
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LePipsqueak In reply to RLFedun [2007-07-20 04:12:57 +0000 UTC]
I knoooow!!! And yet he's died in more than half of his movies. TSH. What de fook, eh?
Dude, crazy martian-potatoes good?! ... ;~; ...
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KriStALKaLEi [2007-07-19 11:20:24 +0000 UTC]
ooohh...her crying face is so well done. She looks in despair but still pretty The undertones in the skin are very nice too! Nice piece overall
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LePipsqueak In reply to KriStALKaLEi [2007-07-19 21:37:05 +0000 UTC]
lol--thaaanks! YAY, I'm so glad you noticed the undertones. I remember reading somewhere to start with a good and solid, yet outlandish color as a base for skin color, then build on top of that with your peaches and/or browns...So I chose a greenish teal. HAHAHhaha...You win brownie points! :3
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KriStALKaLEi In reply to LePipsqueak [2007-07-20 00:39:20 +0000 UTC]
yay!!! Whenever I paint, I always start with a cream base color and then build up with blues and greens. Later, the reds and all that. It's an effective process
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Gracie-Gru [2007-07-19 10:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely breath-taking! Love the emotion in this!
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LePipsqueak In reply to Gracie-Gru [2007-07-19 20:39:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Gracie!...I'm glad you do.
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MissCassidy [2007-07-19 09:08:21 +0000 UTC]
Holy mother of Pearl! This is amazing! The research is wonderful, the expression, the colours.. it is so atmospheric. I will give a more detailed comment later, but I couldn't pass this up! Wonderful wonderful job!
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LePipsqueak In reply to MissCassidy [2007-07-19 20:33:17 +0000 UTC]
Reeeeee!*spinspinspin*...Thank you so much, Christy.
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caro-b [2007-07-19 04:42:44 +0000 UTC]
very great researh for the face! we reallt feel the sadness. I love it
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StormyZoonoc [2007-07-19 03:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is amazing! There is so much emotion being portrayed. And c'mon! The background is good. What is really important in the picture is the people, and that's what you did! Beautiful work!
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LePipsqueak In reply to StormyZoonoc [2007-07-19 03:57:54 +0000 UTC]
;~;...
I still want to work at backgrounds, though. >B3
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ElfceltRJL [2007-07-19 03:30:04 +0000 UTC]
"Don't you fret, m'sieur Lucius, you don't feel any pain..." Hee hee hee! Poor Tavi-poo, let's give him a kiss and he'll feel better.
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LePipsqueak In reply to ElfceltRJL [2007-07-19 03:55:51 +0000 UTC]
lol--gladly! X3 ...It's gonna be cold, though! ;~;
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OhSadface [2007-07-19 01:50:19 +0000 UTC]
You did another freaking fantastic job digitally painting this!! plus you get bonus points because as you know Jason Eye-sex = times infinity points Her expression is perfect because you really can feel the anguish and pain she is going through and it does not look ugly! ( I say that because some actors and people when they cry they either look to happy or there face become a nasty emotion-hole but you hit it spot on!) And dude before I read the description I was like “hmm that lad rather looks like Tav’s ..“ and sure enough you win the prize again. Great freaking’ job!!
sooo sad and sexy
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LePipsqueak In reply to OhSadface [2007-07-19 03:18:05 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHAhahaha, YAAAY for sad and sexyyy. :3 *eats bonus points*
Oh, man--I was worried about the whole 'uh-waaaah' bit...but I'm glad she came out alright! (lol--out of the two choices, I'm usually the nasty emotion-hole one. XD)
And, yeah, a dead Tav...WITH TEAR STREAK IN DIRTY FACE, waarwaha. ;~; lol...he's all pink and blue-ish. I added veins, but they're hard to see. eew.
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LePipsqueak In reply to OhSadface [2007-07-19 03:46:40 +0000 UTC]
OMFG. D8
...I would, too. (B
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LePipsqueak In reply to OhSadface [2007-07-19 05:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Benjamin Martin.
...nah, he would.
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RedPassion [2007-07-19 01:34:43 +0000 UTC]
OMG.... that is sooo sooooooo >>
Its a amazing pic. You catch her emotion so perfectly!!!!!!!! But anyhow....it makes my so sad...i can feel her pain with the look on her face!!! The way she presses her eyes together and her mouth.... *i need a hankie* I´m really impressed!!! You must tell me how you got this...0.0 Now you got it to be be featured next time...to my next up -date.
Ohhhh...now a crazy idea comes to my mind...:S She reminds me a little bit of my Emily...to wit when Louis will executed....
*must fav*
Oh my dear would draw this scene???? T__T
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LePipsqueak In reply to RedPassion [2007-07-19 03:27:24 +0000 UTC]
lol....Aaaaaw, thank you so much, RP! I worked rather hard on this, so I'm very glad you like it--and I am flattered that I will be featured, yay!
I did the entire drawing (line-art, coloring, etc.) with Adobe Photoshop 7.01, and used pictures from the net for reference. At times, I had to trace to be able to get the proportions right, but then I modified it to fit my needs.
...I'd love to see you do one of Emily and Louis...Except she would only be holding a head! (...maybe I'll give it a try!
)
*gives you hankie*
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