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Okay. Now I really need people's observations.
Does anything look "off"? And if so, what and in what way?
Referring more to the face, but any comments would be helpful.
This would be the point where I ask my professor for specific suggestions (because the face-- mainly the eyes-- look off to me), but you know, it's Thanksgiving break here. Which isn't helpful to that end. XP
And I'm also at a point where I've stared at this too long. :v

But yeah. Anyway. This is my final project for my Drawing I class, to do a self portrait through observation using charcoal. Used grey toned paper, charcoal (vine, pencil, compressed), chalk (white, white pencil). Blah blah blah. x3

Compared to the last step, I worked on the entirety of the head. It's mostly done, but I really need to do some fine tweaks so it doesn't look off. :/

So to that end... please help me lol. x3

List of WIPs:
WIP 1

WIP 2

WIP 3
WIP 4
WIP 5

Description

Okay. Now I really need people's observations.
Does anything look "off"? And if so, what and in what way?
Referring more to the face, but any comments would be helpful.
This would be the point where I ask my professor for specific suggestions (because the face-- mainly the eyes-- look off to me), but you know, it's Thanksgiving break here. Which isn't helpful to that end. XP
And I'm also at a point where I've stared at this too long. :v

But yeah. Anyway. This is my final project for my Drawing I class, to do a self portrait through observation using charcoal. Used grey toned paper, charcoal (vine, pencil, compressed), chalk (white, white pencil). Blah blah blah. x3

Compared to the last step, I worked on the entirety of the head. It's mostly done, but I really need to do some fine tweaks so it doesn't look off. :/

So to that end... please help me lol. x3

List of WIPs:
WIP 1

WIP 2

WIP 3
WIP 4
WIP 5