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Published: 2014-01-22 17:53:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 8277; Favourites: 266; Downloads: 131
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The RMS Celestia has sat in her dock for over two hundred years and is home to probably the largest population of Feral Ghouls in the entire Equestrian Wasteland. The ship was set for her maiden voyage the day the bombs fell and at that time over 3000 ponies were either on board or boarding the giant iron made oceanliner. Due to her proximity to the balefire bomb that hit Manehattan the heat and magical radiation that rushed through the area turned most of the ponies in the harbour and the ship into ghouls. She has sat slowly deteriorating in her dock which her treasures undisturbed as the harbour and the ship were no go areas due to the number of ghouls. Β
RMS Celestia is featured in Fallout Equestria: Broken Steel, Chapter 12: Vessel of the Dead www.fimfiction.net/story/2849/β¦
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i wish there was somethign like that in the Fallout games
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the desired effect
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Message from Kkat:
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Wow. Just finished reading the story earlier today and I didn't picture the ship looking like this.
When at that part I was picturing something roughly half this size... this picture really puts the area and the ship itself into a much more imposing perspective.
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Glad to know you're reading my fic 
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I read quite a lot actually
and wow.. those are indeed quite large. That one scene in the cabin with the mother was sad though.
Some minor critique on the story if you don't mind:
I noticed that there were quite a lot of grammar/spelling errors throughout the story... but one of the more common ones I seen was using 'my' instead of 'me' in several spots.
If you wanted to, you could run it through Microsoft Word to detect a lot of problem spots if you wanted. That would at least cut down on many small issues with it.
It was still a good story overall and I liked it quite a bit.
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I'm fully aware of the grammar problems. I've never had any story writing lessons and only got an E on my English GCSE plus this story has been the only one i've actually be serious in doing.
I'm glad you still liked it despite my flaws.
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Like I said, it was a good story regardless of any flaws in it.
Also glad to see there is a followup story in the works as well. I look forward to reading it when it's completed.
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Under the Red Cloud is a DLC style fic and its my experience of Dead Money
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looks olympic in grey paint. 
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oh yeah. did not notice the deck there...
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This is what I'm talking, I love this kind of FO:E fanart! The environment has so much character and it displays the Equestrian wasteland perfectly. If you could make a boatload more of these kinds of pictures I would probably die from being too enthusiastic! (no pun intended)
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I commissioned this piece, i put the artist in the desc
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dang 
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yea, she never got to go on her's
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i'm surprised she's still floating after 200 years
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she isn't, she's sitting on the harbour floor (she had about 6 feet to sink)
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ah got ya, does she have a sister ship named Luna?
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what happened to her?
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To the Bermareda Triangle!
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dear lord the Olympic class has worse luck in Equestria then on Earth one becomes a goul ship and the other vanishes
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Oh, so that's the name of the ship? Β I could barely make it out, and I thought it was either Titanic or Olympic.
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she's basically a Ponyfied TitanicΒ
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can you say ghost ponies anyone
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really that ship reminds me of a movie that has a haunted crews ship
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she is basically a Ponyfied Titanic
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glad you like it
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hot atmosphere! reminds me of horror films and such
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its kinda like a horror movie inside
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ooh that reminds me have you seen sea evil (ghost ship)?
it reminds so much of it!
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I have. that movie got me to like Mudvanye
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