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Published: 2018-12-06 23:58:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 5747; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 0
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Let's post something more or less deserving attention.
LOTS of compositional mistakes here.
"Can you spot them, dear viewer?"
No seriously.
If you are an artist try to spot what I did wrong here.
Will be exercise for ya.
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I don't know what exactly is going on with the girl's left leg, but it seems a bit broken to me. Like the behind (and the band wrapped around it, if that is symmetrical with the other leg) is posed as if she is spreading her legs widely, but the foot visible underneath her stomach suggests it was supposed to be a knee-pulled-up-pose situation. Not certain if that is anatomical or compositional wise though.
Hrmn, shouldn't her right foot be laid down more... Flatly against the ground? Or have her toes posed against it in a "I'm using this to push myself further" sort of way?
I suppose listing the things about the arm and odd posing of the man would be cheating because I did look at the comments already placed. 
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I am still waiting if someone will name one main compositional mistake and one more logical mistake.
Most mistake can be skipped, but those two... Not just mistakes. Illustrational sins.
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Hmmm alright. Challange accepted.
Well his left leg is 50% missing and even then it's angled very weirdly as well as her left foot which appears to be folded towards her body and folded again so the sole is pointing upwards.
That being saaaaaaid... dat booty is magnificent.
But yeah other than those small compositional mistakes the anatomy is pretty solid so I wouldn't worry about it too much! ^^
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Yes!
His left leg is root of all problems.
a) he doesn't look like he was running and suddenly stopped.
b) all about readable silhouette and separating planes...
Which is none here. It looks like his leg stuck in her butt 
Thank you
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Not a problem, always a pleasure to see some lovely art.
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Thank you ^_^
Love your art too.
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If I had to guess (not counting rong's input) I would say
- The Male's lower body is strangely positioned
- His left arm is strangely positoned
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Right! But again - these are anatomical.
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then i am very stumped and you are a better artist than me lol
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Oh don't say that.
We all started from somewhere and I, personally, FAAAAAR from decent artist.
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silly pic,i think it looks fine over all but her left foot is in the wrong spot
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Yes, indeed... but it's anatomy.
Compositional mistake: HIS left foot.
... and few more others.
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