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Published: 2008-07-09 00:17:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 12541; Favourites: 296; Downloads: 76
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“Wrapped Up In Blue”What if I miss
the parade passing by
while watching the rain
fall from the sky
and don’t see all
of the clowns waving hi
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if I ignore
the call of the wild
and settle for something
a little more mild
neglecting the voice
of my inner child
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if the sun
shines on my face
while I hang it low
in a shadowy place
and I can’t feel the warmth
of its radiant grace
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if the words
that I long to hear
are uttered from lips
I find so dear
but are washed away
in a river of tears
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if I never
experience it all
while sitting precariously
perched on the wall
not daring to move
for fear I will fall
because I was wrapped up in blue?
But what if I smile,
join the parade…
Talk to the child,
step out of the shade…
listen more closely,
hear the love that I made…
I’d be happy, remembering you.
Life is full of what if's....most are pointless. Sometimes, it's worth it to question them....
Thank you to for her stock piece, [link]
And thank you very much to ~atomicsharkdesign for the use of his gorgeous Blue Rose photo, again! [link]
**NOTE!!** Thank you SO much to for her recommending this piece for a DD.
Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008
I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.
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Comments: 208
meljoy68 In reply to Moon-Willow [2011-01-03 06:51:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, thank you so much Ginger!!
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meljoy68 In reply to IRISHWSDM [2010-07-16 04:56:47 +0000 UTC]
Phil!! Thank you very, very much. I'm honored.
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Kargroth [2010-06-26 07:49:32 +0000 UTC]
well presented illistrated and put together keep up the great work and i look forward to seeing more.
my name is kargroth feel free to add me
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meljoy68 In reply to Kargroth [2010-06-26 15:04:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Kargroth. I appreciate the feedback.
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IRISHWSDM [2010-05-23 04:13:48 +0000 UTC]
Damn I don't know how I missed this Mel. Definately a DD.Very moving words thanks for sharing
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meljoy68 In reply to IRISHWSDM [2010-05-23 18:03:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for those very kind words. I still get all warm and fuzzy when I think about it. I will forever be grateful to ~impurfektion for recommending it.
I really like your idea for this feature...would you mind if it was "borrowed"?
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IRISHWSDM In reply to meljoy68 [2010-05-23 20:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Not at all looks like I might have to do some leg work on it lol If I have the time
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meljoy68 In reply to Menda2 [2009-11-02 07:24:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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luxa1324 [2009-09-28 02:49:38 +0000 UTC]
i love your poem, it relly says somthing important and thats what makes it perfect, it speks to those who listen to it awsome work
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meljoy68 In reply to luxa1324 [2009-09-28 14:00:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it and got something from it.
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DeathlyWhiteRoses [2009-07-15 03:16:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Simply amazing. I love ever bit of it.
You're right. Life is full of what ifs, and sometimes they need examining. Beautifully done.
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meljoy68 In reply to DeathlyWhiteRoses [2009-07-15 05:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. It makes my day to have someone truly like a piece.
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DeathlyWhiteRoses In reply to meljoy68 [2009-07-15 12:35:51 +0000 UTC]
I know exactly what you mean. And you deserve every bit of it. Really.
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e-CJ [2009-02-08 01:47:42 +0000 UTC]
This image has been featured here [link] as a part of my permanent watcher feature. Thank you so much for the
I appreciate it very much.
I so absolutely love and adore everything about this image. The melodic poem, the beautiful collage and how they came together with such perfect synergy. It is simply exquisite and very worthy of the DD! Congratulations.
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meljoy68 In reply to e-CJ [2009-02-08 20:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! What a wonderful thing to get in my inbox! Thank you so much for the lovely words. I'm very glad you enjoyed the poem and I thank you very much for including it in your features.
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Spectrumchaser [2008-10-16 18:32:41 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful poem coupled with a beautiful image. I have written quite a few songs, and in my mind this almost had a melody as I read it...for me it feels like lyrics. I like the way you ended on a positive and hopeful note
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meljoy68 In reply to Spectrumchaser [2008-10-17 00:20:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I'd love it if this became a song.
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Spectrumchaser In reply to meljoy68 [2008-10-17 12:46:29 +0000 UTC]
That would be pretty cool. I envision someone with a soulful (but not diva) voice and piano or stripped down acoustic.
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meljoy68 In reply to Spectrumchaser [2008-10-17 18:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh.... That WOULD sound good....
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Spectrumchaser In reply to meljoy68 [2008-10-17 19:21:08 +0000 UTC]
If I was a better singer/guitarist I'd give it a shot...but my voice isn't anything approaching soulful
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meljoy68 In reply to Spectrumchaser [2008-10-18 00:40:47 +0000 UTC]
Can you put it to music, without singing it?!? That'd be just as cool...
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meljoy68 In reply to black0roze [2008-08-21 12:52:21 +0000 UTC]
Aw, well I'm glad at least the 1st is perfect. Thanks.
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black0roze In reply to meljoy68 [2008-08-21 19:25:36 +0000 UTC]
haha i like them all i just meant u did a great job capturing the attention with the first paragraph
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meljoy68 In reply to black0roze [2008-08-21 23:01:30 +0000 UTC]
OH! Well in that case, thank you even more!
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inarasera [2008-07-20 17:25:07 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on your DD, sooo very well deserved!!! Keep writing Dear, you have a gift.
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cfosgate [2008-07-16 10:10:04 +0000 UTC]
You got a DD and I'm just finding out about it now? And I had to find out from someone else?
ooOOoo, now I get to tell people that I knew you before you became a star. Can I have your autograph?
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meljoy68 In reply to cfosgate [2008-07-16 14:58:44 +0000 UTC]
Who told?!?
Melissa (*impurfektion ) said she had suggested it for a DD, but never did I imagine it would actually get one. I was on a high for a few days...still kinda tingly!
I'll be doing a signing later on... Yeah. NOT!! I don't think poetry is going to make me a star. Only in the eyes of my friends.
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Skye-Luna In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-20 01:42:03 +0000 UTC]
Now I want YOUR autograph!!! I just heard about this too! Being Skye, I would've posted it in my journal in ALL CAPS!!! Good for you, Melanie. I'm proud of you
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meljoy68 In reply to Skye-Luna [2008-07-20 07:11:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Skye-Luna.
The shock's warn off some, but I still get a little jolt when I get a new comment on it.
The whole DD thing is kind of surreal...only y'all here in DA get it...I tried to convey the excitement to my Mom and Sister...they thought it was "nice", but couldn't quite get the big deal. Oh well.
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Skye-Luna In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-20 15:58:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I get it! I'd be on cloud 9 myself! But you're right, other than my Da friends, NOBODY would understand!!!
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meljoy68 In reply to Skye-Luna [2008-07-20 18:26:14 +0000 UTC]
Which makes my DA friends even that much more valued!!!
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Skye-Luna In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-20 22:12:27 +0000 UTC]
I completely agree! Real people suck!
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meljoy68 In reply to Skye-Luna [2008-07-21 00:54:56 +0000 UTC]
Well, family excluded. I kinda like them.
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Skye-Luna In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-21 01:08:21 +0000 UTC]
I guess I like mine... MOST of the time!
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cfosgate In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-16 18:54:49 +0000 UTC]
Who told? I saw it in Melissa's journal. I was very happy that I'd fav'd it before you got the DD.
You have a right to be as tingly as you desire. It's truly a great piece. You'll always be a star in my eyes. (yea, that does sound kinda mushy doesn't it)
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cfosgate In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-16 19:30:28 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Then I'll lay off the testosterone gel for today.
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buyobabyboo [2008-07-14 06:47:14 +0000 UTC]
you wrote this O_O i seriously thought it must be some anceint tried and true lived through the ages poem or something, this is awesoooooome -watches-
you gets a dance!
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meljoy68 In reply to buyobabyboo [2008-07-14 08:19:33 +0000 UTC]
OO! I likes the dance!!
I tend to dance like this
Thank you very much for the compliment. "An ancient tried and true lived through the ages poem"...I like the sound of that!!! Like Shakespeare. Works for me!!!
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