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Chapter 1 End.
OH MAN YOU GUYS
I MADE IT
I FINISHED CHAPTER 1
So all you lurkers who have not been commenting, now would be a GREAT time to voice your thoughts! Or even leave a critique. :3
Thanks for sticking with me these past... what, 8 months? Wow... awesome. It's been awesome, and here's hoping you stick around for the next 50 bajillion chapters! Or maybe I'll be pretentious and start calling them "episodes". IDK.
Don't know when I'll start Chapter 2 -- I'd like to do some character art and planning before I start it, but inspiration and productivity might strike me anyway. xD; Oh well. We'll see how that goes!
Oh, yeah, speaking of chapter 2 -- contest. Who won the cameo? Let's take one more look at the entries:
[link] by ~vixenmel
[link] by *charlot-sweetie
[link] by ~maximaxx
[link] by ~Kaelita-kun
[link] by ~SkittyTails
[link] by ~BlackwaterNoble
[link] by =ELASTAS
[link] [link] [link] [link] and [link] by ~piplup25
[link] by ~metaknight-fangirl13
[link] by ~CoroQuetz
[link] and [link] by ~lightsideluc
Part of the reason this page took so long was because I had to go through all the entries and do some judging. It was really hard... the entries were all fantastic and charming. I really liked the variety I got, especially! Everyone envisions Ash differently and it was cool to see how everyone pictured him in a classroom setting.
In the end though, I've decided that the winner is...
Congratulations! While all the entries were really good, 's writing style was witty and smooth, and despite the hyperactive pacing and short attention span of the narrator it was still easy to follow the storytelling. He was able to include humor, gross humor, action, character development, a short moment of horror (Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!) and even a dash of romance at the end and yet was able to keep it both cohesive and within the general, light-hearted attitude of the story. :3
So, good sir, either you, your OC, or your PokΓ©sona gets a short, minor cameo in chapter 2, along with ~CyMoahk 's as well (since he won the math contest on page 13).
AWESOME!
And all you guys who didn't get to enter or didn't win, don't worry, there will be other chances down the road. :3
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Comments: 238
maximaxx In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 03:59:05 +0000 UTC]
I vote for green! come on, make him speak green next time! x)
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lilmarisa In reply to maximaxx [2011-03-19 04:01:40 +0000 UTC]
This is Ash we're talking about, he can't keep more than one thought in his head at one time, much less multiple languages!
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Spidey96 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-05-19 21:50:04 +0000 UTC]
thats so true. "how can any one person be so dense" haunter vs kadabar first season.
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Dustomega In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:44:37 +0000 UTC]
hay Ash! i know how you can get your voice back!
Ash: Tell me!
Oh you'll find out, I'm about to summon it!
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lilmarisa In reply to Dustomega [2011-03-19 02:47:32 +0000 UTC]
Haha! I predicted this! You activated my trap card!
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BlueMew210210 In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:41:54 +0000 UTC]
I SAW THAT ONE COMING. YESSSSS. aw and pikachu ash looks so cute in the last panel........
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BlueMew210210 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]
I want to give him a hug =w=
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XGBlue In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:41:53 +0000 UTC]
1) About time you ended the chapter
2) I knew your inner retard would prevail.
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lilmarisa In reply to XGBlue [2011-03-19 03:05:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've been putting a lot of effort into bringing out my inner retard. It's been hard, especially when you make it look so easy.
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XGBlue In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:13:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh btw, (and this is out of curiosity, not insolence) why does this page look a little sloppier than the others?
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lilmarisa In reply to XGBlue [2011-03-19 03:15:02 +0000 UTC]
It's got similar mistakes as the others, but the bigger panels allow you to see the imperfections more clearly.
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XGBlue In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:16:27 +0000 UTC]
Okay. It just didn't seem up to your normal standards, but that explains it. Take your time the next time you do big panels like this, it may help.
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Browntown747 In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh No Ash can't speak human anymore!!!
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lilmarisa In reply to Browntown747 [2011-03-19 02:42:57 +0000 UTC]
He can speak only blue :C
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lilmarisa In reply to Browntown747 [2011-03-19 03:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Poke-speak uses blue word bubbles, did you catch that? ;3
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Browntown747 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 03:28:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh I should have noticed that I am so dumb sometimes [I'm guessing if Ash's pikachu heard Ash talking in pikachu he might recoqnise his voice
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Browntown747 In reply to lilmarisa [2011-03-19 04:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Yay At least that would be interesting or Ash could write a letter to Oliver right?
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lilmarisa In reply to Browntown747 [2011-03-19 04:15:22 +0000 UTC]
If he remembers how. Aphasia usually affects both speech and writing.
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lilmarisa In reply to Browntown747 [2011-03-19 04:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Loss of communication/language.
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WarriorLoverInc In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:41:14 +0000 UTC]
Ash's face in the last panel.
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Shadymissionary In reply to ??? [2011-03-19 02:39:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh...poor Ash.
I'm really looking forward to chapter 2. Can't wait to see Team Rocket's reaction.
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