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“Wrapped Up In Blue”What if I miss
the parade passing by
while watching the rain
fall from the sky
and don’t see all
of the clowns waving hi
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if I ignore
the call of the wild
and settle for something
a little more mild
neglecting the voice
of my inner child
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if the sun
shines on my face
while I hang it low
in a shadowy place
and I can’t feel the warmth
of its radiant grace
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if the words
that I long to hear
are uttered from lips
I find so dear
but are washed away
in a river of tears
because I was wrapped up in blue?
What if I never
experience it all
while sitting precariously
perched on the wall
not daring to move
for fear I will fall
because I was wrapped up in blue?
But what if I smile,
join the parade…
Talk to the child,
step out of the shade…
listen more closely,
hear the love that I made…
I’d be happy, remembering you.
Life is full of what if's....most are pointless. Sometimes, it's worth it to question them....
Thank you to for her stock piece, [link]
And thank you very much to ~atomicsharkdesign for the use of his gorgeous Blue Rose photo, again! [link]
**NOTE!!** Thank you SO much to for her recommending this piece for a DD.
Original poem by me, © melanie joy 2008
I give permission to ~Unique-Manip , =PoetryPlease , and *Visual-Poetry-Club to display this in their galleries.
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Comments: 208
mdandree In reply to ??? [2008-07-12 15:23:19 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome and you made a start to mine! I write also but am finally back in the mood to draw! Your poem gave me the inspiration for my drawings today that will become Christmas presents!
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meljoy68 In reply to mdandree [2008-07-12 15:25:58 +0000 UTC]
Now THAT is a compliment. What a lovely idea for a Christmas present. I've turned poems into wall hangings and given those, but my drawings would only be good for comic relief!
I haven't written or drawn much in recent years, most of my pieces are ancient, although some have been revised.
I'm on my way to visit your gallery. Thank you for visiting mine!!
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mdandree In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-12 15:31:06 +0000 UTC]
You may be better than you think! Your writtings relect your talent! I draw on glass & frame the finished illustration about an inch in front of the background to show it's done on glass. (You can do it too!)
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meljoy68 In reply to mdandree [2008-07-13 04:39:11 +0000 UTC]
I've seen your gallery...I couldn't do what you do!! That's amazing. I'll stick to words.
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mdandree In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-13 21:18:22 +0000 UTC]
Hey, your words are the inspiration to draw!
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atomicsharkdesign In reply to ??? [2008-07-10 20:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that is a wonderful poem and composition.
I am honored that you wanted to use my photo.
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meljoy68 In reply to atomicsharkdesign [2008-07-10 20:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Dino!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hi!! So it's ok that I 'borrowed' it again?
I'm honored that you let me! It wouldn't be the same without it.
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cfosgate In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 14:27:50 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful. I'm so humbled whenever I see your work. Your writings tend to touch me deeply. Hmm, perhaps a book is in your future.
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meljoy68 In reply to cfosgate [2008-07-09 20:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh from your mouth to God's ears!!! I made my own once, but it was not shelf worthy! I'd love to have a chapbook...but to be honest, I think my stuff is up to snuff for a book. But I like the thought!!!
Thank you, Christian. Your words touch me deeply as well.
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cfosgate In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 20:58:30 +0000 UTC]
Careful, you make me sound like some sort of sexual predator "touch me deeply".
I swear I didn't touch her officer!
Anyway, I'm glad you were "touched" *damn, there he goes again*
Heck, keep up the good work.
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meljoy68 In reply to cfosgate [2008-07-09 21:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Ok now I can't read cuz I'm laughing too hard...
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cfosgate In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 21:14:04 +0000 UTC]
Careful, you could hurt yourself and then you'll be like me
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meljoy68 In reply to cfosgate [2008-07-09 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey!!!!!!!! It's a Upside down!!!!! How cool is that!! I gotta put that on my shoutboard!
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VisualPoetress In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 03:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Awesome poem and very nicely displayed in the overlapping beautiful images
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-09 03:52:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!! I wasn't sure if I would like how it turned out... was it easy enough to read?!?
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 05:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Yep it is
and I don't even have on my glasses ....
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-09 06:16:45 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes you just never know how it's going to look on someone else's monitor, you know what I mean?!?
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 07:14:51 +0000 UTC]
I was able to read it fine, this I can't though: [link] the shadowing effect makes it hard, and is really a balancing act finding the right color so it stands out. I use white giggle I am lazy
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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-09 08:12:41 +0000 UTC]
Yikes!!!! That hurt my eyes! I tend to go for the fancy fonts, which really shows up poorly, so have to remind myself to save the fancy for titles and such and use a simpler font for text...I'm OCD about silly things, so will spend hours getting the colors just right.
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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 08:26:45 +0000 UTC]
I know how you feel, I am a perfectionist about putting out something that is Optically appealing
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tr1guy In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 03:15:18 +0000 UTC]
"I seen a lot of women
But she never escaped my mind and I just grew
Tangled up in blue."
Only Dylan song I liked... and your title sparked that lyric in my head... it works that way sometimes... Anyway, great work!
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meljoy68 In reply to tr1guy [2008-07-09 03:46:29 +0000 UTC]
Sweet!! I inspired a Dylan lyric flashback!! Righteous. Thank you very much.
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netta43 In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 01:52:52 +0000 UTC]
Amazing Mel, It really makes me think. A lot! Such beautiful words and fantastic visual.
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meljoy68 In reply to netta43 [2008-07-09 03:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Lennette!
Dino let me use his photo to make a Myspace layout... I've wanted to make it a stand-alone visual piece for a while, finally got around to it. His photos are amazing...unfortunately he hasn't gotten hardly any of them up here, yet.
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netta43 In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 11:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Thats awesome! I'll have to go and check it out. I can't remember the last time I was on skem9.
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meljoy68 In reply to netta43 [2008-07-09 12:50:47 +0000 UTC]
I haven't been on in ages........
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faeriecrone In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 01:50:01 +0000 UTC]
O ... this is incredible. Really, really good.
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meljoy68 In reply to faeriecrone [2008-07-09 03:48:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Music to my soul...
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eremite1-61803399 In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 01:46:28 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible. It speaks to me. To my soul. Thank you.
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meljoy68 In reply to eremite1-61803399 [2008-07-09 03:49:12 +0000 UTC]
And that speaks to mine. Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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meeden In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 01:34:41 +0000 UTC]
words so pretty they melt within the images
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meljoy68 In reply to meeden [2008-07-09 03:49:38 +0000 UTC]
That's lovely!!!! Thank you very much for that.
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deviouslili In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 12:53:17 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, Melanie hun. Very much.
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SilentPlea In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 00:33:12 +0000 UTC]
awwww Mel this is another beautiful poem
*sigh* I love it
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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-09 03:55:15 +0000 UTC]
That's a good sigh, right? Thanks, Shelley. This is kinda one of my favorites...I'm glad you like it!
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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 03:57:56 +0000 UTC]
yes it's a good sigh I love your stuff, you put words down and I can almost feel the emotion from them.
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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-09 04:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh now that's music to me!!!!
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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-09 04:23:14 +0000 UTC]
OMG that's Michael!!! I just realized that.
At first glance I thought it was a dancing storm trooper!!!
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SilentPlea In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-09 04:54:10 +0000 UTC]
a dancing storm trooper would be good too!
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meljoy68 In reply to SilentPlea [2008-07-09 06:17:39 +0000 UTC]
I thought I saw one but maybe it was MJ all the time and I just didn't know it...
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JustAMom65 In reply to ??? [2008-07-09 00:28:35 +0000 UTC]
Absoloutely amazing!!!! Beautiful images and lyrical writing!!!
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