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Thanks!! to translate this part 3 ^^Thanks to:
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
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MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
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MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
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MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
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Comments: 1014
KaylaKedziora In reply to ??? [2013-07-02 18:32:56 +0000 UTC]
omg im intrasted to see who the blue haired guy is.
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Interstellar-enigma In reply to KaylaKedziora [2013-07-03 06:51:28 +0000 UTC]
I'm pretty sure it is one of the guys from the Shadow Bolts
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KaylaKedziora In reply to Interstellar-enigma [2013-07-04 01:30:52 +0000 UTC]
omg i thoght so to
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Dragonmage-S In reply to ??? [2013-07-02 11:36:58 +0000 UTC]
Applejack needs to train Fluttershy so she can protect others.
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thespawnof66 [2013-07-01 13:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Good job! I was wondering how Rainbow's wild wild hair would look in the context of the story. But she's actually very pretty, and you've made it all make sense. I'm also very impressed with the story. I thought at first that it may have been just a retelling of "Friendship is Magic". Thanks for proving me wrong.
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alpha669 In reply to ??? [2013-06-30 05:33:54 +0000 UTC]
This is so AMAZING!!!!!!!! That shadowbolt guy on the page before was super cute! I can wait for the next chapter
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llaffer In reply to ??? [2013-06-30 02:23:00 +0000 UTC]
Love the series so far! More please!!
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somercet In reply to ??? [2013-06-27 14:14:28 +0000 UTC]
Nice job on the whole thing. And RD as a parkour maniac? An inspired translation!
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AJInu-Okami In reply to ??? [2013-06-27 08:18:13 +0000 UTC]
I think he is the leader of the Shadowbolts from the last page. That of the main one from the Wonderbolts. I don't know they both nearly look the same.
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TrueMadayar In reply to Sl33pdeprived [2013-06-26 08:28:45 +0000 UTC]
Yah, he's Chilean, and the first releases are always in Spanish. I'm trying my best to translate them (despite not knowing Spanish) as quickly as I can whenever he asks me to, so I and all the others can enjoy it in English.
Any comments on how to translate it better are appreciated!
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CrowleysPyramid In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-07-07 06:39:17 +0000 UTC]
You're doing God's work, friend.
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adeebm In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-29 04:39:27 +0000 UTC]
Translation is pretty good, but there were a couple errors and awkward phrases. Some of the sentences should be reworded for English instead of a direct translation
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TrueMadayar In reply to adeebm [2013-07-01 11:49:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I need to be more gutsy when it comes to complete rephrasing. This time around I went there with Applejack, because she's a Southern mare and should talk the talk.
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MERKLEYtheDRUNKEN In reply to ??? [2013-06-26 01:58:56 +0000 UTC]
That was amazing!
...I really liked these bully-goofbags! AJ folded them XD
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SirUrquhart In reply to ??? [2013-06-25 14:21:47 +0000 UTC]
Just keeps getting better. Also, so happy to have a really good translation again.
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YodaDragon [2013-06-24 20:56:11 +0000 UTC]
This Art... so perfect... best comic i've ever seen on this page... i love your work. (even though i dont like the water/earthbendingstuff)
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shadowthebeast In reply to ??? [2013-06-24 16:56:53 +0000 UTC]
It's amazing how good these comics are. I just can't wait for the next part to come up.
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MangafisenSasha In reply to ??? [2013-06-24 12:12:04 +0000 UTC]
OhMyGosh! PLEASE let it be Soarin! >w<
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ImaBearRaWr In reply to ??? [2013-06-23 16:24:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm making possible spoiler predictions:
Rainbow or fluttershy (all bets on Rainbow) must've had something to do with AJ's past when they were friends. But she somehow betrayed Aj and lost her loyalty and trust, so now AJ walks around with this attitude because she would never forgive the friend she lost.
Either that or AJ needs a hug owo
Can't wait for the next eaking page!!!
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Sl33pdeprived In reply to ImaBearRaWr [2013-06-26 02:17:21 +0000 UTC]
I'm making possible spoiler predictions:
Aj's family who she lost and her friends (no i could think of) didn't help her or something
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evodraconis In reply to ??? [2013-06-23 11:32:37 +0000 UTC]
I cannot gush enough about your drawing style, particularly the Japanese style manga you draw beautifully. Your layout is flawless and easy to follow. The only real complaint I have is that A.J.'s personality seems a little too abrasive. Oh, well, I'm sure there's a reason for that and I can't wait for you to delve into her backstory.
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jayx2113 In reply to ??? [2013-06-23 05:49:43 +0000 UTC]
please please please have big mac in this fic i'll love for ever if you do ^-^ also fluttermac best ship js
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Z4K474K In reply to ??? [2013-06-23 05:29:11 +0000 UTC]
as always, you are absolutely amazing!
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MythicalNine In reply to ??? [2013-06-22 22:13:28 +0000 UTC]
I love this manga so much! Can't wait for next part!
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DenDuval [2013-06-22 05:41:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice character development with Applejack, Fluttershy and RD. A good intriguing hook on Applejack's stoic outlook that had deviates from the original that makes us want to know more.
Very nice retcon in making RD a free-runner enthusiast instead of the the usual sprinter or track athlete. I love it.
A minor criticism; while the action sequences were good, it seemed kind of bland. Too many static shots (esp. on Spike's). Try for more dynamic sequences and perspective shots. Don't just use the side profile during an action scene.
Anyways, keep up the good work. I love to see more of your stuff.
(P.S. Cheeky Fluttershy is the best XD)
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Rebron-y In reply to ??? [2013-06-21 20:48:22 +0000 UTC]
I expect that Fluttershy is actually an awesome fighter, but she doesn't want to hurt and/or kill anyone.
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mauroz In reply to Rebron-y [2013-06-22 03:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Your style will be very marked in the defense
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Crydius In reply to ??? [2013-06-21 19:42:36 +0000 UTC]
DAT DUDE GOT BUCKED !!! Serves him right.
And it looks like our Shadowbolts are on the move, this is gonna be good.
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Cookie-Le-Creepe In reply to ??? [2013-06-21 13:36:55 +0000 UTC]
Shadowbolt! What hes up to now? I have a few random idea of the ending of this xD
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Cookie-Le-Creepe In reply to mauroz [2013-06-22 09:25:11 +0000 UTC]
Like, he is in love with dash, he wants her on his team ect. ect. xD
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Cookie-Le-Creepe In reply to ??? [2013-06-21 13:29:42 +0000 UTC]
I wonder who that guy is...
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