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Aang's always liked sleight-of-hand. Pulling handkerchiefs out of sleeves, swallowing a dozen eggs, making a dovesparrow disappear. A puff of smoke, a magical pass or two, and poof! into thin air! Then, with a mysterious smile and a snap of the fingers, the bird returns, cooing as if it had never left."Wonderful!" the audience cries. "Marvelous! Do it again!"
"Absolutely not!" the magician winks. "Whatever would you do if I couldn't make it come back again?"
The children laugh and nudge each other, because really, who ever heard of something vanishing and never coming back?
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(Abra!)
It doesn't really sink in at first, how long Aang's been asleep. He knows it in his head, of course, but there's a gorgeous girl who wants to sled with him and he's lost anyway, and if the air tastes a little smokier than it did a few hours (days? weeks?) ago, it's just because he's so far south and they use different wood for their campfires.
Even when she tells him it's been a hundred years, even when they see the desolation and lifelessness at the temples, he's still not convinced. The airbenders worked magic with the winds, didn't they? And whoever heard of a magic trick that didn't bring the lost home?
He keeps his certainty tucked away in a safe corner of his mind, just for when they've stumbled across another ruin, when they've uncovered a little more of the world and found no airbenders in it. Then he reaches for that certainty, the knowledge that nothing's ever really gone, and steps forward with new vigor. There's plenty of world to explore yet.
Suddenly, though, there's a war in his lap (another of those things he knew with his head and not his heart) but it's abruptly real and the world is waiting (has been waiting) on him to end it, and everything he was gets pushed aside in order for him to become who he was meant to be. They all work terribly hard for a terribly long time, and finally at the end, he stands victorious and tired and wonderfully not alone, because somewhere along the line he loved a girl and she loved him, and that makes it easier to forget that there were others who once made him not alone, too.
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(Kadabra!)
He's walking with this girl, now, in a podunk little village in the middle of nowhere. They're seeing what few bits of the world they haven't yet (he's having the time of his life). They stop at a roadside vendor; he's selling these little fruit pies and they look absolutely horrible, covered in pastel-colored swirls, but Aang insists on buying two of them anyway. As they walk away with their questionable spoils, he laughs and explains. He tells her of the stuffy old monks at the Southern Air Temple, how he and Gyatso would make fruit pies (that, honestly, really didn't look anything like these--for one thing, they were edible, but it's the nostalgia that's important anyway) and send them soaring through the air to--
He can't remember Gyatso's face.
The realization is so sudden he nearly chokes on it. Katara touches his shoulder in concern, but he's completely unaware of it; he's diving into his mind, looking for that little corner that he keeps his most important memories in, the things that you do not forget like faces and voices and the way wood smells after the monks rub oils into it for hours.
There's only a shadow left. It's like a little hand has gently painted over this corner of his mind in greys, smoothing out all the important edges, sanding down his treasures into faces as featureless as if Koh himself had slipped in. He sinks to his knees in the middle of the street; Katara wraps her arms around him and he grips her hand like a drowning man, because she loves him and she's real and he can't remember, and there is no one at all to help him. Then, like smoke suddenly dissipating in a strong breeze, he realizes--there will never be. He is the last.
Really, it's the greatest vanishing act of them all.
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(Alakazam!)
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A double feature (both fanfic and fanart) for Kataang Week at the Kataang Livejournal community . Prompt 2: Smoke and Mirrors. I apologize that this isn't more shippy, but this is what I really wanted to do for this challenge.
Done entirely in CS2, about five hours. Texture is by ro-stock but has since been removed.
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Comments: 70
FreakyFanatic101 [2013-09-28 20:25:57 +0000 UTC]
You write! You draw! You make me drown in feels! Bravo!
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4elements22 [2013-02-06 19:33:35 +0000 UTC]
This is beautifully written and drawn! I love it so much!!
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Gibbythesecond [2013-01-23 06:34:35 +0000 UTC]
I need a 'SuperFavorite' button. The picture is incredible by itself, but then that story is heartbreaking.
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BINXlover518 [2012-11-17 14:08:03 +0000 UTC]
okay let me get this straight, aang was raised by gyatso, well then what happened to his parents or where are his parents?
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sapphireswimming [2012-02-23 22:14:38 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic picture and the story is incredible. Wow. I am in awe right now. Wonderful job!
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DanceInTheRain23 [2012-01-28 22:39:08 +0000 UTC]
a. maz. ing. great art AND great fanfiction. Awesome!
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Avatalblue26 [2011-11-24 21:38:43 +0000 UTC]
I amazed and I'm sad
Aang is not the people he loves lost
But Katara comfort him and love him
To be happy .
I love Katara and Aang.
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Padfoot3010 [2011-11-06 19:54:26 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful picture and story! They complement each other well
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SlargTheGnome [2011-10-21 06:10:56 +0000 UTC]
What a wonderful and sad picture. It really drives it home how alone Aang is.
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RetakeThisWorld [2011-07-29 05:39:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh, my I loved your description. It's beautiful.
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SueaNoi [2010-11-07 11:53:46 +0000 UTC]
so...so sad. D:
but it's beautiful, both the art and the story.
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Non-existantReality [2010-07-26 19:05:58 +0000 UTC]
Wow. You don't find many who can write AND create visual works of art.
I really like the faded picturs in the background; I can see Gyatso and a woman similar to Yangchen and other children. One of my first thought was that maybe you should have gone with the cooler side of the color palette, but I realize now that you chose the reds and yellows - most likely - to signify the fire that brought the Air Nomads down.
By writing the story in the present tense, you made it possible for the readers to feel as if the story is coming to life before our eyes. Once I reached the end of the story, it made Aang's realization a lot more heart-wrenching. Overall, your writing represented the essenses of the characters - from the perspective of the TV show - very believably. That is why I can appreciate your decision to not be "more shippy." Sure, pieces on tragedy can have a dash of romance, but it wouldn't be a tragedy if there wasn't an overpowering theme of sadness.
All in all, and great "double feature."
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LithiumJones [2010-07-21 16:23:12 +0000 UTC]
I love this work. It's truly evocative and wonderful. There is a sadness, but that is life, and life moves on. I like the intro about the magician. At first it makes little sense in relation to the picture, but by the end it makes all the sense in the world and it's a perfect relating of what Aang has had to endure.
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LuvsTilly [2010-06-27 01:48:15 +0000 UTC]
wow! THATS A SAD STORY! makes me think.....and it kinda sumz up the whole series?!
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randomchap [2010-05-30 05:24:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow...
Well, ladies and gentlemen, I think that after this...we should all agree never to write again, because nothing we do will ever top this.
Well done good sir, well done.
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JoeMerl [2010-04-24 03:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Masterfully done, and an interesting take on this idea. Nice work.
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Boo--Xo [2010-04-20 14:46:38 +0000 UTC]
What a wonderful oneshot. I thoroughly enjoyed, and yet did not, reading this. While your writing is so beautiful, and you touched on areas of Avatar that I'd never really thought much of, I was so sad for Aang, it must be terrifying to be on the brink of extinction. You really captured the child-like fear I imagine Aang would have, because in reality, he still was a child at the end of the series.
Beautiful, bravo.
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CaseyJewels [2010-04-19 23:56:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh...
That was amazing. I'm in total awe of your writing skills, and the picture fits it perfectly.
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Suikodeniac [2010-04-19 00:09:49 +0000 UTC]
i like the picture but the fan fiction is really excellent. i wish i had the skill for making stories like this. =]
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NileCrocodile [2010-04-19 00:03:37 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful and adorable and sad. :[ Great artwork, wonderful story.
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Ashuisha [2009-06-17 02:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Aang is so cheerful that you forget he has lost so much more than Zuko, who always reminds you of his past through his despair.
This was beautiful.
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A-young-soul [2009-04-13 03:46:36 +0000 UTC]
wow, great job~sad time for Aang( glad Katara there)
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DenraWaterWolf [2009-03-23 23:33:31 +0000 UTC]
This is phenomenal work, what drew me in was the picture, but the story to follow it is amazing. I absolutely love it... genius
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danidanidanig [2009-01-24 04:46:35 +0000 UTC]
This is breath taking. You can feel the pain Aang is going through. Great job!
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theSimplyUninspired [2008-10-29 23:14:00 +0000 UTC]
(Late post is late.) But once I found this, I just... It's beautiful. Everything- everything about it is just... I love it.
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Shahrezad1 [2008-10-27 07:20:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is a wonderful prompt, especially matched with the fic description. Great job, especially with the emotions portrayed. You can really see the thought that went into this, into understanding Aang and all he's gone through.
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Melawen26 [2008-09-16 04:05:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow, so sad, and sweet, at the same time. Great job.
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medievallass [2008-09-08 01:51:07 +0000 UTC]
What a lovely piece and story. I always feel so sorry for Aang and the Airbenders. It really lends a bittersweet feeling to the story. The way Katara is holding Aang is so sweet and tender so sad.
Hayley
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LKmoonlight [2008-08-29 05:53:31 +0000 UTC]
This piece together with the fanfic proves once again that there is beauty in the breakdown. What a phenomenal comp. I created an account just to tell you that. Well done and thanks for sharing.
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luculentquark In reply to LKmoonlight [2008-08-30 06:00:16 +0000 UTC]
I think that might be the best, most touching compliment I've ever received. Thank you so much; I'm just totally speechless right now. I'm so glad you liked it! <3
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celebrianna [2008-08-26 01:28:20 +0000 UTC]
This...is...beautiful and poignant. Both the story and art. Thank you for capturing the essence of these two. This is so in-character. Truly sublime.
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