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Published: 2019-09-15 16:27:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1045; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 4
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She ain't the weirdest one yet
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Great job with Mabel's hair! And Gideon looks just so cute with his confused look in the 4th panel
So, this version of Pacifica thinks raining blood would be cool? Woah. I can't wait to see her reaction upon meeting Will (or Bill?) and seeing his sadistic side xD
ps: Just what is she doing in the 4th panel? Crouching?
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Thankss,glad you like Mabel's hair ^^
Btw she's actually standing XD
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You are welcome, keep it up
Oh xD
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I like the comic so far, but if I may, I would like to make a suggestion:
Make the font size of the dialogue in your story a bit smaller. It is clear that it peeks past the barrier of the speech bubbles.
Aside from that, good comic so far. 
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THank you for tellling meee,I was really worried when it comes to the dialogue T-T .That's why it's kinda big. I got scared if no one could read them. Thanks for the heads up,I'll be sure to make them smaller
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