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Chapter 1 End.

OH MAN YOU GUYS

I MADE IT

I FINISHED CHAPTER 1

So all you lurkers who have not been commenting, now would be a GREAT time to voice your thoughts! Or even leave a critique. :3

Thanks for sticking with me these past... what, 8 months? Wow... awesome. It's been awesome, and here's hoping you stick around for the next 50 bajillion chapters! Or maybe I'll be pretentious and start calling them "episodes". IDK.

Don't know when I'll start Chapter 2 -- I'd like to do some character art and planning before I start it, but inspiration and productivity might strike me anyway. xD; Oh well. We'll see how that goes!

Oh, yeah, speaking of chapter 2 -- contest. Who won the cameo? Let's take one more look at the entries:

[link] by ~vixenmel
[link] by *charlot-sweetie
[link] by ~maximaxx
[link] by ~Kaelita-kun
[link] by ~SkittyTails
[link] by ~BlackwaterNoble
[link] by =ELASTAS
[link] [link] [link] [link] and [link] by ~piplup25
[link] by ~metaknight-fangirl13
[link] by ~CoroQuetz
[link] and [link] by ~lightsideluc

Part of the reason this page took so long was because I had to go through all the entries and do some judging. It was really hard... the entries were all fantastic and charming. I really liked the variety I got, especially! Everyone envisions Ash differently and it was cool to see how everyone pictured him in a classroom setting.

In the end though, I've decided that the winner is...



Congratulations! While all the entries were really good, 's writing style was witty and smooth, and despite the hyperactive pacing and short attention span of the narrator it was still easy to follow the storytelling. He was able to include humor, gross humor, action, character development, a short moment of horror (Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!) and even a dash of romance at the end and yet was able to keep it both cohesive and within the general, light-hearted attitude of the story. :3

So, good sir, either you, your OC, or your PokΓ©sona gets a short, minor cameo in chapter 2, along with ~CyMoahk 's as well (since he won the math contest on page 13).

AWESOME!

And all you guys who didn't get to enter or didn't win, don't worry, there will be other chances down the road. :3
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Comments: 238

KMWS In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 05:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I figured Ash couldn't speak human language anymore.

I like the look on Ash's face in the last panel. I like his eyes and how his face looks smooshed against Oliver's shoulder

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lilmarisa In reply to KMWS [2011-03-19 05:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^_^ I wanted a good cross between "Aww" and "NOOO"

And I haven't forgotten your note, getting to it now

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Samswimmer In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 05:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Pika pika to you too, little guy!

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lilmarisa In reply to Samswimmer [2011-03-19 05:20:14 +0000 UTC]

YOU MADE AN OLIVER PLZ

THAT'S ADORABLE β™₯

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Samswimmer In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 05:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes I did. :D

Although I think I maybe should have used instead of .

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lilmarisa In reply to Samswimmer [2011-03-19 05:30:49 +0000 UTC]

haha, either one works, I suppose xD

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Samswimmer In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 05:32:11 +0000 UTC]

The one that I didn't use practically has the oh crap built in. XD It's liek a combo package! Two for the price of one! Can I use a coupon with that for even more great bargains? Oh wait, this isn't a commercial...

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Curfy97 In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 04:52:53 +0000 UTC]

mwa ha haaaaa XD

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lilmarisa In reply to Curfy97 [2011-03-19 05:31:00 +0000 UTC]

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Fan-tastic In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 04:35:23 +0000 UTC]

This is very sad in an adorable and suspense-inspiring way. I'mah finally start watching.

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lilmarisa In reply to Fan-tastic [2011-03-19 04:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I was definitely going for the mixed-mood thing. :3

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midnightwolf053 In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 04:14:47 +0000 UTC]

Oliver I'm going to freakin' slap you across the face! D:< With a piece of ham >:l

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lilmarisa In reply to midnightwolf053 [2011-03-19 04:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I like ham :3

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midnightwolf053 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-20 05:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Same here XD

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aethergamer In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 04:02:00 +0000 UTC]

If anything, I'm waiting to find out the reason why other Pokemon hate Oliver. Ash is gonna regret doing something in that regard.

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lilmarisa In reply to aethergamer [2011-03-19 04:13:51 +0000 UTC]

All will be revealed in time~

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jd896 In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 03:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Knew it

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lilmarisa In reply to jd896 [2011-03-19 03:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Good call

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OneWingedMuse In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 03:44:19 +0000 UTC]

uh oh! ash has been smushed!

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lilmarisa In reply to OneWingedMuse [2011-03-19 03:48:01 +0000 UTC]

He is the most smushable thing, though, isn't he?

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OneWingedMuse In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:50:43 +0000 UTC]

so true so true! he's in constant danger of it. it was only a matter of time.

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lilmarisa In reply to OneWingedMuse [2011-03-19 03:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Heh! It's his own fault for being so adorable!

I'm glad you like it so far ^^

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OneWingedMuse In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 04:55:13 +0000 UTC]

it's very cute. congrats on finishing the first chapter too. i still haven't managed to do so in my poke'doll manga.

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lilmarisa In reply to OneWingedMuse [2011-03-19 05:30:41 +0000 UTC]

That's okay. You've got a lot on your plate. Thanks! ^^

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FadeThePikachu In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:57:19 +0000 UTC]

*See's XGblue's comment* That's so rude of him...

This is pretty good. I kinda assumed he couldn't understand Ash; poor guy's stuck as a Pikachu. XD

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lilmarisa In reply to FadeThePikachu [2011-03-19 03:06:42 +0000 UTC]

It's like the pot and kettle metaphor, except the kettle is chrome steel.

Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. :3 Hope to see you stick around!

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FadeThePikachu In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:10:26 +0000 UTC]

At least no one's trying to argue with him. And I can't think of the metaphor exactly. XD

Yep.

Oh, would you like to join my new group? #PKMNStridentUniverse

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lilmarisa In reply to FadeThePikachu [2011-03-19 03:11:50 +0000 UTC]

I'll take a look. :3

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FadeThePikachu In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Ok.

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MurphyAlter In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:55:13 +0000 UTC]

I can understand why he would be suprised. He didn't have this problem the first time.

Luckily for him, he can still write, even if he has to fingerpaint due to inability to hold a pencil correctly. Even if it means drawing letters in the dirt.

Or am I not supposed to think about that?

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lilmarisa In reply to MurphyAlter [2011-03-19 02:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Well, hey, now. He's forgotten how to speak own language. What makes you think writing will be any easier?

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MurphyAlter In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... While I question the likelihood of that, it's YOUR story...

OH. MY. GOD.

HE'S GOING TO END UP GOING TO TEAM ROCKET'S MEOWTH FOR HELP.

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lilmarisa In reply to MurphyAlter [2011-03-19 03:26:52 +0000 UTC]

He might have to! ;3

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MurphyAlter In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:29:31 +0000 UTC]

YES! Well... not so much now... it won't be a suprise...

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lilmarisa In reply to MurphyAlter [2011-03-19 03:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Just because it's a good idea doesn't mean that option will be available to him ;3 so maybe not!

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MurphyAlter In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... I can't think of any alternatives... except maybe his own Pikachu.

O-O

That would be interesting.

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lilmarisa In reply to MurphyAlter [2011-03-19 03:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! But, he has to find them first... >:3

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MurphyAlter In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 07:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Meanwhile: Brock, Dawn, and Pikachu had just arrived in Pallet Town for Ash's funeral, and...

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lilmarisa In reply to MurphyAlter [2011-03-19 11:49:21 +0000 UTC]

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kari10101 In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww, Ash isn't able to be heard!
Aww...Ash is so cute!
Aw - Wait, he's the little bugger. =/

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lilmarisa In reply to kari10101 [2011-03-19 03:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you can't resist the cute >D

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kari10101 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww, but the cute got a bit worse. p= Dun like pikachu that much.

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lilmarisa In reply to kari10101 [2011-03-19 03:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that's okay. ^^

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kari10101 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 04:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks for understanding.

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maximaxx In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Anyone has a blue translator? There is a pikachu there that might need it.

Β«You guys sound so much cuter when you're not trying to kill me! Β» you've got to love the absolute truth in those words. Things that aren't trying to kill you are cuter than the ones that do, A TOTAL GENIUS LADIES AND GENTLEMEN. (yeah, I get it, he went through a lot with them, but I had to put the emphasis on that statement).

Last but not least, it's still as heartwrenching when you look at Ash's face in the last panel.

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lilmarisa In reply to maximaxx [2011-03-19 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]

I've got a purple translator but that will probably end up garbled xD

Oliver's just too excited to think straight. x3 I'm glad it had the effect I wanted, though!

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maximaxx In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Let's try it! Even if it won't work, that gibberish might tip them off! Plus, Ash could try to learn to speak red too. It wouldn't be a problem then, would it be?

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lilmarisa In reply to maximaxx [2011-03-19 03:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Maybe if he spoke blue with a reddish accent...

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maximaxx In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:29:15 +0000 UTC]

Hum... maybe... if your translator isn't a total mess, it might translate a word or too... with Ash's luck though, it'll be the most useless words that will be translated. Wanna bet his Β«I'm not a pikachuΒ» would turn out into Β«I'm a pikachuΒ»?

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lilmarisa In reply to maximaxx [2011-03-19 03:56:08 +0000 UTC]

or it might come out in a different language all together x3

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