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meljoy68Wrapped Up In Blue Visual Poem

Published: 2008-07-09 00:17:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 12541; Favourites: 296; Downloads: 76
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Description “Wrapped Up In Blue”

What if I miss
the parade passing by
while watching the rain
fall from the sky
and don’t see all
of the clowns waving hi
because I was wrapped up in blue?

What if I ignore
the call of the wild
and settle for something
a little more mild
neglecting the voice
of my inner child
because I was wrapped up in blue?

What if the sun
shines on my face
while I hang it low
in a shadowy place
and I can’t feel the warmth
of its radiant grace
because I was wrapped up in blue?

What if the words
that I long to hear
are uttered from lips
I find so dear
but are washed away
in a river of tears
because I was wrapped up in blue?

What if I never
experience it all
while sitting precariously
perched on the wall
not daring to move
for fear I will fall
because I was wrapped up in blue?

But what if I smile,
join the parade…
Talk to the child,
step out of the shade…
listen more closely,
hear the love that I made…
I’d be happy, remembering you.




Life is full of what if's....most are pointless. Sometimes, it's worth it to question them....

Thank you to for her stock piece, [link]

And thank you very much to ~atomicsharkdesign for the use of his gorgeous Blue Rose photo, again! [link]



**NOTE!!** Thank you SO much to for her recommending this piece for a DD.




Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008



I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.


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Comments: 208

meljoy68 In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 19:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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rabbit145 In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-26 19:59:19 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Not a problem. See you around!

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sinuosa-mente In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 13:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow!My compliments!

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meljoy68 In reply to sinuosa-mente [2008-07-13 19:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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damien-c In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 13:08:14 +0000 UTC]

so well deserved DD

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meljoy68 In reply to damien-c [2008-07-13 19:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

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deviouslili In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 11:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Melanie!!! Congrats on the DD!! Holy hannah!! YAY!

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meljoy68 In reply to deviouslili [2008-07-13 19:14:04 +0000 UTC]

I was floored!!!!!!

Thank you, Stephanie.

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deviouslili In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 19:46:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! I bet you were!!

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femketje In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 11:01:43 +0000 UTC]

great!

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meljoy68 In reply to femketje [2008-07-13 19:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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FireDitto In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 10:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, and well deserving of the DD.

Thank you.

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meljoy68 In reply to FireDitto [2008-07-13 19:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I did get your note, btw. I will go check out the link and give it some thought! Thank you very much for that!

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FireDitto In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-14 06:37:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.
And awesome. I'm glad you'll consider it =}

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thenailedone In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 09:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Well deserved DD...

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meljoy68 In reply to thenailedone [2008-07-13 10:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

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chemical-rainbow In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 08:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is one of the best visual poetry pieces I have seen. Keep it up, and I hope to see more of your daily deviations! You really deserve it.

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meljoy68 In reply to chemical-rainbow [2008-07-13 08:40:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm in shock. Thank you very much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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chemical-rainbow In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 08:57:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem. I do hope I can critique on the poem itself, but I'm more of an art critic.

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meljoy68 In reply to chemical-rainbow [2008-07-13 10:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Feedback is good, I hope you feel comfortable enough to offer yours.

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chemical-rainbow In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-20 10:54:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the inquisitive tone used in your poem where it seems like the thing/person in question is very curious to know the answers. It gives a childlike questioning, and the way you divided the lines makes the flow of the poem good.

I really like to write in free verse, but I happen to be more of a person who writes and reads prose rather than poetry.

I told you I was an art critic.

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meljoy68 In reply to chemical-rainbow [2008-07-20 18:08:34 +0000 UTC]

I've tried to write in prose, I have a few pieces, but most anything I attempt has a rhyme in it somewhere...I can't seem to help it. I do have a few pieces that are true free verse, no rhymes, no meter, but not many.

I thank you for the feedback. It was not critical in a way that attacked, for which I am appreciative.

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chemical-rainbow In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-25 14:27:17 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. We all are good in different things. I feel happy that you appreciated my comment.

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SilentPlea In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 08:03:58 +0000 UTC]

OMG MEL!!!!!! You really got a DD! I'm so excited for you!!!! Congrats girl!

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 08:23:46 +0000 UTC]

WHAT?!??! Shut Up. You're kidding, right??!?

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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 08:24:35 +0000 UTC]

MEL!!!!! YOU GOT A DD!!!!!!!!!!

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 08:33:27 +0000 UTC]

You're not kidding!! My fingers are stuttering!!!!

Omg.

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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 08:36:14 +0000 UTC]

awwwww...I'm so glad that I was still on here when you saw it!

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 08:41:33 +0000 UTC]

How am I supposed to go to sleep NOW?!?! I had to send Melissa a note to thank her. I wouldn't have seen it if you and Erik hadn't said anything!! Thank you Shelley!!!

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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 08:43:20 +0000 UTC]

I think sleep is gonna be hard tonight for you! I'll stay up and keep you company if you want

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 08:50:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm wired now!!

A DD....holy shit. And this is the first time I've had more than 2 pages of msgs....I know that sounds corny but it's almost as big a deal!

I love you guys!!!

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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 08:51:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm so proud of you. I knew your stuff was good! Love you Mel!!!

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 10:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh Shelley this is insane!! Someone actually downloaded it to their mobile phone... I'm floored, truly. It was nice to know my friends liked what I wrote, but wow...

And I love you too!!!

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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 18:04:45 +0000 UTC]

somebody downloaded it to their phone? that is so they could see it all of the time...I bet it's their background.
are you still in shock today?

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 19:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Uh huh!!!! I had 123 new favs this morning... I can't type anymore, my fingers have gone numb...but I am not complaining!! I don't think I've felt this giddy about writing since my very first sonnet won a contest...in 1983!!!

You guys rock, you know that right?!? I have some of the best people to call friends!!

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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 19:24:55 +0000 UTC]

uh oh...Mel! will this take you to lalala? how will you be able to write sad now?

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 19:39:07 +0000 UTC]

OH no!! You're right?? What will I do??!?!


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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 19:41:03 +0000 UTC]

what a terrible obstacle to overcome

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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-13 20:28:20 +0000 UTC]

I know! *sigh* I will have to find a way to get sad, I guess....


NOT.

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ecamouse37 In reply to ??? [2008-07-13 07:27:00 +0000 UTC]

very pretty and the poem was was great

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meljoy68 In reply to ecamouse37 [2008-07-13 08:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

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impurfektion In reply to ??? [2008-07-12 19:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Ok. You went and did it. I am sitting here literally with tears in my eyes. One of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read ... anywhere. I am almost speechless. I can't even begin to describe how this touches me. It is a wonderful reminder to live life and not ... damn I really don't know how to explain it. The depth of feeling this provokes. It's amazing, Mel. I hope you don't mind if I print this out. I'm off to find a tissue. Thank you.

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meljoy68 In reply to impurfektion [2008-07-12 20:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Well heck, Melissa...now you went and made ME cry! Wow...Thank you seems really lame. I'm extremely flattered that you found this so moving. This was one of those moments when I didn't really do anything but let the words come. I was just a tool...

And yes please, by all means, print it!

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impurfektion In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 00:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Printed. I shared it with my husband and he said, and I quote ... "this is really good. Your friend has some major talent."

Just thought I'd share.

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meljoy68 In reply to impurfektion [2008-07-13 00:47:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. I'm giggly. Thank you for sharing that! Tell your husband I said thank you, too!

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impurfektion In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 00:57:22 +0000 UTC]

Ha! I will.

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mdandree In reply to ??? [2008-07-12 15:38:44 +0000 UTC]

I have to tell you again that this poem was the most inspiring piece of prose/poetry i've read in a long time!

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meljoy68 In reply to mdandree [2008-07-12 19:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sounds so tame. But thank you!

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mdandree In reply to ??? [2008-07-12 15:13:48 +0000 UTC]

That was the best writting i've seen yet on DA! It made me wish I could have come up with those words myself! Very well written!

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meljoy68 In reply to mdandree [2008-07-12 15:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!! That made a nice start to the day!

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