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Leptocyon β 'Monsters of Hoenn' - part 2
Published: 2011-10-09 15:49:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2446; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 41
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Longer, as I promised (more than double).
So, you meet Brendan and Zuko (yeah, I watched Avatar cartoon and I'm quite a fan.). I'll try to make Brendan completely different by nature from Althea to keep it interesting. You' ll see in next part!
And I love this page so much! An enormous work stands behind this part (even I was surprised how much time it took after I scanned it), but it was worth it! (although I will probably get disastrous grades in school tomorrow xD )
The panel where Brendan kneels in front of Nava... I just adore how Brendan turned out! Yaaay!
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Rival not acting like he does ingame and secretly thinking that our protagonist is cute? Again, similarities are somewhat damning.
Bug type fans? In Hoenn? Most unorthodox!
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pfft, that reaction to the wurmple was funny and unexpected, I thought she was at first screaming because she's scared of bugs, and heh, zuko eh? I spy an avatar reference. anyway, intense job on the battle, you show the bruises quite well
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well, it was my intention to make it look that way. This means I made it
Avatar references indeed
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Panel 3: "You've really gotten better"
Again, more commas (but don't overuse)
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lol,zuko
I was very hungry and was going to stand to get something to eat... but then
everything change when the fire nation attacked...
and wow! cool, ember so fast, cool brendan, i dont know why but for some reason many people make bredan look very weird,
i like this, he seem more... friendlier, lol
good job with all this work!
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whats your favorite bending!?
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I always loved fire and everything connected to fire, but also I adore all powers connected with the air and floating in the air AND flying. Water bending is nice but I don't like it as much as fire and air bending. Earth bending... well, in that show they only showed them controlling rocks. In my head someone who has power over that element should be able to move pieces of land, creating earthquakes and similar.
I can't decide between fire and air, I would like to bend over both of them
LOL
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Lol, interesting!
i for one, really like fire and air, but i have to admit, water bending is extremely powerful! and kinda scary
about the earth thing, i totally agree,
but if i have to chose one... fire
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Although, they didn't use whole potential of water bending neither. I mean, if they can bloodbend then they can bend with everything- because everything have water inside. They shouldn't be able to control human movements because of the blood but because there is water in every cell of our body, and animal body, and plants. So, technically, they could control plants as well as everything that has water inside.
Well, technically, every bending is extremely powerful. Every one of them could kill living creature: you suck out water from them-they are dead, you suck out oxygen from they-they are dead, you throw enough big rock on them -dead, you burn them-well, you already what. 
I guess people see it scary most because it's BLOODbending, and humans are inclined to shake when someone says blood. That's what I think :/
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lol well i actually said scary cause, lol
well i imagine this
the person is there, and well using bloodbending you could make the person bleed out from their eyes mouth ears nose... ect, and then use the blood you took from your victim to attack, and well
blood is denser than water, so every move use from blood would (tecnically) be stronger,
so yea, a one man army
lol but yea, i understand what you mean, they are all scary!
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hmm, as far as I understood it from anime (maybe I understood wrong) they are not controlling blood, they are controlling water in blood 0.o
So...as far as my logic carries me, they couldn't attack with blood because all blood cells and plasma content couldn't be controlled so even if they make you bleed like you said (which again, in my head, they could only because water would penetrate the blood vessels) they could only control water from blood. If they didn't think on that then I must say that I can't follow their logic.
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that makes sense!
i dont know much about the body nor science and all that, but i thought blood what water in them, since well mostly everyting need water,
and since it has waterm the vame goes with the vine guys from that episode from the forest that the used the water inside the vines and control them, so i kinda picture it like that
.... well that is, and only if!
there is water inside blood,
i should really find information about it, O_O
lol
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it is. Trust me XD
I had to renew my knowledge from biology for final exams so I'm 100% sure that there is water in the blood XD
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XD
that good enough for me!
i ended up looking info about bloodbening,
which was nothing new to tell you the true
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nja, I would need to rewatch that episode to see what they exactly thought XI
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i want to rewatch them too, its being years since I last saw them
well that episode what a forest swamp thing, and well there were this people who were water bender and then bend the water inside the plants and vine
"plant bending"
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well, huh to rewatch all three seasons I would need a lot of time. I meant only on that episode with that old lady and bloodbending. Oh, so they mentioned plant bending? I guess...I missed that. Not cool.
I don't know what is this Korra thing now. :/ Have you watched that?
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lol, well i want to re watch them all,
well it isnt tecnically called plantbending, but it looks like it, XD
well i havent seen it, but many, many, MANY people told me that its pretty cool, so ill give it a chance,
it kinda like a continue of the avatar, but a couple of years after that
aang was her mentor once, but he died, and well i dont know much about it only that bending is outlawed, and well i dont know much, lol, katara is still alive but she is very old, she is like a sage,
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First I though that Korra is Katara as an adult but it didn't make sense to me why would they change her name XD. When they look so similar.
So, she is like new avatar? Aang died, lol XD
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lol, yea, i kinda thought the same thing, and for that very reason i was kinda picky, like it was an imitation of the avatar, but many people said that they liked it, and that it was pretty cool, so ill give it a try,
and i think she is, and she know energybending too, which aang showed her how,
energybending can eliminate any person bending just like aang did at the end to the fire lord,
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I guess I'll start watching that...when I catch time...which won't happen so soon... *sight*
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yea same here, but one day... one day...
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LOL avatar reference! Is Zuko going to get a scar XD
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Who knows? Maybe I'm preparing something.
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Oh my, so cuuute XDD Her scream when she met the wurmple ahaha <3
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whoooo! first battle won and a female treeko!
totes reading the next parts! cant wait 4 more!
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Thank you so much!!!
I'm planning to submit next part in next 2-3 hours.
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whoohoo!!
aww man... power went out 4 two whole days. O_O. but am granted with a next part! *checks*YUS!!!
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^^ i saw some gramatical errors. mostly just adding a word or some dialouge sounded confusing but overall am AWESOME page! so much happened! and its ok that its slow. as long as the pacing is fine.
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This is refered to part 3, right?
And thanks
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yes it is! ^^
your welcome.
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Well well I like this, I am going to stick around and watch n w n !
Awesome job, keep it going ~
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Thank you very much! I'm so glad you like it!
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Well, t'was a nice little comic! I wait for more of it!
Also, there's might be a small error in case #69, with PokΓ©mon "Centar"...
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And did you really count all those panels just to tell me correct panel with error????
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Nothing. I'm just surprised with your will. heh
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yeah. Nontheless, take note that I had insomnia and didn't sleep tonight. It's 6 am here now.. Maybe that's why I had so much will to do so...
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Thanks for pointing out errors. It's corrected now. ^^
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Oh! Oh! Here, Althea!!
Do you do commissions (for free) by any chance? I had a neat idea when I saw this ^^
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Well, I've never done that before.
And I'm afraid I don't have much time, so I really don't know.
If I had done commissions I would do them for free, of course. ^^ If you want, you can share that idea and I'll see.
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Well, it couldn't hurt ^^
I have a nasty obsession with Jolteons, and I was wondering (if at any time) you could make a Jolteon for the team ^^ Just to tag along and also give the other Pokemon company.
It'd have to start out as an Eevee, of course, but yeah.
OR
It could be another trainer that you beat and then tags along with you (the main Pokemon is Jolteon--go figure 
Hope you like the idea!
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Yeah, Jolteon is my favorite Eevee evolution and I'm really not glad with fact that you don't get eevee in this game.
Well idea is tempting, I can't deny. Actually, more I think about it it seems better. hmmmm
Oh, here we go...ideas started to creep up.
Okay, I'll see (read: I'll try to find place when I can start using it 
Although, I can't see how you got that idea by reading my Nuzlocke
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Oh, it pops up in my head from time to time--kinda like chicken!
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